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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

She was in Sri Lanka? :O I did a lil dance on reading that 😛. Arhi in America, in Britain, obviously in India but in SL? 😃. That made me happy coz I'm from Sri Lanka.

But anyway, that was my random rambling 😆. I love this! I thought it would be about Shyam at first but then realised it's not about what happened in the distant past and then it's consequences on their relationship. It's great I love the way you've written the flashback. Hope you update soon and that they manage to sort out their problems.

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

That was Superb update...Beautifully written.. loved it

continue soon

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

wow just read the 2 parts n they are absolutely awsuuum...simply brilliant...could you please add me to your pms/buddy list for future pms...buddy req sent...thnx

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xXShriyaXx

@xXShriyaXx

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wonderful ff...pls add me to your pm list:)

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riushibabo

@riushibabo

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

its amazing plz update soon

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Very well written, Khushi's agony can be felt.

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RandomGirl

@RandomGirl

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

brilliant update...awesome writing...

waiting for the next part...

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: psychopinks
She was in Sri Lanka? :O I did a lil dance on reading that 😛. Arhi in America, in Britain, obviously in India but in SL? 😃. That made me happy coz I'm from Sri Lanka.
But anyway, that was my random rambling 😆. I love this! I thought it would be about Shyam at first but then realised it's not about what happened in the distant past and then it's consequences on their relationship. It's great I love the way you've written the flashback. Hope you update soon and that they manage to sort out their problems.

LOL I am from Sri Lanka too! :D Haha.