Keepsake. (Arhi): Chapter2 :PG14 *NEW

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chahaat.

@chahaat.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awesome start! Can't wait for more :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Interesting story!

i hope khush is a pure virgin...now...hope shyaam has not forced her...poor gal...she is only Arnav's...c'mn...

lovely prolongue...

edited!

not lovely update...it was disgusting update...khushi too is feeling d same way...!!!!!

lovely updates yet to come isnt it...!!!

i think it would be...

awsome update...

now dats gud!!!

Edited by roshnidiya - 13 years ago

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

What the! Shyam is khushi's husband?? Why??? How?? Where is arnav???
The way creep was touching her..ewww 🤢 poor khushi..she shud escape soon..hw dare he lock her in d room😡

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Oh tis is going to be very intriguing ride!!!

Waiting for "tonight"...maybe it will bring some ray of hope in her stifling existence??

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

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yay me first n for the first time in any of your work...yay...🥳

as for the update dear...awsuuum...loved it very much and she ran away...wow...now she is free...i feel sorry for her...shyam is such a crap...absolutely loved the update n yay she is going to meet arnie in the next update...now i am even more excited...loved it very much dear n thnx 4da pm...

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

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Yay! I'm second 🥳

Okay I'm sorry, I know I'm late. Sorry Sancho *holds ears*

Back to the update.

Ughhh! I hate Shyam, I want to strangle him to death. He's such a 🤬 Okay on a side note you are writing his character very well coz I'm hating it to the core & that is what you want..don't you? So you have successfully accomplished your mission. Hats off to you!

Shyam is really pissing me off, he choses clothes for her? Really? Idiot!😡

And khushi..sigh..I feel really bad for her. He tortures her so much & the worst part is that she has to wear such uncomfortable clothes, all coz of him. Disgusting!

Good that she ran away, whatever maybe the outcome at least she's out of that cage. I hope she'll be fine.

But I feel a bit scary too. You mentioned about her clothes & that gives me a bad feeling, let's wait & read.

And Arnav & khushi meet in the next update? *does a happy dance* Wow! He'll see her in the red saree ☺️ Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

Update soon! 🤗

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samia19

@samia19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awesome, can't wait for next part

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Gim

@SansShyam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

murphy this is a very good work..i hope u update this often...👏 👏

the suspense is very well brought out and yep its a thriller.. loved reading it...i hope d future story flows in a believable way so that this story becomes more convincing..thanx for the pm and i really enjoyed reading it..