ArHi SS: Unnamed *Completed*

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Awesome chapter!

Though Arnav did threaten her, i'm still unsure as to whether she'll come at the party at not 😛

Haha glad to see Shyam is not such a bad guy in this one. Am actually beginning to like his character in this one 😳

Cant wait for the next part.

P.S Rasgulla? Though i don't know you much, but i would like to say that your story is amazing!

I cant believe you didn't post it yourself.

Anyways, amazing work 😳

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Your sister is an awesome writer!!

Amazing work and very nice update!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

another amazing update... more than the actual action, the asides by each and every character are what are really hilarious! the one that really made my day was: Poor soul. Jay Prakshji will definitely get nightmares tonight for no fault of his. Om Prakashji, like the mama's boy that he is, will complain to his mom in his native village. His mom will call ME and cry for an hour that she had sent her sons to the Raizada household with a lot of hopes and dreams and that such MENTAL ABUSE was not what she had bargained for… I don't need that. Not with the anniversary around the corner… what a characterisation of the prakashs and their mother 🤣!

love lavanya psyching herself up to tell arnav khushi won't be coming to work just as much as I loved the khushi-buaji convo and scene! this khushi is just awesome, knowing arnav's good points and not falling prey to his blackmail... both arnav and khushi are lost in thoughts of the other but refuse to acknowledge their feelings... these versions of anjali and shyam are adorable: the strong anjali giving arnav a piece of her mind when he throws a childish tantrum, and a shyam solely interested in getting it on with his wife 😆!

looks like humor and wit is abundant in your family... hopefully your sister will get over her shyness once she acknowledges to herself that she's a truly amazing writer and that she'll then post this work under her own name!

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

hey...amazing update !!!!!

comon stop troubling ur sis and start publishing on ur own...ur work is fab !!!!

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Lmaooo I just luv Khushi <3 wht has she done to poor ASR 🤣 can't wait till thy all meet Khushi x update soon xoxoox

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

nice update..

i have added your sister and im sure with the reply shes getting she wil surely update this story on her own post lol..

by the way i am loving this khushi ;D

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Arshisarunrocks

@Arshisarunrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Woohhoo!! That's super-dooper awesome!! Genius sisters I must say! You both are so talented! Totally loved the update...👏

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Hey Badi behen and chotti behen... I don't care who posts it as long I get my dose of unnamed... man Rasgulla (since I dont know your name) you are super talented...love this story to bits... Lazy stop being lazy and post on behalf of your sugery sister ( lol I didn't mean it but saying the line was fun)

@Rasgulla stop being shy hun... we won't bite... promise