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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

ow awsuuum dear...loved it very much...tell your sis that it is indeed simply brilliant n she does not need to be shy...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

im eagerly waiting to knw what happens next.. update soon
Both of u can alternate.. once u can update n next time ur sister can :)

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saba

@ASR6262

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

awesome update
very interesting story

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

i soo luv it...!lazyleaves's sister u r an awesome riter .just lyk ur sis ..!

i luv this arnav/asr

continue soonish...

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Rasgullah JI i love ur SS n ur chotee is a darling but get off her back!!!😆 U r equally talented n i

m very kanjoos in giving compliments but i genuinely must say i like wat i am reading, good narration n style, good English n in sum awesome job. So plz update soon by urself without chotee's help!!!😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Awesome update, can't wait to read about their encounter & Khushi meeting rest of ASR's family :) Going to be explosive by the sound of it. 😃

P.S. Please ask you sister not to be shy, she is doing an awesome job, but even if she is going through you, it's ok, what are sisters for?? 😃

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

It's a really cute, funny & light ss.. Very nicely written & a cute concept!!!

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Daspayel

@Daspayel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

The dialogues are simply gr8
Did Prakashbro's mum thought that she married off her sons in RM?? :/
Arnav texting Shyam who is just sitting in the otherside of the table lol
most fav part is Angry ASR nd ofc ASR burgnng wid khushi :*

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Daspayel

@Daspayel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

I knew it! I knew it!!!

I somehow had this feeling all along that this was written by your sister, Zehra! Cos you've mentioned her so many times when she has nagged you into writing awesome stuff! Thanks for the PM! Now Shuush! Off you run, Zehra... I'm talking to your sis now! 😳

Heyyy Zehra's sis!! Fari here!

You're doing an awesome job with this one! If this one was written by me, I would've proudly announced it to everyone that this amazing SS is being written by me! 😉

You write everyone's inner thoughts sooo well! I don't think I've read any other work with such an awesome job on it!

Hehehe! I loved how Anjali told Arnav, 'you should've thought of that before throwing a tantrum 🤣 Good one! And love how Arnav's acting like a tryical loverboy! Can't wait to find out the reason why Khushi's so mad at him 😳

Pls add me in your buddy list and PM me yourself! Pls! Pretty pls 😳 See I even wrote you such a long comment... Well, it is long by my standards 😆