OS: You won Arnavji..(Based n today's epi)Pt2Updtd - Page 14

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg the first part made me cry but the 2nd part broke me , I felt every emotion that she was experiencing , well done it is indeed a very talented writer who can get her readers so involved emotionally . This os was one the best I have read so far , ur use of vocabulary was brilliant to bring out the essence of the story . A masterpiece in my opinion ,this piece really touched me ,I read a lot of novels and os ,ss,ff very few can reach out and pierce my heart like this one did. Thank u for this incredible os

Originally posted by: gunjanmkj

I'm sorry sunara..i cnt write much abt this..it reduced me to tears n i guess dat explains evrthn..
i am angry with arnav frm dat episode where he reminds khushi of the contract again..so he's pissing me off totally wid wat he's doin nw to gt her back..its nt hw one redeems himslf n wins someone back..i knw they r dffrnt frm nrmal couples..bt still its irritating to c khushi gttng blackmailed bcz she's in need of money..idk wat d cvs hv in mind..bt i guess dis os shows hw to mk him undrstand his mstakes..i just hope such extremes measures r nt needed..

wow! dear awesome os...loved it...

1st part was helplessness ...2nd part was really too much emotional...excellent writing...loved it...