The Memories of A Butterfly#2 Ch15-14/12 Updated!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

the team raizada was a masterstroke! but loved that you've shown khushi taking on niharika all on her own with arnav's silent support... only at the end does he flip on seeing how hurt khushi is... am a bit confused: is hrishikesh khushi's birth father and when did he leave? this update has been so long in coming that I have forgotten the name of the father you'd given in the first few chapters... thank god dia has some sense of fellow feeling for her kid sister... love how you don't focus on just the leads but that all the other characters have an important role to play... their portions in the story don't take away from it nor does it seem forced!

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varshapan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

am so glad to see this update.. i was chewing my nails worrying how khushi is going to handle niharika... but i needn't have worried. she handled her with grace and grit. and what was left was handled by her husband arnav singh raizada. oh i am waiting to see arnav extract his pound of flesh for hurting his wife.

lovely. also, somehow this would take their relationship a bit more further. great!

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Gargeee! U FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!

I never thought I wd get a pm from you for memories...!!!!!!!!!!! It's like u had forgotten abt it n second chances!!!!!

Lovely!!! Yippee!!! Worth the wait!!!! If only the parting shot was khushi's and not niharikas , it wd hv been too good but I'm sure you have a Reason for that and the reason wd be to bring these two closer in the future updates cos am sure this topic is gonna come up between the two of them !!!!!!

Wow!!!! N now... Wd be even better if second chances is updated!!! Hehehe... I know am being greedy , but right now, I can lap up all I can, esp with my favourite stories ... N these 2 are among them !!!!

After what's been shown on the show... These are like nectar!!!!!!!

Thnx a bunch !!!!! Love you!!🤗

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

That was a beautiful chapter, the unspoken love, understanding between them is overwhelming. I like how Arnav is so effected by her laugh, her tears, every emotion that might flit through his wife's face. Terrific!

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Thanks for the update after a very long time...

Loved the way Arnav n khushi supported each other...

U r gone niharika, how dare u insult Arnav's wife. But tht girl did her homework well I guess... She sure knows khushis past unlike Arnav...

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

So Niharika is a cougar...gross *shudder*

Go Team Raizada!!! If I was in Khushi's position I would have punched the living daylights out of Niharika but I'm not so lucky for her...yes I do know she's a fictional character...Let us see what the future holds...

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

WOOT WOOT!!! Khushi REALLY showed that Niharika b#*&@ didn't she?! And Arnav's reaction through it all was amusing to read. He protected what was his. Fiercely. And that line right there made me smile like a loon! LOL! :D I HAVE to know what he does to Niharika to make her pay.

I don't get why no one SAW that Arnav and Khushi are actually sort of happy with being with each other. And what is Dia's angle? It makes no sense! I'm lost! LOL! :D

I'm dying to see Aakash going 'ASR' on Payal! HAHA!!

That pace is fine hon. This is exactly what I would expect a couple who have been married in such extreme circumstances to behave. So well done on that!

Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more! :)

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citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Did think that Khushi would be more than able to handle Niharika. Loved how this little encounter with a hostile force pushed Arnav and Khushi a little closer. But should have known that Arnav would not just sit back and watch the carnage...so Aman to the rescue courtesy his boss.

Great update.

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asdfjkl

@asdfjkl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Aman to the rescue...I swear, that guy should be rocking a cape

Loved how Arnav fully supported Khushi and was there for her. Their unspoken conversation was wonderful, and it really showed how much they have gotten to know each other and how they're getting more comfortable.

I'm confused about Khushi's reaction about the "lucky" comment that Niharika made. I'm not sure if I missed something or it is still needing to be discussed?