The Memories of A Butterfly#2 Ch15-14/12 Updated!

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segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Loved it. Nothing less than what I expected. Smart putdown of that Niharika character, won't deign to call her a woman.

Can I take a guess that Khushi is adopted in your story too and that is why Niharika's bitchy comment at the end and Khushi's hurt reaction?

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awesome update loved how asr and khushi were so in-tuned with each other that b***h doing so much to put khushi down loved khushi comeback awesome but the last part where she reminded khushi about her name was so bad awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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9424976

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

You never fail to impress me! Great update. I could just feel the emotions coming from everyone. I could literally imagine Arnav holding on to Khushi and her feelings towards that action. Loved the way Khushi handled the touchy subject, yet why did she react so differently towards Gupta? Wondering when Dia and the brother makes an entry into their lives! Loved it a ton!

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Tia.0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Love love this fiesty Khushi. I like woman with spunk and substance. She is all that with class. You are right when you say that class is what some people are born with. It has nothing to do where and in what circumstances they were born. Either you have it or you don't (sounds like Lycra ad... lol)... Looking forward to see ASR's revenge on Niharika. She better leave the country pronto...

Babes, you really need to update this a lot quicker. This is one kick ass piece of writing and my favourite FF here so far. Please update soon.

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shree10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Loved the update. I was looking forward to this update for a looo...oong time! I really love this story and I thought due to shades of grey and false impressions, you would just forget it1 but thank God you didn't!
Please please keep this story on your radar and give periodic updates. I love it as much as shades of grey.
Thanks again for the update and PM.

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

interesting! First we have a cougar thing going. From the looks of it - a cougar hell-bent on revenge. Dressed to nines too! Armani! Classic white and black! I like! I like! **eyes sparkles**
Ermm.. okay. Story. We talk story now. Arnav - the eternal businessman. I like how he measures everything. Khushi... awww, classy! I loved how she handled it! I might have done things differently - teeth and claws flashing but hey! I like her ways better and I love you for it! As I've said before, I love Hrishikesh. There's something utterly brotherly about him. I know where from your inspiration... Of course I do and I know that you have a wonderful example to use but it's a credit to you that you had encapsulated his good things so prettily in fiction. Dia... where did she come from? However, gotta say it: I like how you kept negativity away from the main characters and heyyy! Lookie here! Akash grew a spine! :D

Wonderful update darling!

Loads of love.

Edited by bingala - 13 years ago

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

An awesome read this sunday morn!!!

Loved the way Khushi stood all strong n tall in front of niharika!!!👏👏But, the last comment made her flinch...is this a sign in her past? wonder why her mother behaves in that with her??...this sends a hint to that ques...i liked the way you described Niharika-Khushi dressing showing the acquired taste vis-a-vis the inborn class that khushi's possessed!!!!😃cant wait 4 Akash to turn into a true-blue Raizada...atleast he'll have his spine in here...if not the show!!!😛Thanks for the PM...will wait 4 your next offering in peace!!

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shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

loved how Khushi handled Nihaarika... waiting to see her payback..

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

*gasps*
Get lost, Garguuu!

I was the one who interviewed Arhi?!!
I am so hyappyyy! :D
I loved how Khushi handled Niharika... And those lines about anger... I need to remember them the next time I feel like wringing the neck of my boss!! ;) :P
And Harshu ijh proud abouts Arnav Bitua too, hello hai bye bye!! :D
Thanks for the pm... :)