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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome update

Thanks for the pm

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Ameena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Superb part 👏...

Airport part was so Sweet 😳...

Love it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Aanchal singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

amazing update.

wow amar is so, caring

thanks for pm update nxt part soon.

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raina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

awsome update...
Thankx 4 d pm...
Update soon...

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shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

awsome update
Awww dey are in temple n i lyk ashirwad part alot
n dat flashback...hahaha shati behaving lyk a small child
loved it alot<3

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hey beautiful ppl out der, hw r u all?? I knw right nw der is quiet saddness in d forum nd i am sad 2 abt it...so it was an off fr me i thought of updating next chapter bt i am upset so less amt of comments nd likes fr last update guys itna bura tha kya?? anyways here u go wid new update...

chapter8

Mukti: yaad aa rahi hai na uski...

Amar:Hmm...
Issilye toh peechle 3 months se besharmo ki tarha tumhare ghar mein uske room mein pada hua hun, Damn i miss her so much, bas 2 months more left for her 2 cumback...

Mukti (smiled at him) 😊 Ufff!!! lover boy, mind it tumhe apne yahan issiliye rehne diya hai kyunki mom-dad ko shakti ki kami mehsus ho rahi thi aur hume ek bakra chahiye tha jo shakti ko replace karsake & u knw wat shakti jo kaam kabhi nahi karti thi, woh bhi tum karte ho...( to dis amar raised his eyebrows questioning her)
Arrey!! humare ghar ke naye Ramu kaka bann gaye ho...😛
Amar pouted... "Hey dat was so mean muks..."

Mukti: Ab jo sach hai toh hai, issilye is doubt mein mat rehna ki hume tum par daya aagayi, humari apni sari problems ka tum ek hi solution the samjhe naa...( she said wid full on attitude)
she looked at him sternly😳 & den both of dem laughed der heads off...😆
but soon dey had 2 control demselves as ppl around dem were glaring at dem very angirly..😡
Now suddenly mukti remembered..
"Hey humne use to bataya hi nahi..."
Amar: ohh!! freak.. she wud surely kill us just msg her 2 cum online, I vil bring d lappy..

As soon as dey got demselves connected 2 Skype & saw shakti online Amar opened his window & saw her drinking water as she was doing practice nd currently was in d academy, he becums so engrossed in her trance😍 dat he didnt know in excitement wat he had said...

Amar: hey shakti, kaisi ho??
Congrats baby boy born hua hai...( he shouted just lyk a non stop train)
As soon as shakti heard him, she spitted d water out of her mouth & shouted..." wat?? 😡kunwar tumhara kisi aur se baby born hua, kaun hai woh?? kya naam hai uska?? u cheater, back stabber, ab mujhe samjh aaya y u were so adamant on sending me away frm u so dat on my back u can continue wid other girls na, u liar, i hate u...( she is continuously blabbered & Amar tried 2 stop her but she didnt stopped her accusations, at last a frustated mukti spoke up)

Mukti:😡 Will u shutup?? hyper lady (& shifting her gaze 2 Amar).. U r such a fool at least news toh dhangse diya karo..
she happily turned towards screen😃.. shak's Neeti ko aaj afternoon mein baby boy hua hai, aur hum sab yahin hospital mein hai...congrats hum dono maasi ban gaye hai shak's.. (she exictedly said)
Amar butted in
"Aur main, Mama cum mausa ban gaya hun Yippie🥳..."

both d girls luked at him nd laughed😆 at his childishness...

Shakti:Congrats both of u, I'm so happy, Bt kunwar wat was dat mama cum mausa i mean yeh kaisa ajeeb relation hai??baby confuse hojayega..( she asked confusingly)

Amar replied..."Arrey yarr tum bhi na dekho neeti is lyk a sister 2 me remember she was d first one who treated me as a brother so in dat way mama but ur her sister nd maasi of d little one toh fir main mausa...(she blushed really hard hearing dat)

Shakti☺️ in order 2 cum over her embarassement instantly snapped at him.. "But yeh toh buhat complicated hai baby ke liye kunwar kuch aur socho... "

meanwhile he was thinking🤓 mukti came up wid her own question... "Uhh... oye hero yeh toh bata neeti ko tu apni sister manta hai hai na..( he nodded in approval) nd shakti is her sister in actual so fir toh woh teri bhi..."
but b4 she cud say further amar covered her mouth wid his hands... "Oye tu chup reh aisa...aisa nahi hosakta bas... aur maine name soch liya hai baby mujhe 'Masa' bulayega means MAMA ka MA nd MUASA ka SA so hu na MASA..."

(shakti was giggling on hearing der banter) 😊
she said... "okay f9 kunwar, muk's enough bechare ko aur dukhi mat kar...By d way baki sab kahan hai? koi dikhayi nahi de raha nd neeti's due date was after a week na so hw cum 2day??"(she asked confusingly)😕

Mukti: woh kya hai na... Mom-Dad pinky bua ke ghar gaye hue hai unhe milne, aur kriti's exams r gng 2 cum so v send her home back nd nitin jiju is inside wid neeti nd baby...

Shakti:Ohh!!dis means jab neeti ko labour pains start hue tab tu aur kriti the bas ghar par, But hw did u guys managed ??(she asked concernedly)😲
How I wish I cud b der..(she said wid disappointment 😔in her voice.)
Mukti: woh kya hai na aaj achanak hi neeti ko pains shuru hue the, although her due date was next week bt i guess her baby also wanted 2 cum early(she chuckled) & shaks maine aur kriti ne kuch nahi kiya v both ver scared 2 death,jo bhi kiya hai woh kunwar ne liya hai...

S: Wat??😲kunwar ne, I mean he was at home dat time??

M:Haan shaks dekh daantna mat humne tujhe bataya nahi v kept it as secrete, frm last 3 months he is living wid us at our home...teri kami puri kar raha hai humari life main aur shayad khud ki life mein bhi...if he wudnt hav been der 2day den god knws wat might hav happened, hum neeti ko hospital kaise le kar aate...(she wipped a lone tear in her eye)😭

S: guys, tum log ek ke baad ek shock kyun de rahe ho mujhe...(she made an innocent child like face)
M:do u knw main aur neeti movie dekh rahe the & kunwar was cooking fr us nd at time neeti screamed out of pain, main aur kriti toh rock ki tarah stiff hogaye the, v both cudn't understand wat 2 do??
den he shouted at us,😡 he packed all d necessary stuff fr neeti, asked me 2 bring d car out frm garage nd den as usual our lift being out of order he brought down neeti by carrying her all d way through stairs frm 7th floor...den i shifted back wid neeti nd he drove like manics 2 d hospital..
he is d saviour yaar, You can say he is d godfather of baby...

Shakti is left speechless😲, how cud sum1 be so much full of care, he did all dis fr only her family in her absence... a tear escaped😭 frm fer eye &cud just utter "Knuwar" from her mouth..

Here he was feeling embarassed😳 on being praised nd appreciated by both d sisters but he got alarmed on seeling tears in her eyes, he knew she wud breakdowmn ny moment dat's y he convinced mukti 2 check if dey cud get into d room so dat shakti can also see d new born baby...As soon as she was out of sight & b4 he cud say any thing shakti broke down in tears, which she was controlling frm long, but cudn't able 2 hold dem anymore in b/w her sobs.. 😭

S: why *sob* why kunwar *sob* why r u so good? I left u der all alone nd still ur doing so much fr my family y do u care os much? y do u luv me so much...I am so guilty 2day if u wud not hav been der i cud not even imagine wat wud hav happened, I am even scared 2 think abt dat ur not only godfather 2 baby bt also an angel😍 A god sent my personalized angel...

she cried alot, cursed herself fr not being der nd was continuously blabbering kunwar also didnt stopped her as he wanted her 2 let out nd flow all d emotions she has bottled up since she has gone 2 NY... He wanted her 2 take out all d inner turmoil which she hav been hiding...
Atlast she stopped crying and stared at him wid love in her eyes she found only more nd more love fr her in his eyes..❤️

K:u knw y I hav sent u 2 NY (she just raised her eyes as if asking wat type of question is dis..)
he sighed nd continued..
Maine tumhe tumhare dream ko pura karne ke liye nahi bheja hai, main buhat selfish hun u knw😈... maine tumhe wahan apne liye bheja hai so dat ven u cum back as an international dancer i will feel proud dat worlds beautiful dancing diva is mine, meri hai ho tum, everybody vil envy me just becuase ur mine & sorry main tumhare ghar mein issliye reh raha hun kyunki mere paas aur koi option nahi tha after whole days shoot i use 2 go home nd wud drown in ur dreams😍 or either wud sulk around like a devdas den finally dharmesh became highly irritated fr being living wid a zombie like me so he packed my stuff nd called up muks 2 take me wid her 2 ur home till d time u come back, so dat if i vil b in ur home, ur room mujhe tumhare hone ka ehsaas har jagah hota hai, main tumhe humesha apne kareeb pata hun...nd fr wat i did fr neeti, shaks kya neeti meri kuch nahi lagti/? remember ven i was new in d town during DID time sabse pehle tumhare gar aaya tha main, ur family never made me feel as if i am out of d place or i am away fr my own house..neeti was d 1st one 2 accept me as her brother, u knw na i was d one who cried 😭along wid her at her wedding farewell & u all ver laughing like v both were doing sum kind of circus...🤡

she smiled through tears😊 , she smiled seeing d amount of luv nd care he has stored fr everyone...
she whispered lightly but audible 2 him...
S: I luv u...U r d only one in dis world who can get d best nd worst out of me...& I luv u fr dat...
he laughed😆 after hearing her..

K: I luv u 2 Baby...acha chal ab rona bandh kar warna baby kya kahega ki uski maasi ka sirf name shakti hai but woh bilkul strong nahi hai chhote bacho ki tarah roti rehti hai..(he teased her)😉
she wipped her dry tears & said "Oye main kahan ro rahi hun woh toh bas khushi ke aasun hai, u knw humare ghar ka sabse pehla boy aaj born hua hai toh bas isilye"

K:ACHHAA...😛 Tears of happiness kuch bhi haan.. chal ja be natuanki... Hey wait fr 2 minutes mukti gave signal so nw u r gng 2 watch ur nephew in few minutes..

After arranging everything in d room shakti saw a small pink😊 skinned baby in her sis's arms wid her jiju sitting beside dem & kunwar & mukti laughing like jokers🤡 al dis while...

Shakti's first line... "OMG!!! he is so cute, so small in size, neet's better b careful wid him nd u remember na dat I'm gonna name him..."
All shook der head on seeing hyper behaviour of hers..
Neeti: Umm... shakti I knw I promised u bt cud i take back my promise & give ur right 2 amar as 2day he is d one coz of whom v both r alive.. plz..plzz...

S: (smiled affectionately)😊 Awww... sure darling aur waise bhi muks ne toh iss gadhe ko tere baby ka godfather declare kar diya hai toh i think i shud also scarifice sumthing😎...(while giving a fake attitude)

K: Ohh!!! how gr8 full of u Miss.Shakti, but I'm not gonna leave dis opportunity so I wud name him 'Naman'
Everybody in d room is happy😊 on hearing d name but a pair of eyes were first shocked😲 & den changed 2 anger😡 mode & den yelled at amar..

S: Kunwar Amarjeet Singh U r dead now, just wait till I cum back, U r such an idiot & I hate you, you moron..🤢
wid dis she signed off...here everybody in d hospital ver staring not just staring actually gawking 😲at him wid confusion written all over der faces & amar was hell scared he literally started biting his nails...
(now sochte raho aisa kya hua hai ki thodi der pehle itna pyar barsane wali shakti itni gussa...)😉

so finally i hav updated chapter 8, plzz guyss do comment nd hit d like button...nd one more thing plzz if u guyss don't like ny part or any thing abt d ff so plzz feel free 2 share it wid me as may b i can improvise it...
nd may b dis ff wud take 3-4 more parts nd den an epilogue... uske baad i hav an idea for our beloved kriyansh, so i might start up wid dat...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

waise toh maine pm send kardiye hai bt still if anybody didnt got it i'm sorry fr dat plz forgive me ,main bht jaldi mein bhej rahi hun nd if nybody want me 2 send dem pms fr future so plzz u hav 2 send me buddy request...😊

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago