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Eyesfriendly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

just read ur ff...

loved it alot...

plz. do pm me when u update...

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Rucha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome update

Thanks for the pm

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luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

its awesome FF...please continue it and pm me

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

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NOTE: hey guys if anybody wants pm so guyzz send me d buddy request otherwise it vil b difficult fr me 2 send pm's who have asked fr it bt r nt in buddy list so guyzz rush nw,, nd send me d buddy request.. as i'm gng 2 update soon...😊

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hmm.. so finally I'm here wid a new update, earlier i was nt gng 2 update it as i'm feeling really low, but after seeing everyone's like nd comment I got sum strength so thanku al of u fr motivating me nd yes I'm continuing dis ff bt dnt knw hw many parts exactly more... anyway enough of my bak-bak here u go wid next chapter..njoy reading..

chapter-6

It was quiet late ven dey both reached home actually shakti's home..
dey decided tell everyone 2day only, widout ny delay,so ven dey rangup d bell both ver very nervous...🤢
The door opened wid a bang, shakti's mom ('SM' vil b d abbreviation used for her mom)
opened it nd as soon as she saw her face started showering her wid millions of question on being late,😡it's abt 2 minutes later she noticed Amar is also standing beside her daughter..
SM:Oh!! Amar beta tum bhi aaye ho, aao na andar, bahar kyun khade ho (she said wid sweetness in her voice)😊

shakti's eye's which ver till nw looking down in d ground flew😲 up on listening 2 dis & wondered on her mother's behavior,2 minutes ago she was blasting lyk a bomb & nw seeing kunwar all her anger gone out of d window, rather she is being as sweet as honey.
Kunwar read wats on her mind through her expressions, he chuckled hard..😃

Kunwar: You knw na she luvs me more dan u aakhir unka hone wala damaad hun yaar..
she glared😡 at him & whispered
Acha, toh meri mom ke future son-in-law , tumhi unhe sab batana, OKAY..
she hitted him in his stomach wid her elbow, after dat entered her house giving an angry luk 2 her mom..

He shouted in pain 'Ouch'
SM: wat is dis shakti, ghar aaye guest se aise behave karte hai kya??
confused shakti watched here nd der fr a second den asked her mom..
"Guest?? kahan hai guest mom?? "
her mom signaled towards kunwar..
shakti laughed 😆holding her stomach nd after controlling herself she said..
" Mom yeah kunwar hai.. remember?? yeh koi guest nahi hai har dusare din toh aata hai yeh yahaan par.."
SM: shakti behave (sternly) 😳

but interrupted by his voice..
"No aunty, I mean mummy she is ryt main koi guest thodi hun, aur ab toh main..."
but b4 he cud say nything further SM cutted him nd started..
"no,no dear u r lyk a family, but she needs 2 understand.. Blah..Blah.. continued wid her lecture.🥱
Hearing 2 commotion every1 frm her family gathered in hall area 2 see wat is gng on...
but even after continues efforts frm both amar nd shakti her mom did'nt stopped, den very much frustrated, irritated shakti stood on d top of couch & yelled..
MMMomm!!! look at dis..( she showed her ring finger)

Instantly SM stopped, stared at d ring in her hand, every1 in d room even amar was standing wid a wide opened mouth..😲
but ever1 came 2 reality on hearing SM's loud scream..😡
HEYY BHAGWAANN !! yeh ladaki sagai kar aai aur hume kuch bataya bhi nahi, kaun hai woh ladka? kya karta hai? Naam kya hia uska?? (just lyk a typical indian mom's)
now shalti luked at her mom wid an expression, 😲IS she insane or wat?? & after dat shifted her gaze towards kunwar as if asking 'wat 2 do nw?'
but he was equally confused😕 so he just shrugged his sholder as if 'I don't no nything??'
all these silent communication of both ver being noticed by d other 3 mohan sister's dey immediately understood wat happened, 2 whom she is engaged, dey literally jumped on dem nd started shouting...
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
Congrats both of u, took dey in rib crashing hug..🤗
both arsha was finding it hard 2 breathe coz shakti's sisters ver acting lyk manics.
At last shakti's dad (SD fr him) come 2 der rescue, by shouting at all of dem..😡

SD: enough all of u, at least let dem breathe, u my dear wife (he said while turning 2 SM) stop ur melodrama for once plzz, v hav had enough of ur daily soap type mom avtar..
S: Thanku Dad, for saving us.

SD: not yet my child, is der nything u both hav 2 tel us..( he asked dem in serious tone)😳

Amar wid a very scared tone,😕
" Umm, Uncle. woh... woh.. I...I..(den he tuk a deep breath, said in one go)
I LUV UR DAUGHTER VERY MUCH & SHE LUVS ME TOO, I ASKED HER 2 B MINE 4 FOREVER, NOW I'M HERE FR UR ALL PERMISSION.."
everybody was in a fit of laughter😆 & amar pouted🤪 lyk a 5 yr old child den SD came, placed his hand on amar's shoulder cooled him up..

"My boy !! y r u so much scared, I was just pulling ur leg; v al hav accepted u way back,just v needed an official confirmation frm both of u, no one other can b better dan u fr my darling daughter"
Amar bent 2 take his blessings bt SD embraced him .." you both r meant fr each other nd hav my blessings wid u always, I'm quiet sure ur gng 2 keep her happy more dan us aur fir iske tantrums tumse zayda ache se kaun handle kar sakta hai..."
to dis shakti whined..😳 "DAD"
SM: nd i knew it frm beginning dat meri is jhalli k liye tumse acha koi nahi hai, i showed her so many alliance of boys bt she rejected each n every1 by giving weird reasons, tab mujhe is pagal ke mann ki baat samjh aagayi..

Now mukti 😊chirped in, OKAY buhat hogayi senti baatein, tym fr celebration welcum amar 2 mad women house, nw u can give company 2 dad nd nitin jiju( fictional character neeti's husband) soo lets partyyy...🥳

neeti: (excitedly jumped) Yayyy.. I vil make coffee..😃
all yelled.. 😡NOWAY ur moving anywhere..she pouted.. bt why?? (on d verge of crying)😭
kunwar side hugged her..🤗" see neet's u had enough excitement fr 2day , so v don't want u 2 exert urself more & also li'll baby derfore sit here hav girl talk wid ur swt sisters, i vil prepare coffee plus u knw na i make best coffee in d world , wid dis he winked 😉at her &
she replied wid a smile..😊
while gng 2 kitchen he added " plzz don't jump lyk dat swtheart it's nt good fr ur health okay.."
she nodded.." ok boss..."
shakti admired 😍him dat hw easily he tackled her 5 months pregnant sis wid highly active harmons, silently thanked god fr sending him in her lyf ...
so d night passed wid lots of family talks, laughs, teasing & romancing...❤️

i knw its crapp i'm nt at all satisfied wid it, bt kya karun upset due 2 sum personal reasons..
if u al like den only hit d lyk button or comment...

PRECAP: shakti gng 2 NY sum secnes b4 her leaving...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago

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Jiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

CUTE!!!

Lol...Shakti's mom is something😉

Nice update!

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raina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Awesome update
loved it
lol shakti's mom...

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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Awesumm update

luvd it

shakti's mom srsly acting lyk a drama queen 😆

finally dey tld deir family also

updte soon

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shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Aww dat was cute update
n shakti's mom aww she is behaving lyk typical moms...hehe
love da way amar handle 5mnths pregnant neeti...dis proves dat he is gng to b a good father n husband in future...lol
loved da update alot

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