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Posted: 13 years ago
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awee that was very cute part...loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome update.
update the next part soon and pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
this update z so cute
5 mnthns pregnant?ouch!!!
n the way amar said i love her.she loves me 2 ws LMAO!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jst read ur ff its Awsome ...!
Love d relation of kunwar n shakti's family members..!
Really nice exicuted ..!
Update soon cnt wait 2 read ...!
N do pm me ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
chapter7
Thanku all of u for comments nd likes,Nw here is d next update in d flowing part der wud b two leaps plus present nd flashback incidences although i vil mention it but u all r free 2 ask questions, o here u go...

(1 month later)

It was early morning of May18th, shakti is sleeping🥱 her bed,dreaming abt d love of her lyf, her kunwar...
They hav been in a relationship fr almost a month, although dey both r frnds wid each other for last 2 and a half years but wid each passing day she gets 2 knw new surprising things abt him, which make her fall more deeper in luv wid him...
she is smiling😊 in her sleep ven she heard sum1 continuously calling her name, ven she concentrated on d voice it was d same voice which she always wants 2 hear, just lyk nw she is hearing in her dream, it's his voice kunwar's voice... WAIT.. Wat? his voice dat 2 at dis hour of day nt exactly day... for heavens sake its dawn time...
ven realization strikes her she jerked open her eyes & saw him infront of her present in reality nt as a part of her silly dream...😵
in hyper mode.."wat r u doing here & dat 2
(she shifted her gaze on wall clock) at 4'o' clock in d morning.."
kunwar: calm down sweety, main yahan tumhe lene aya hun, nd b4 u start ny more rapid fire round of questions i already hav talked 2 ur parents abt dis, muk's ne kal hi mujhe ghar ki duplicate keys di thi jisse main andar aaya hun, now her highness if u don't hav any problem take dis suit nd get ready, v r already late sweety pie.."

she just said.." WAT??"

den after a minute..

"but where r v gng dat 2 dis early in d morning aur tumne yeh churidar kyun select kiya hai meri wardrobe se? is evreything alrite kunwar..
(she asked wid a genuine concerned faced) kahin tumhare parents toh nahi aaye hai...?"(now she goes back 2 her hyper active mode)

he places his hand on her mouth 2 shut her up.

"WOAH!! kitna bolti ho tum nd nope my parents did'nt come, nd yeh churidar suit kyun diya aur hum subah-subah kahan jaa rahe hai sab samjh aajayega only if u vil go nd get ready den cum along wid me..."

she was continuously speaking sumthing bt was nt able 2 speak properly as his hand was still on her mouth she was making sounds lyk.. "UMMM ...MMM"🤪

he said "kya hua?? ab jaladi karo bhi.."😕
finally ven she was nt able 2 make him understand left widout no option she bite him on his palm wid her teeths...😈

he shouted in pain..."OUCH... bite kyun kiya? koi aise behave karta hai kya apne boyfrnd ke saath, Huh jungli billi kahin ki..."😡
(he pretended 2 b angry)
she snapped at him..Mister bf aapne kya kiya pehle toh subah-subah aagye meri need kharab karne pata hai main itne beautiful 😍dreams dekh rahi thi, aur fir jab ready hone ke liye bolte ho toh khud mera muh bandh karke mujhe khade rakhte ho, brains kahan hai tumhare😡..
.(he passed her a sheepish grin) 🤔 toh main kya karti haath hatane ko bol rahi thi nahi samjh aya isliye maine bite kiya"

kunwar:
(wid a naughty smile) 😉Acha baby beautiful dreams kiske mere dekh rahi thi kya?? maine disturb kardiya isliye irritated ho, koi baat nahi main toh sakshaat tumhare saamne swayam prakat hogaya hun baalike lo jo karna hai kar lo hum tumhare hai sanam (translation:dont worry i'm here myself infront of u girl do want u wanna do wid me i'm al urs darling)...(wid dis he jumped nd took her in a bear hug)
🤗

she broke d hug pushed him slightly nd turned away..." Urghh.. Don't keep ur hopes high mister, who r u? jo main tumhe apne dreams mein dekhun main toh apne kisi special person☺️ ke dreams dekh rahi thi, kisi faltu chipku insan ke nahi jo ki subah ke 4 baje aakar mujhe mere khawabo se jaga de.."
(she said wid a lot of attitude)😎

he came hugged her frm back.. "Acha sum1 special hmm..., mujhe koi prob nahi usse u keep on dreaming abt him, bt haan yeh chipku insaan toh besharam hai humesha tumse chipka rahega aakhir haq banta hai.." 😃he rested his head on her shoulder nd she smiled..." kunwar i also want dat v always stay 2gether lyk dis forever main humesha us chipku aur special person jo ki mera prince of indore hai uski bahaon main aise hi rahun...kya yeh hoga?" he smiled 😊at her innocence nd nodded approvingly..." hoga bt filhaal tumhe akele hi tayaar hone jaana padega meri bahaon ko chod kar, but if u want i can accompany u my princess..."
(he winked 😉at her nd she blushes hard☺️)
shakti:pushed him nd ran 2wards washroom.. den turned slightly nd said "buhat badmaash hogaye ho tum"
(stick her tongue out nd hurriedly closed door)😛

They both ver driving for last 30 minutes bt he didn't answered ny of her questions regarding where dey r gng he wud just pass a smile😊 as a reply nw she was used 2 his surprises dat's y she didn't bug him further nd stayed quiet njoyed d beautiful morning sky, rising sun, chirping birds, empty roads, freshness in d air... wat more she cud ask fr? she wid him nd dis ambience plus a long drive at least b4 leaving she got a good amt. of tym 2 spent wid him alone so she is cherishing 😍each n every moment her train of thoughts got distrubed by sudden stop of car, she luked towards him nd he said, "v hav reached lets get der faster.."

he opned her side of d door nd she took in d view infront of her she had a broad 😃smile on her face nd a twinkle in her eyes...
" ohhh my god!!! kunwar tumhe kaise pata ki main jaane se pehle yahan siddhi vinayak ke temple aana chahti thi??"
he cupped his faced wid his hands.." bas mere dil ne tumhare dil ki awaaz sunn li, now move fast b4 d crowd cums ..."
wid dis he set her dupptta on her head nd dey both eneterd d temple hand in hand...
Dey prayed infront of idol for well being of each other,nd asked for fulfillment each others wishes...
ven dey both ver praying a priest came 2 give prashad 2 both of dem, dey tuk it nd bent for his blessing...
preist:
(to amar) sada khush raho [ always stay happy]
(to shakti) sada suhagan raho beti [ur husband stay alive for long, u live a long married lyf wid him]
dey both starred at each other😲 & den amar tried 2 clear priests confusion...
" panditji yeh meri wife nahi hai.." but b4 he cud complete shakti said..

"haan yeh mere fiance hai.."
(& blushed slightly)☺️

amar was looking at her i a shocked 😲state,did she really admitted in front of others dat i'm her fiance or am i dreaming sum thing but soon he came 2 reality by priests voice..

P:koi baat nahi beta, kuch tym mein toh tum dono husband nd wife ho hi jaoge na..🥳
wid dis he left, but shakti whispered 2 herself... "haan hosakte hai, hopefully..."

(it is another blow for him, he pretended as if not heard nything bcoz he didn't want 2 make her departure 2 NY more comlicated by asking her all des questions, he cud wait fr sumtym nd ven she vil b back den nobody nt even herslf cud save her frm him... nd he smiled evilly😈)

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------------Kunwar's P.O.V.
it had been 3 months since shakti had gone 2 NY her departure was very melodramatic...

FLASHBACK

Both shakti nd her mother ver crying😭 lyk hell as if she is bidding farewell after her marriage, amar hav 2 literally push her towards d checking area, she was clinging 2 him like a baby monkey 2 his mother, After 100's of pep talks, consoling & teasing he was able 2 convince her 2 board d plane, everyone at d airport was watching a free entertainment show😊, but d twist here is dat heroine was complaining why is he letting her go & hero was convincing her 2 go nd peruse her dreams of becoming an international dancer, everything was gng in vain she was continuously cribbing & passer by were eyeing dem as if thinking wat a mad couple, Amar passed 😳each of dem a sweet apologetic smile & ven he said her 2 stop her childish act as everyone is mocking at dem nd having fun at der expense..she became more angry..😡 instantly she dialed a number on her cell, ven she started conversation wid d person on d other side, he guessed whom she is talking nd cursed.. "OH NO,not any more drama plzz, isse unhe phone karna zaruri tha kya? ab woh meri nahi bas iski sunegii.."

shakti: haan,haan woh yahin par hai aap khud baat karo usse plzz kaho na ki i don't wanna go anywhere..
.(she pleaded)
person:Haan de toh sahi use phone..
shakti gave him phone coldly & he asked her through his eyes why?? but she turned 2 other side..
Amar:
(nervously) Hello maa.. kaise ho aap??
Amar's mom
(AM): angirly😡 "main toh theek hun betaji, tu kyun meri pyari bachchi ko pareshaan kar raha hai, agar woh mana kar rahi toh kyun zabardasti kar raha hai tu?"
A: Maaa..
.(he whined) aap uski mat sunno, woh pagal hai bilkul, i'm talking in favour of her, acha aap papa se baat karvao zara..
AM:theek hai, meri toh sunega nahi, unhi se kar tu baat...
Amar's dad
(AD): haan beta bolo kya hua,kyun nahi jana chahti shakti??
A: Papa rite nw she is out of her mind , might be she wud feel homesick nd nobody vil b der wid her dat's y hosakta hai woh darr rahi ho...
AD: Toh fir tum kya chahte ho, use rokna ya fir..
A: papa dis is her dream nd how cud i break her dream nd dat 2 coz of me no never ever.. i don't want dat d dream which she lived in every breathe of her become shattered..
AD:
(smiled & said)... I am proud of u beta jaa mana use aur haan use airport se wapas mat le aayio warna teri dono tange tod dunga main. jeene de use uske sapne nd make very dream of her's both of ur's reality... haan apni maa ki tension mat le main sambhal lunga..
tu apni wali ko sambhal aur main apni ko.
.( dey both laughed)😆
A: Thankyou papa..
& he ended d call, sighed den moved 2 shakti for manaofying her...
he said.." shak's i knw u don't want 2 go NY rite nw leaving me behind, par kal ko ho sakta hai ki tu apne aap ko yeh opportunity miss karne ke liye blame kare, and i don't want u 2 regret abt it, last 2.5 yrs mein tujhse zayda maine tere international dancer banne ke sapne sajaye hai, please mere liye chali jaa sirf 5 months ki toh baat hai , hum toh humesha saath rahenge aur inn 5 mahino main bhi main tujhse connected rahunga u knw via internet, phone,etc...
plzz baby live ur dreams & make me proud on u, aur fir hum humesha yaha toh saath mein hi hai na
(pointed first 2 his heart den 2 her heart)❤️ tu chah kar bhi mujhe yahan se nahi nikal sakti humesha teri shadow bann kar rahunga main...
she melted on hearing his words wid a smile 😊she nodded..
okaie!! kunwar I vil go for mines & ur's dream, means 'ours' dream, I won't backout now & dats a promise..
Kunwar: Dat's luk my fighter shakti, chalo ab flight ka time hogaya hai...
S:Bye!! love u kunwar..
(she had slight tears in her eyes bt didnt showed it 2 him)😔
He smiled & said while hugging 🤗her "love u 2 nd plzz don't cry smile baby"...
she smiled broadly nd turned to checking area after glancing fr last tym each other nd wavying a byee 2 each other...
( yet a pain of sepration inside both of dem bt also a happiness fr each other, amar's happiness on seeing her dream getting fulfilled nd shakti's happiness on getting him as her lifepartner nw she is determined 2 becum successfull for him 2 make him proud)😊

PRESENT

He felt a hand on his shoulder & he came back from his trance, he realised where is he now, he saw a smiling mukti in front of him...

pheww finally a long update i want maximum comments nd likes nw...😊
so how is it good, bad or very bad?? do comment nd if u hav ny suggestions for future track plzz feel free 2 share...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
its awesome
loved it
i liked the airport drama
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d update..!
Thanks 4 d pm !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...loved it very much
amar's surprise was mindblowing
and airport scenes were epic
loved it
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awesome update...loved the airport and temple part...thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
the airport scene was sooo nice

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