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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it... Read all of it in 2 days... I am so addicted to it.. After finishing, I am kinda lost 😉
Plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rini_kat

Its wonderful I jst read your story in one go...It is amazing...Pls update soon

By the way from where the song is taken
"Tujhe main jahan ki nazar se chura loon Kahin dil ke kone mein tujhko chhupa loon..."
I can't find any video...



I think it's from tu tu hai wahi dil be jise apna kaha... It comes somewhere in the middle..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mini_kh



I think it's from tu tu hai wahi dil be jise apna kaha... It comes somewhere in the middle..😊






--FEMALE--
La, la la la la la, la la la la la la la
La, la la la la, la la la la la
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah - 2
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha
La la la la la, la la la la la
Main aawaaz hoon to tu hai geet mera - 2
Jahan se niraala manmeet mera
Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza

--MALE--
Kisi mod pe bhi na yeh saath toote
Mere haath se tera daaman na chhoote

--FEMALE--
La la, la la la, la la la
Kabhi khwaab mein bhi tu mujhse na roothe
Mere pyaar ki koi khushiyaan na loote

--MALE--
Mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza

--FEMALE--
Tujhe main jahan ki nazar se chura loon
Kahin dil ke kone mein tujhko chhupa loon

--MALE--
Kabhi zindagi mein pade mushkilein to
Mujhe tu sambha le, tujhe main sambha loon

--FEMALE--
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah - 2
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha

--BOTH--
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza
O la la la la la la, la la la la la la la la
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha

--FEMALE--
Yeh vaada raha

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... Lovely one...
Great update dear... I'm sooo much in love with your FF..

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG.. how come i missed such a wonderful ff...😲

from last 2 days i was reading this.. finished this evening...😊
Wow... wonderful...👏 i must say, there are pretty much talented writers in this forum...
i am glad that i am an IF member, that am able to read such wonderful works...
hats off to you yaaar... this is a wonderful story.. loved it... 👏
I really impressed...😉 😆 😆
Congos for your third thread.. i know am late...
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Posted: 13 years ago
🥳 just now finished reading in one go... wow that was fabulous so dreamy😍... now i barely want to meet my soulmate now... is it possible? ok well i'm just going to belive like khushi 😳 ... a perfect fairytale loved it.. daargah scene, rain scene wow they are out of world😳...
ASR here is too nice just so adorable to see him like that...
waiting for next update... what a great writer you are OMG just wondering how you putting up their convo it was very nice...
add me please in your pm list... thank god for showing this to me...
and for you🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all, i would like to say thanku for giving us this looong update inspite of your ill health.🤗
and am sorry for the late reply.
it was absolutely fantastic, amazing, wonderful.👏👏. i really loved it.
arnav was such a sweet heart...❤️ how could he be soo caring and soo protective.. he was there to take away all her pains, miseries... in this ff dunno y i feel that i love arnav more than khushi..😍
in the first part, i was blushing omg he called her princess..☺️ part A to D i enjoyed reading them. "he cupped her face and said i wont hurt u. i promise." and "you have me. i ll never leave u"... aww... that was adorable... but i became emotional from part E .. khushi expressing her grief about her maa and papa... especially when she said that it was the last song her mom sang holding her in her arms.. how much pain khushi might have gone through... omg i was literally crying...😭. u have worded beautifully..
hey i dint know that we have these many types of rains(happy rain, bad rain, warning rain etc etc..) ha ha😆😆...
the way u described them dancing in the rain.. wow... that was sooo romantic yaar..
cant wait to know how khushi gonna react when she comes to know that ASR is her arnav singh raizada.. waiting for ur update.. thank u soo much for the pm



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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update soon yar!!...cant wait!!...😔😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok..So for the past 3 days I was reading this..Thanks to appy_indy's thread..urs was the 1st in her list n so read it 1st..
Its so lovely..I really enjoyed reading this.So cute..I was saying awww how sweet of these 2..
Got angry when gloomy jumped into conclusion that tsunami took advantage of her situation n slept with her..
Felt bad for her when she cried for thinking bad abt him..
They r just too cute..I really wish she comes to know of his real name & he too comes to know of her little secret..ie,abt her prince charming..
I sometimes wonder these talk a lot n r very comfortable talking anything so y dont they trust each other n share their pain of their past n all..
and i also wonder y he feels too guilty for their first kiss.ie,lying to her abt tat..so is he guilty as he too was an active member in tat kiss..awaiting to know abt tat too..
but if it happened too soon may be the story cant move much..
so awaiting to read more of this gloomy n tsunami..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my there u go m here n after reading all chapter all i can is tht IT IS AWESOME the one who called ur ff PAAK tht person is so true in putting this word u havent even mentioned anything in detail abt their kiss but the feelings every second of it every dialogue every thought ...m not talking abt the kiss like u said u carried away while writing i myself most of time got carried away while writing comment... Anyways the dances everytime were PERFECT... Actually they r perfect especialy loved the way ASR treats her its really like princess and the way they have fights with their own mind and heart i loved ur wordings where u quoted sometimes its hard to decide whether to listen to ur heart or brain and even harder tht u cant figure out which one is saying wht... From ASR behavior its clear he loves khushi but he just cant figure it out and khushi is confuse coz of her wait for her fate mate... I love the last update i mean full chapter specially when they dance and all that i cant stop smiling love it such pure and clean ff love it pls pm me for further updates and yes i might not b able to comment coz of examz i cant say i wont read but i will comment after 7th sep for sure

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