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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Very, very interesting! And way better than guttery stuff. All this needed to be said between them.

You brought out Khushi's pain very well. And her frank admission of her love for him was a treat!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

ohhh... arent we all dreaming of this from last nts 8.30 pm!!☺️ making all imaginations possible!! 😆

Nice one Risha... totally ur style...😊

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

res 😎

Edit:

Rish 🤗

Wow what an amazing OS.

Beautifully written.

Khushi is so caring. I really feel bad for her sometimes, I mean she has sacrificed so much but she got nothing in return except someone's hate *glares at Arnav*

Arnav is so cute. I can't hate him & you knowe that..don't you? It's nice that he is changing & you wrote his part perfectly in this one. Before doing anything they need to talk. Talk about their past, talk about their marriage, talk about their families & most importantly talk about their love!

It is always a treat to see a flustered khushi, so I kinda enjoyed the balm applying thing. It was cute. I love the way Arnav teased her about removing his shirt. Flirty Arnav is so..sigh..is 😍

I loved khushi's determination. It's good that she didn't give up easily.

And Finally she said it all. What a relief! I felt like hugging khushi. Arnav's words were really painful, and I realized it after reading your OS Rish.

And then a Perfect ending! I just love to read your work.

Keep Writing!

P.S.- Mujhe TDS khelne ka mann kar raha hai! 😆

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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-PoisonIvy

@-PoisonIvy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

50th OS?! Congratulations! :) This was chicken soup for the Monday-cant-come-sooner soul! :D Loved it!

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautifully written...👍🏼

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Woah..!!!

Good One Rish..!!

Lovely..!! 😊

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

If he does that I am serious if he does that I will forget all the misgivings I have about the serial right now..Seriously! *Sigh* Why do you write so beautifully? Very beautiful piece sweetheart! Now I know I'll be dissappointed by whatever they show on Monday coz it cant be this epic..unless they decide to copy it! :P
PS: Why do you talk about food?! Now I am craving for golgappa! 😆

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Loved it Risha. As always.

Cheers, Avi.

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Risha...I simply couldn't restrain myself from crying while reading this...it was beautifully written.
A confession so simple...yet so pure, so promising, so assuring, so powerful, so deep...it took my breath away...

Congrats on your 50th OS!

Manal <3