You got that just right, just perfect !!
And I love you cause when you're done writing, I dont know why, But your notes at the end, always give me a feeling that you are all flustered up !! But believe me woman, you rock !! Yaa you got it right, you are a woman, and you are amaizngly rocking !! Just like your soul sissy😉😆
Stumbling across things is a good thing isnt it ??
cause look at what I got to read ! Such an amazing OS as a morning treat !! if the weekend goes like this, I guess I can survive !!
That panic, that anxiety, and then Oh ! I realised !! These emotions were perfewctly written for Khushi !! And then, the arrogant sexy smirk, which gets all the advantage of the whole situation , again perfection !! The way you describe her trmebling fingers and him folding his fists !! Haiii !! I mean, Im sure yes my heart was beating louder than the background music on the TV !! And atleast my whole neighbourhood could have heard it !!
And then, the story that follows after he pins her down !! A forced truth is no less than a lie !!
And then she accepts, gets all her pain out !! Its ironic, how they both give each other the pain, and when they need relief from it, they search for the same person to soothe it away, and probably that's what makes Arnav and Khushi so different from each other !! And I loved how you used it !!
And aww !! These days, im smitten by every confession, so this confession was to definitely feature in my list !! Loved loved loved the OS Soul sissy !! Muahhh !! 🤗