ArHi|Choices|Complete - Page 95

Loved it.. The update, jus love it..

still digesting the update will comment later

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile

[Do you have a preferred name?] It sounds odd to call you svj2...The case proceedings were i think easier to write than keeping Khushi is the BG throughout the whole update. Seriously its like she was the shadow from afar, when she was only few away from them! It was incredibly hard to write out. You read perfectly into Arnav's cold behavior - his focus was entirely on Aryan only. And it was not until Aryan left that he started to pay attention to her.

I am glad Khushi is finally seeking the right, because that takes a lot of courage. It doesn't take much to say - She is bad mother. she is selfish. But when you walk in her shoes, you realize the burden she carries is not a light one. Not that i support her ways - but i felt it was true to who she was. She was filled with guilt and guilt - trust me that it can lead one to some pretty petty places! It is very strong emotion. But now i am looking forward to writing about how she picks up the pieces.

Thank you for so much for your wonderful comment. And you re - read it? 😳 [I have a huge grin on my face]

hey invisible smile...😃😃

Oh how beautifully written. the pain and the emotions...oh just a treat to read.

Originally posted by: christmas

first of sorry for being so sparse in comments. that out of the way.

i like that for once khushi is full of faults has done the hurting is the emotionally messy one. yes arnav comes with his past, but since the start of story he is the one who has it together. i like even more that it was him going back to her. that it was for once a male protagonist who continues to stay despite faults and no the gender reversal that it usually is. what i like even more is that they both are such strong characters and stand their place all on their own. yes khushi is this complex thing and she is weak and crazy and so many other things yet there was this chip up head held up quality in the last chapter for her. arnav had his faults and his short comings and yes in a reg situation his decision to do what he did at the end would be questioned, but the simplicity of the reasoning you gave was splendidly done. this all isnt to say everything is hunky dory but still. really liked it. and aryan is the cutest. continue soon!

Welcome to the story :) And i don't mind - you commented now. That is far more than enough for me.
Very true, they both are very strong characters , but so tangled also. And that is how i like them. This is quite different from anything i have written so far on them. And i am glad you like it. Very true, just because Arnav is in love with her...doesn't mean they will suddenly get together and be a happy family. There is much to be said and done, still :) And i really don't know if they will get together at all...

Thank you once again.

u are an amazing writer!!!
i just loved this update!!!
finally kushi realization and arnav realization is very well written!!!!!

Loved loved loved this chapter. Especially at the end, it was so emotional. Finally Khushi realized the consequences of the choice she had made and is going to learn to accept it and Arnav has realized he is in love with her. Aryan was adorable as always. The end of the chapter left me grinning like an idiot. Felt to happy they came together, even though it had to be this way. Can't wait for more!

i have no words to say, what a mind blowing update, i am so glad Aryan stays with his daddy, i almost expected a broken Arnav begging for Aryan to be returned, but u didn't separate then and thank u 4 that,,,,