Heartbreak is the part of the perfect love story

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: yogini64
Awww . . . Vish n swayam missin kriya... 😭
gud job sharon . . . . Aur dantt stalker ko . . . . Dance ka D bhi nhi aata isse... 🤢
wth is wrong wid rey . . . . Baby . . Wat? 😡
vaise achha hi hua . . . . . Madam ki leg me sprain aa gya aur rey ne care bhi nhi ki 😆
isse clear hai dat he is fooling himself 😉
yeah . . . Kriya is back 🥳
shivam . . . Tu toh gya kaam se
O meri tragedy queen cookie . . . . . . Tu apne baki OS me bahot rula chuki hai . . . 😵
humein surprise karna bhi seekh 😆

my sweeto yogini

i just luv ur comments ❤️

ab tune tragedy queen bol hi diya hai toh aage aage dekh kya hota hai 😈

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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow dear :) both of u did a fab song

soo good..

thanks for the pm !

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice start...

only swayam and vishakha missing kriya...

love the part sharon scolding taani...

but dont like rey calling taani "baby"🤢

don't do that yar...don't like rey falling for that stalker..show me bhi yahi sab..and ajkal ff os me bhi yahi sab...sach me padke bahut kharab lagta hai...😔

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

sorry sorry for late comment...

cookie nd devil gr8 job yaar...

par update jaldi se karna...

shatabdi ki speed main ek k baad ek ff/ss/os deti rehti ho...

update...

mumbai local ki tarah update karti ho...

ok now back to update...

swayam and vishaka's convi is awww...

I too feel like crying with them...😭

TAANI CANT DANCE SAALA...😆

ye simple si baat usko samjh nhi aati...

wow sharon kya bola..👏.hey but dont hate yaar...

ewww rey taani couple...😡🤢

urrrghhh I hate this rey😡

and what he said...

taani is better than kriya

In her dreams😍

waah rey ney bhi taani ho danta

bale bale

wow finally kriya is back...😊

ye taani fevicol kha kar paida hui thi kya...

kaise rey se chipakti rehti hai...

chipku taani...😆

she's such a chipak-kali😆

yahan bhi shivam ek taani kum thi jo shivam bhi...😡

ok all over awesome update or prologue

hmmm

jo bhi tha...😛😃👏

and its my first attemt for long comment...

hope u like it😛

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Amazing update...

vishaka and swayam are only kriya's true friends

loved to see kriya back...

shivam is in big trouble... 😆

kriya is joining the team again... yipee

rey called taani as baby... how could he 😡

he too know that she is not worth to call such sweet names...

hate her like hell... 😡

update next part sooner

waiting for it

thnx for pm 😊

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awsome guys
plzzz cntinue
i want to read more

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yusra hashim

@yusra.hashim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wow... awesome update...

loved it...

waiting fr next...

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Superb part nice
Kriya back
Ye taani ka to patta kat gaya abhi

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

awesome update..

rey helped taani.. huh..

sharon was right...

swayam n vishakha r true frndz of Kriya ...

Kriya is bak .. yeahh...

excited to read d further parts...

continue soon...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

awesome concept dear...

by the title i think this is gonna have happy ending...

update soon

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