Heartbreak is the part of the perfect love story

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Vishakha sittin alone in college with a scrap book in her hand looking at the pictures. She was having tears in her eyes u can say she was literally crying looking at the pics in the book. Swayum was passing by when he heard snffing sounds he looked here nd there bt did'nt find anyone he heard the sounds cuming frm the abandoned staircase , he opened the door nd found vishakha sittin there nd crying .He came nd sat beside her.

Swayum- hey vish, kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho ???? is it b'coz our friends I mean about their beahviour ...

Swayum was shocked to see her crying, He knew vishakha was one of the strongest grl ever nd wnt cry fr a lame reason lyk this. He was worried for her then his eyes fell on the scrap book in her hands

Swayum- vishakha... (with teary eyes)

Vishakha- dnt u miss her swayum?????? She was ur bxt friend na???

Swayum- she was nai vishakha , she is...

Bt he was cut by vishakha

Vish- yaa yaa she is ur bst best frnd iddliye u frgt her na????

Swayum nodded in a no bt vish continued

Vish- plz swayum, how cn u frgt her

She's the person jiski wajah se hum yahan hai

Kriya ki hi wajah se hum footloose mein perform kar paayein humari apni pehchaan hai yahan jst b'coz of her warna hum toh nobody hi ho hote na ???

Hw cn u giv her place to someone else I noe taani is ur sister bt I cnt let her tke kriya's place ever

Swayum- STP IT VISH , kriya meri best friend hai , thi aur hamesha rahegi

No one can tke her place in my lyf nt evn taani or Sharon . hw can u say dat I dnt miss her, I miss her lyk hell jst because I dnt show does'nt mean I dnt miss her bt m angry also with her I noe uski koi problem hai bt who meko bataa nai sakti thi

I guess m nt a gud friend issliye usne mujhe nai bataya

I wish I culd meet her once , see her

Nd he broke down seeing dis vishakha also broked down bt controlled herself

Vish- m sorry swayum relle sorry , main bhul gayi thi tum usse kitna miss karte ho but u dnt show toh mujhe lagaa dat tum bhi usse bhula chuke ho relle sorry swayum

Nd dey bth cry fr sumtym remembering the days they spent with kriya ''

They gt a txt frm Sharon to cum to RH asap as they hav to practice

(p.s ' guyz yahan no dazzlings nd weaklings nly louisans as they the organizers they can perform in a grp of 12 members so bth the teams paired up they were missin out the 12th dancer as so jaise D3 mein hua taani being a stalker kya kiya tha usne nd al m nt going in mch detail)

Scene shifts to the rehersal hall

Taani is tryin to do a step frm god noes kabse bt she's nt getting it still now

Here Sharon nd vishakha r super frustrated evn the whole gang as they r thinking taani is nt takin it srsly

Sharon-(shouting) TAANI CNT U CONCENTRATE???

Kabse tumse yeh nai ho raha hai? Kaha than a maine k practice karna huh

We dnt hav tym to waste okk Dnt u understand footloose is in 2 weeks nd we need to work hard nd practice nd I dnt wanna loose because of u

Taani looks near rey with tears in his eyes bt he does'nt help her as he knows Sharon is angry plus she's right.

Bharat- yaar aaj yeh Sharon pehli baar sahi bol rahi hai

All agree with her

Sharon- u noe guyz kriya ne job hi kiya who bahut galat kiya nd I hate her

Bt I agree she was one of the best dancers nd no one can replace her in dance

Kaassh who yahan hoti so humei koi tension hi nai hoti *sigh*

vicky : u r right sharon wo kitni b buri ho but wo dancer kamal ki thi

neha- ur right babu b tab sochne se kya fayda who toh chali gayi''''

Sharon- leave it guyz lets practice'

Bt Taani runs out crying

Rey gets angry hearing kriya's name nd now taani ran out crying

Rey- STP IT GUYZ kya zarurat thi kriya ka naam lene ki

Taani is way better than kriya ok

Nd he storms out of the rehersal hall

All gt sad nd sum how irritated coz unki practice ruk gayi beech mein

Here Rey is searching fr taani evrywhr

Atlast he finds her in an empty classroom crying

Rey- taani m srry, bt main kya karta''

Taani- rey aap unhe kch bole kyun nahi'.woh mujhpar kitna chilla rahe the nd mujhe kriya se compare'''

Rey- no taani look u r way better than kriya okk nd Sharon gusse mein thin d main usse kch nai bol sakta coz she was rite

Taani- bt rey''.

Rey- no taani nw u hav to concentrate on ur dance steps kyunki tumhaara footwork bahut weak hai nd nxt 2 weeks mein dance competition hai nd agr tum concentrate nai karoge to hiss hisaab se hum haar jayenge na baby 'try to understand

Taani- rey aapne mujhe baby kaha wow

She jumped in excitement nd sprained her foot

Taani- ahhh'.. rey I guess I gt a sprain ahhh'' nd agn strts crying

Rey by now is super frustrated nd angry

Rey- WTH taani , tum koi bhi cheez acche se nai kar sakti hoo na, see now u got a sprain ab dance kaun karega???? Huh

Taani- rey kch nai hua hai kch dino mein thik ho jaungi

Rey- yaa rite do din fr god's sake taani it is a sprain kam se kam ek week lagega isse thik hone mein nd den u vil hav to tke rest nd wat bout the rehersals huh u noe gtumhari wajah se hum haar jayenge nd storms out frm there also

By now rest of the gang also comes to know they get frustrated , shocked , angry , tensed, scared, upset nd wat nt

Evn vp comes to noe bout this

Nd he gives a big lecture to them nd st the end he says

Vp- now isse better tum log apna naam withdraaw karvalo competition se, haarne aur insult karvane se toh name withdraw karvana better hai

All r angry nd sad as to wat to do

Suddenly a voice cumes frm behind

Voice- aisa kch nai hoga...

All turn around nd are shocked to see the person...

All were dumbstruck to see the person they culd utter nly one word
"KRIYA"

Rey was utterly shocked to see her, many emotions were running through his body

Taani was shocked plus scared as she thought now kriya will take rey away frm her

She was standing near rey sticking or u can say clinging to him nd gripping her hold tighter on his arm

She moves forward towards VP nd said that she was back nd wuld like to join the college

VP agreed and also asked her to join the team back as taani has hurted her foot nd she cnt dance , so they need a dancer as kriya was the maker of the weakling team nd is a good dancer he wuld lyk to include her in their team as it's the matter of their college's reputation nd he left frm there.

Kriya turned around towards her so called "FRIENDS" (except vish nd swayu, they r the true one) bt they all gave her a dirty look nd walked off frm there

The ones who stayed there were only vishakha nd swayum

As soon as she saw them they gave her a bone crushing hug to which she responded happily with tears in her eyes

Swayum- kriya u back relle , m sooo happy u back missed u so mch

Vishakha ' yaa mann missed u soo mch thank u fr cuming back me soo happy

They crying while hugging, soon they broke the hug nd swayum asked

Swayum- kriya y did u leave

Vishakha- yaa mann itni bhi kya majboori thi dat u went away without informing us

Kriya- uumm'. Guyz I'll tell u'll later now I gtg in office kch formalities finish karni hai

Swayum nd vishakha nodded their heads nd walked off with her to the office

As kriya finished her work they were heading towards the rehersal hall

They were jst gonna enter when kriya saw shivam there

Shivam- hey kriya u r back nice to see u

Btw tum gayi kahan thi??? Huh

Kriya walked towards shivam nd said

Kriya- m giving u a last warning shivam stay away from me nd my friends nd tumne jo kiya hai na u will never be forgiven so better stay away nd mind ur own work

Swayum nd vishakha bth were confused as too wat shivam has done now...

*phew* khatam

So kaisa lagaa accha ya bura 😳

sorry for the typo errors

Yeh mera aur aroma ka ek aur combine wrk hai 😆

mere last two OS's dekhkar sochlo yeh waala kaisa hoga 😉 😆 😛

This os or ss wateva u say will hav 3-4 parts donno depends 😊

ohh sorry sorry bhul gayi thi

thnx to puja she gave us this concept

So plz hit the like tab nd comment

Jhutas chappals r welcum bt plz do comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Unres

Awesome

Thanks for the pm

True vishaka and swayam are only her true friends

Poor Taani 😆

Shivam is in trouble
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwieee...thnk u soo much i'm glad i cud make it to ur expectations...

n now the update ausum start n i guess i don't need to say it ofcrse when u guyzz are writing it n that too together blast lovee it to the core sachme...

kya entry hai kria ki wah n ye shivam he deserves soo much n chodna mat ise...

n rey right now me hating him the most...

awwieee swayam and vishakha only true frnzzz...

loved each n everything n the way u xplaind wah mai toh fida ho gayi...love u guyzz n the ff woh toh to the core...

ab jaldi se update de do haan haan pata hai yahi bologe kitni kamini hai khudne to ab unres kiya hai aur woh bhi yaad dilane pe aur hame abhi se update dene ke liye keh rhi hai...ab kya karoon guyzz aadat se majboor😆...mujhe update chahiye hai jaldi jaldi n haan kisiko mat chodna sab ko sudhar dena...

chalo ab me going haan pata hai chota sa cmnt tha but next update main compensate kar dongi bada wale comment ke saath ab jaaon isse pehle ki tum mujhe maro main jaa rhi hoon...bye
Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res... *unres* awesome... Loved it... Sharon shouting on taani...i like it... N rey supporting her...lagta hai upar ka mala hil gya hai... But baad mai he too shouted on her...dats good... Taani ka leg sprained...lagta hai bhagwan jab chalne ka tarika seekha re the to line mai sbse peeche thi...idiot kria back...wow!!! N swayam n vish were with her...dats superb...true frnds... N shivam...nonsence... Ek baar pitega na tab dimaag thikaane par aa jaega... Waiting for next part... Update soon.. .:)
Edited by puja_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start 😳

Kriya back 😃

Luvd it very much 😃

Waiting for d next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start Gals !
N kria Back !
So happie !
Update soon !
N Ty fr d PMs !
Luvd it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wrong post
comment on pg 4
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os...

luvd it..


kriya bck..


eagrly wi8ng 2 read mre..

ty 4 pm..


update nxt prt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome one cookie and aroma
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start 👏...
Eww...Rey called Taani "Baby" 🤢...
Gosh Rey ka dimagh pura khrab hogaya hai 😡...
Yay Kriya is back ...
Swayam and Vishaka are true friends 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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