love... - Page 5

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

shivi no posts from my side

im bocotting d3 and d3 forum coz of u noe it

sorry fb pe copy paste karke message kar diyo

Thanks for te pm nd nice cs :D

aMAZING concept please pm me

Hi. . , .
Itna awsome intro diya. . . . . .
Then,itna awsome cs de diya. . . .
Update dene ka iraada h ki nahi?? . . .
Yaar jaldi update dena,
egarly waitng 4 the update. . . . . . . . .

Hey Shivu, kaisi hai tu WC bac yaar...sorry for late response...thoda busy hun but pls updates zarur pm karna...aur jaldi update kar yaar tu toh sab jaldi jaldi kar deti hai usually

intro is awesome
and nice to see u back

nice cs it was fabulous loved it

Episode 1
New york ...its nite there
Sharon is in here room...about sleep...but takes her cell smiles on her wallpaper
...Txts
(This r not diagloues but its a chat between swaron)

Sh:bye...nite
Sw: bye???? Sleeping itna jaldi?
Sh:yaa tom my best frenz cuming frm mumbai
Sw:ooohh dats gr8 but woh log ke aane se don't forget me!
Sh:noo..wayz
Sw:now sleep..nite...

Mumbai its aftrnun here

R:bye dadi!
Dadi:new york se mere liye kya layega?
R:chocolates
Dadi:aur
R:chocolates
Dadi:dats lyk my reyu
R:rey dadi rey...bye bhabhi
Nidhi(rey's bhabhi):bye...
R:bye tia...
Tia (rey's sis): bye bhaiya..plz get all the things which r in the list
R:sure!
Prerna(rey's mum):bye rey...apna dhayan rakhna..plz
R:don't worry mum
P:plz call twice a day
R:maa pelhi baar nahi jaa raha hun!

Rey in his car calls neha
N:yaa
R:m cumng to pick u!
N:mee ready!
R:see u 15mins
Rey picks neha
& reaches the airport ...but takes a flight to delhi ...coz there was no direct flight available to ny that day

Smiriti :(kria's mum) kria jaldi...u'll get late for your fight
K: bas ready mum...
S:chaloo bye kria!
K: bye mum!
S:passport liya?
K:yess mum!
Kria's cell rings...
K:yaa bol vicky
V:aur kitne der hai?
K:bas done!
V: mee waiting down!
K:yaa phone rakh main aa rahi hun!

They both reache to delhi airport...seeing the indicator
V:wat the hell
K:shits how will we reach ny? Kal tak ...swayum ka b'day suprise pe pani phir gaya
V:tension maat le...I'll see if any other flight der
K: yaa

At the counter
V:I wanted to knw if der is any other flight to ny
The lady: yaa wait a min
Aftr sum tym
The lady: yaa sir but its at evng 7:30
V:vil do! Two tickets plz
The lady: sure sir...
Handling the tickets to him
The lady: here u go sir
V:thanx mam

At the flight
N:hum kitne baje puchnege delhi?
R: by 6
N:n ny ki flight hai?
R:7:30 ko
N:okay
They reach delhi by 6 they r waiting in the same waiting area where kricky is waiting

At 7:15
K:coffe?
V:maine leke aata hun?
K:no...I'll get ...it ...
V:cum fast!
There...
N:plz get a cup of coffee
R:sure...I'll cum
N:plz be back fast
R:yaa baba...

Precap: so kaise hogi kriyansh ki frist meet ? Aur kaise milege viha? Aur kya sharon ko yaad hai swayum ka b'day...

So guyz kaisa hai mera aur shivi ki first ff ka first episode! Plz leave all ur comments ...feedback...
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