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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Your hate PM threats sound hollow to me. I want to see what a hate pm looks like now. So, I think to that end, I will make this whole chapter a dream. Now, you decide, Arnav's dream, Khushi's dream or Di's dream! 😆

Thanks for reading Rasgullaji!

Of this longish update the only thing you decided to concentrate on was the hate PM bit???

I decide to track you down, kidnap you, tie you down to a desk, make you hold a pen and force you to write ASAP.

No welcome!

And I am sulking here (My skill in drafting a hate PM was just doubted)

u broozed ma hrt 😭

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Maxine..Maxine..Maxine - how I love the people who make you update this thrice a week. If only there were no real world obligations I swear I could coerce you and spam this thread enough to make you update daily. *Don't raise your eyebrows* I might start spamming this thread as soon as my exams are over..just wait!

I have told you before, haven't I? This FF is very refreshing with the mood-swingy Arnav. He must have looked so cute when he was mollycoddling Khushi not to date JayPee. I like how Khushi calls the shots here and then, Arnav makes her completely vulnerable and manipulates her emotions indirectly!

So much for a kiss! Is he acknowledging the feelings and reason for hiccups?? Ah! Give us more - it's not just friendship, it's more so give us more because yeh dill mange more 😆

I like Sally - I like her. She's nice😊

Wonderful Update😉

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Of this longish update the only thing you decided to concentrate on was the hate PM bit???

I decide to track you down, kidnap you, tie you down to a desk, make you hold a pen and force you to write ASAP.

No welcome!

And I am sulking here (My skill in drafting a hate PM was just doubted)

u broozed ma hrt 😭

Don't mind my undisciplined, rude and rowdy intervention!

To answer your question Maxine you can make that DM's dream so that she converts it into a longer reality in the nest part. Haha! And Rossogollaji, if you ever plan to write a hate mail to her because she doesn't update or something, you are free to ask for my assistance. I have written a lot of unsent hate letters to my physics teacher. This is just to enforce a threat which Maxine finds hollow! 😆

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Don't mind my undisciplined, rude and rowdy intervention!

To answer your question Maxine you can make that DM's dream so that she converts it into a longer reality in the nest part. Haha! And Rossogollaji, if you ever plan to write a hate mail to her because she doesn't update or something, you are free to ask for my assistance. I have written a lot of unsent hate letters to my physics teacher. This is just to enforce a threat which Maxine finds hollow! 😆

No -Dee- we don't mind your intervention...not at all. In fact, why even call it intervention? Your offer of assistance is most appreciated! Lemme just whisper into your ear so that Vid doesn't hear it. I have never written a hate email/PM to anyone. Between the two of us I know I will knock on your PM door when required. Don't worry I will give you due credit 😊

@bold: Vid answer that!

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

No -Dee- we don't mind your intervention...not at all. In fact, why even call it intervention? Your offer of assistance is most appreciated! Lemme just whisper into your ear so that Vid doesn't hear it. I have never written a hate email/PM to anyone. Between the two of us I know I will knock on your PM door when required. Don't worry I will give you due credit 😊

@bold: Vid answer that!

Saiya (I hope I got your name right): Humne aapka dil dukhaaya! Sorry, sorry, laakhon sorry.

It's not a dream. I'm not an evil-minded creative who gets paid to pull the rug out from under people'e feet. With me, WYSIWYG...for most part. Sigh.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

A chaste kiss on the forehead was all I had asked for! And you really tested the limits! Oh, no! I ain't complainin'!!
Please don't misunderstand me! 2 blazing kisses=a treat to read! :D
Now I'm eager to know how things would pan out. We do know that both, at the end of the day, are very thick-headed! :P

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Paarijat

@Paarijat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Hi,

I am halfway through your other story- Highway to Hell. I want to pass on my comments. Could you direct me to a thread in this forum where I can comment? Would you rather prefer I commented here?

Edited by Paarijat - 12 years ago

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Paarijat

@Paarijat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#888

I am a late entrant to the brigade of readers. Great update. I love the conversations between Khushi and Sally. Their camaraderie is excellent. One of your earlier chapters mentions Sally is 30. I somehow imagine her to be close to 35. Very nice character to the story.

I love this lovable idiot, Arnav. He is adorable. I like your Devi Maiyya. She's very real, isn't she? Taking off on a vacation when we need her most and showing up when we least expect her to. The ending of each chapter has been very nicely done. Loved it. We needed someone to look at the story and the characters this way...and you have done it for us. Thanks!

I also saw your profile on your blog. It was very interesting. You totally sound like Salman Rushdie speaking about yourself in third person. 😊 You wrote that you hope to publish your own book some day. I want to tell you this. I would totally pay money to read your stories.

Thanks for entertaining us. Bye for now.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Saiya (I hope I got your name right): Humne aapka dil dukhaaya! Sorry, sorry, laakhon sorry.

It's not a dream. I'm not an evil-minded creative who gets paid to pull the rug out from under people'e feet. With me, WYSIWYG...for most part. Sigh.

Weird for some reason I don't recall telling you my name...

Anyways, I will think of forgiving you only when you give me 3 updates this week. And I will definitely forgive you when you give me 3 updates the week after this? What say? 😆 😆 😆

Our conversation in Rafi and Lata style:

Tumhari nazar kyun khafa ho gayi/ Khata baksh do agar khata ho gayi.

Humara irada toh kuch bhi na tha/ Tumhari khata khud saza ho gayi...😊

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

No -Dee- we don't mind your intervention...not at all. In fact, why even call it intervention? Your offer of assistance is most appreciated! Lemme just whisper into your ear so that Vid doesn't hear it. I have never written a hate email/PM to anyone. Between the two of us I know I will knock on your PM door when required. Don't worry I will give you due credit 😊

@bold: Vid answer that!

Rossogollaji, you wouldn't need to give me credit as long as the threats make Maxine fulfil our wishes. I am not lacking experience at writing hate and threat mails but I don't know how they are received by stern, bald, spectacle-d forty year old lads teaching physics so..that's unsure! However, I happily offer my assistance and even companionship in your spamming/threatening trysts😆