ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145 - Page 90

Originally posted by: Paarijat

Hi,

I am halfway through your other story- Highway to Hell. I want to pass on my comments. Could you direct me to a thread in this forum where I can comment? Would you rather prefer I commented here?

Originally posted by: Paarijat

I am a late entrant to the brigade of readers. Great update. I love the conversations between Khushi and Sally. Their camaraderie is excellent. One of your earlier chapters mentions Sally is 30. I somehow imagine her to be close to 35. Very nice character to the story.

I love this lovable idiot, Arnav. He is adorable. I like your Devi Maiyya. She's very real, isn't she? Taking off on a vacation when we need her most and showing up when we least expect her to. The ending of each chapter has been very nicely done. Loved it. We needed someone to look at the story and the characters this way...and you have done it for us. Thanks!

I also saw your profile on your blog. It was very interesting. You totally sound like Salman Rushdie speaking about yourself in third person. 😊 You wrote that you hope to publish your own book some day. I want to tell you this. I would totally pay money to read your stories.

Thanks for entertaining us. Bye for now.

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Weird for some reason I don't recall telling you my name...

Anyways, I will think of forgiving you only when you give me 3 updates this week. And I will definitely forgive you when you give me 3 updates the week after this? What say? 😆 😆 😆

Our conversation in Rafi and Lata style:

Tumhari nazar kyun khafa ho gayi/ Khata baksh do agar khata ho gayi.

Humara irada toh kuch bhi na tha/ Tumhari khata khud saza ho gayi...😊

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Rossogollaji, you wouldn't need to give me credit as long as the threats make Maxine fulfil our wishes. I am not lacking experience at writing hate and threat mails but I don't know how they are received by stern, bald, spectacle-d forty year old lads teaching physics so..that's unsure! However, I happily offer my assistance and even companionship in your spamming/threatening trysts😆

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Dee...you wretch. Don't encourage her. 😆

Originally posted by: madmaxine

You didn't. At some point in a comment you said Saiya and Nancy make a great team. I know who Nancy is. 😊

As for the apology. I will reply in Shamshad Begum style now.

Kahin pe nigahein, kahin pe nishaana

Jeene do zaalim, banao na deewana!

Nice try Rasgulla!

Smart girl... My name is Saiyeda btw.

Rafi again:

Khilona jaan kar tum to mera dil tod jaate ho... 😭

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Let the little girl have fun while she is cooped up in her house after exams have finished with nothing to do and no friends to go out with..Let me have fun..Haha! 😆

Encourage me all you like!

Let a little girl who works with her sad boss be encouraged for some fun (read hate PMs) once in a while...

Vid if I'm not mistaken If I Were You has won the FF of the Week once again.

This calls for a celebration! Do we get 3 updates once again? See even DM wants you to :)

Congratulations :) :) :)

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Vid if I'm not mistaken If I Were You has won the FF of the Week once again.

This calls for a celebration! Do we get 3 updates once again? See even DM wants you to :)

Congratulations :) :) :)