A Raghavi Poem: Woh Pal - Page 2

its so beautiful...u write so so so well sneha!😍

Originally posted by: hazel16

Nice Poem!!

Thanks Hazel dear🤗 for leaving ur comment

Originally posted by: arunima_LUIT

Very nice. It suits them :)😊

Thanks Arunima for finding it worthwhile.🤗

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Thanks Betty dear 🤗,

For commenting and...

Yes, this was written with minimal words... no heavy weighing words used... rather this was one of the crumpled sheets in my best friend's stomach ( my study room trash can)... was the first draft ... hadn't been in a mood to continue with the poem's next draft after all the prev episodes...

Rather the last two para were written after yesterday's episode...it gave me some hope...
Had hell of a time emptying my trash can... n now my study is a mess😕... All thanks to RAGHAVI... Gosh cant even loose my temper on them... I'm such a goner 😍

I feel so happy wen I see ppl losing dere sanity coz of RaghaVi🤣

Ok sorry...yeah this one was a calm one...lol...this was one of ur trash?? I dont believe it ...

Originally posted by: betty123

I feel so happy wen I see ppl losing dere sanity coz of RaghaVi🤣

Ok sorry...yeah this one was a calm one...lol...this was one of ur trash?? I dont believe it ...

Betty Sweetheart,

Most of my write up land into as i said earlier my best friend's stomach ( my study room trash can)

I'm more of a scribbler dear... What don't believe yet???

Geez!!!!Do u expect me to show u my messed up study right now?... 🤣

Mesmering lines, just wonderfull, loved the poem doll👏

Originally posted by: stephenie

Ah Sneha what should I say..

You were awesome as ever di.Aapko bayaan karne ke liye alfaaz hi nahin hain mere paas..

As you always do...You have brought all the scenes and emotions of Raghav.

I love all your posts.Keep up the good work di!

Thanks steph dear... 🤗... yeh le teri jhappi ki installment... u do know that ur comments matter dear... 😃

Originally posted by: ..Apz..

its so beautiful...u write so so so well sneha!😍

Thanks Apz dear🤗 for finding beauty in it.😃

And let me add on Surya looks awesome dear... 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..Apz..

its so beautiful...u write so so so well sneha!😍

Thanks Apz dear🤗 for finding beauty in it.😃

And let me add on Surya looks awesome dear... 👍🏼

aww!! this is fantastic yara 👏

n this is so gonna be true:

Yeh zindagi kab tak humein,

Yun judah rakh payeegi?

Raat se ghiren ab par,

Kal subah ho jayegi...

very beautiful and well written poem 👏