A Raghavi Poem: Woh Pal - Page 3

di aap kitna acha likhti hai!!!

@Inner_voice

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Mesmering lines, just wonderfull, loved the poem doll👏

Yaadon ka naam dekar,

Palon ko sulaya hai,

Badi mushkil se humne,

Is dil ko manaya hai...

Thanks Chitra dear 🤗 for letting me know that u loved the poem and also letting me know ur fav lines of the same.

Originally posted by: siddhi209

Very nice, Sneha. Beautiful

Thanks Siddi dear 🤗 for liking my effort.

Originally posted by: suha16

very beautiful and well written poem 👏

Thanks Suha dear 🤗 Glad u found it beautiful.

Awww sneha🤗

👏👏👏 ohhh emmm geee sneha 👏👏👏 u r something👏 mere RaghavI tou hey hi magical 😳 aur tera fultoo magical spell hey😃

Beautiful ❤️ Loved it. Apt, perfectly perfect as Raghav's POV,his dil ka haal as some may say. Amazing work dear ! The whole thing was wonderful, yet these lines touched me the most -

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

👏👏👏 ohhh emmm geee sneha 👏👏👏 u r something👏 mere RaghavI tou hey hi magical 😳 aur tera fultoo magical spell hey😃

Tere comments bhi kuch kam magical nahi hain Silk... love u for them 🤗

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

First of all, sorry for the late comments ! College just started and life seems all the more hectic now ! Hardly get time ! *sigh* Sorry again ! Back to the Poem,

Beautiful ❤️ Loved it. Apt, perfectly perfect as Raghav's POV,his dil ka haal as some may say. Amazing work dear ! The whole thing was wonderful, yet these lines touched me the most -

Har pal mein aapki,

Yaadein basi hui hai,

Palkhon par aansoo hokar bhi,

Labon par hasi ruki hui hai...

The most beautiful and the most heart-wrenching lines...the worst possible situation, you know ? Pretending you're happy when you're literally dying inside...

Wo pal jo kal the hasaate

Aaj najaane kyun rulaate

Pal bhar ke vo saathi

Zindagi bhar dil ko sataate

Well, you inspired some from me too 😆 Not upto your standards, I know, but well...a girl can try 😉

Thanks Monudeewani 🤗... for finding it beautiful and that it had the desired effect.

Well sweets let me add on... ur lines were awesome... loved them... aise hi kuch lines post kar diya kar na yaar... we can have a blast... wud luv to read few more...😃

Originally posted by: arunima_LUIT

@Inner_voice

sorry I dnt know yr name.

I really found your poem very touching. Keep writing more . I too love reading n writing poetry.😊

Here is a short one for Raghav-sia:

Let me hold Your tear Drops

and let me change them

Into morning Dew drops.

Let me erase the dark hues of your dreams

And let me Paint a rainbow

On the door of your heart.

Let me look into your eyes forever.

Let me beckon you to a new start.

Hi Arunima 🤗... Sneha here... Thanks for finding my writings worthwhile...

Here is a link to my other write ups:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3077862/raghavi-ff-the-seasons-of-life

Do let me know ur impression as and when u get time...

And to add on... I loved those lines you have penned dear... Awesome... Why dont u post them on this forum... We wud loved to read ur works dear 😉... keep going dear 👍🏼

awww thank u sneha 😊 love n hugs.