AR FF: DMG,AR Pyar Forever Part 21 ud pg 52 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

awesome ff

update soon
and pm me plz

Thx
i will pm u
and ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

Awesome part😊 😊

loved possessive armaan❤️...
interserting promo waiting eagerly for ur update...update soon
and thanks for the PM😃


THX
lol!! possessive ammy
the next ud will b better
xxx😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Awesome update

Do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet


THX
geet hope u had a great b'day...
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: krazykiller

Update soon. And thanks 4 this ud


😊NO PROB
WILL UD SOON
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
DMG, AR PYAR FOREVER

PART 9

Hey guys, I hope u enjoyed part 8. Ab enjoy part 9. Let ne know what u think. K guys. And dont forget to comment. Thx xxx



Sanjeevani...
Armaan still worrying. He is walking past the corrider when he feelz a tug and someone pulss him in the fire exit

Ammy: Riddhima... Tum..
Ridzi: Haan main. To
Ammy: tumne mujhe yaha kyun bhulaya
Ridzi: Armaan ab bohot hogaya. Mujhe samaj nahi aati ke hum kyun itna jagar rahe hain.
Ammy: God riddhima, tumhe koi andaaza nahi hain kya. Aaj bhi tum viren ke saath thi. Tumhe agar vo itna acha lagta hain, to tum uske,saath kyun nahi jaa ke pyar kar leti.
Ridzi: Kyunki main sirf tumhse pyar karti hu. Aur kisse se nahi.
Ammy: Haan, ryt aur iss liye jab plane main uss ne tumhe ek necklace diya to tum khushi se usse pehn li. Oh sorry he put it on for u.
Ridzi: armaan, uss ne mere liye koi necklace nahi laya ta. Vo meri ti jo ghir gaya ta.
Ammy: I dont care anymore.
Ridzi: par...
Ammy: Aaj bhi vo tumhare peeche peeche ayya sanjeevani main. U know theres a difference in between being just friends and being more
Ridzi: Tum kehna kya chahte
Ammy: yahi kai tum uss ke saath overfriendly ban rahe ho.
Ridzi: stop it armaan
Ammy: what stop it. Dont u get it. He flirts with u.
Ridzi: mujhe tumpe yakin nahi hota. Maine hi ghalti kar di tumse baay karni ki.
Ammy: jus go. I dont wana talk
Ridzi: FYN


Ridzi leaves leaving armaan tensed

Canteen...
Ridzi: tum nahi gayai abhi tak viren.
Viren: Haan vo actually tumhara kaam ho jaaye to cofee pena challe.
Ridzi: urmm... Ok kitna acha dost ho tum
Viren: teek hai. To ill pick u up bout 6. Tumhara mood bhu tab tak thik ho jayenga.
Ridzi: bye.

Ridzi to herself:* maine haan kyun kaha. Main hamesha kisse ko naa keh hi nahi sakti. I just hope armaan ko iss ke baare main kuch na pata challai. Aur main uss ke baare main kyun soch rahi hu. Ammy ke vaja se main naraz nahi ho jawoongi*


General ward:
Dr keerti: Dr armaan, dr riddhima.
Ammy: Yes maam
Ridzi: Ji dr keerti
Keerti: kya reports apkai patient ka ho chooka hain???

They both hand in seperate files
Keerti: Yeh kya 2 files.
Ridzi: vo maam mere aur Dr Armaan ki soch alag hain patient ki baare main.to shahyid isse liye Dr Armaan ne apni khud ki file ban wali.
Keerti: fyn. Mujhe deh do
They hand in both the files, riddhima goes off


Locker room
Ammy: Hey nikki, tum itni chup kyun dekhrahee ho aur vo bhi itni udhaas.
Nikki: nahi ammy, kuch nahi hua.
Ammy; nikki tum mere best friend ho aur main tumhe bachpan se jaanta hu, tum mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti
Nikki: Main sirf yeh kahoongi kai ridzi ka kayal rakna.
Ammy:haan hamae fight hui hain. But tum fikr not main solve karlonga. Tum kyun roh rahi ti.
Nikki: vo... Vo... Tumhe pata hain... Vo viren jo ridzi ke saath aaya ta aaj.
Ammy: haan main uss ... Ko jaanta hu. Kyu. Kya hua.
Nikki: Ridzi ko kabhi mat uske saath akele mat chorna.
Ammy": But why
Nikki: yaad hain jab main college leave hui ti
Ammy: Haan yaad hain.
Nikki.: tab viren se main militi. Vo hamare college main nahi jaata ta. Par we used to ho out.
Ammy: Phir...
Nikki: phir pehle to vo bohot acha ra, ek dum perfect bf ta. Pan ek raat main usse nai mijhe phek diya. Kyunki jo vo jahta ja... Vo usse mil gaya.
Ammy: you mean he... Mujhe to sharam aati hain yeh kehne main. Saalle. Tum ne pehle kyun nahi bataya ke vo kaisa ta.
Nikki: mujhe hi nahi yakin ho rahee ti jab maine usse aaj dekha.
Vo bass larkiyon ko use karna jaanta hai. Dar hain, ke vo ridzi ke saath kuch ulta sidha na kar den
Ammy: Dont worry main aisa hona nahi dunga. Agar usse mai ridzi ke saath kuch bhi try kiya to ill break his legs.
Nikkis pager rings
Nikki: Sorry ive gota go. Duty bhula rahee hain.

After work
Viren arrives out of sanjeevani waiting for ridzi. Nikki sees him there and goes up to him
Nikki: viren please riddhima ke saath kuch ghalat mat karna vo bogot bholi hain. Vo sehen nahi kar payengi.
Viren: Jo hamare beech main hua ta vo hogaya. Its history and i 've changed too

Ridzi comez up
Viren: challe ridzi. Cafe chale
Ridzi: bye nikki
Nikki: par ridzi wait
Ridzi: kal baat karengai. Bye

Viren: kaha jayye madam
Ridzi: Round the corner ek cafe hain vaha pe jaare hain.
Viren: ok
Ridzi: urm tum kya order,karongai?
Viren: urm... 1 cheese cake slice aur ek cappucino. And tum
Ridzi: 1 choco cake slice and mocha.


They eat and head back to the car

Meanwhile in sanjeevani...
Nikki: Armaan yaha pe awwoon.
Ammy: kya hua
Niki: ridzi viren ke saathgaye hai coffe pe nai
Ammy; oh no challo. Lets check in the nearest cafe jo round the corner hi hain


They go check. Ridzi vaha pe nahi hoti hain.
Ammy: ab kya kare.
Nikki: I think yahi address hain viren ka. Agar vo vaha pe usse legaya ho to.
Ammy: oh no I hope riddhima teek hain
Nikki: dont worey. Challo
Meanwhile in car
Ridzi: viren hum kaha aaya hain
Viren: yeh mera ghar hain. Please come in
Ridzi: well... Urmm ok.


They go inside, chat for a while and vireb usse pura ghar gumata hain, until vo bedroom main ponch te hain

Ridzi: wow... Tumhare view bohot acha hain.
Viren: jaanta hu.


Viren goes forward and puls riddhima to him, and tries pulling the string on the back of ridzi's dress.
Ridzi: viren tum.. Tum kya karahe ho
He kisses her neck and clutchez her and take vo hil nahi paaye
Ridzi: ooucch.. Viren kya karahe ho. Please stop
Viren: main iss din ka bohot intezaar kar raha ta.

Ridzi tries to pull away but he grips her to him.
Ridzi: please mujge chordo. Please. Armaan help. someone...Help
Viren: tumhaara bf to yaha nahi hain.To ab kaun bachane aayengaa tumhe
Ridzi: ouch. Mujhe choro please


Promo..
Kya ammy time pe ponchayenga ridzi ko bachane
Ya...
Kya viren apni man mani kar payenga.
Read part 10 to find out.

Guys kaisa,ta.maina interesting part pe rok diya na. I hope u enjoyed it.
More romance will b comin soon.length tik tana. Thx for all ur comnents iss part main bhi coment kar na guys please. Next part more bettet hoga.

So please comment and like

Il ud part 10 soon
Love u lots
Sammara
XXX. :)
Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Sammaraxx


THX
geet hope u had a great b'day...
xxx



Heyyy

yuppp,enjoyed a lot😃

Thanks once again for ur wishes🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wow u updated
Really loved it
Written beautifully
want to read more
So do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM in advance😉
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sweetdesire



Heyyy

yuppp,enjoyed a lot😃

Thanks once again for ur wishes🤗



Thts good
no prob
ill ud soon
thx xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awww. Nyc parttt... Aww ths v is soo cheap. Herooo bacha le apni kakkiii koo jaldiii... Upd sooon. Ridz armaan ko dherrr saara sorry bole
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

wow u updated

Really loved it
Written beautifully
want to read more
So do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM in advance😉
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet


haha lol
thx geet
ill ud more
happy u enjoyed it
xxx
😊

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