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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krazykiller

u write. M fine ji. Gusa thek ho gya ji.


K thn ill write
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Originally posted by: krazykiller

Apnay dmg walay cc pay a jao na.


Oh ok.
Abhi aati hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
DMG,AR PYAR FOREVER

PART 17

Hey guys... This is Part 17.. Hope u enjoy n pls comment
I have replied to all ur comments on the previous few pages.
Thanks
Sooo here goes

Riddhima ran out of her fathers office and into the fire escape. She sat down on the step still taking in what had happened. She couldnt believe that her so called dad had accused her mom of an affair
. suddenly her phone rang... It was armaan.. She dared to pick it up n she cudnt talk to him right now she wanted to b alone

Riddhimas shift finishes..
Nikki comes up to her

Nikki: hey ridzi. Kya hua? Bohot udhas lag rahee ho?
Ridzi; nahi vo bohot thak gayi ti par ab thik hu.
Nikki: achaa to ridzi mujhe tumhari advice chahye ti?
Ridzi: advice? Kaise advice
Nikki: vo...vo.. Actually Abhi ke baare main..
Ridzi: ohhh aise baat hain toh bholo kaise advice?
Nikki: yeh main yaha nahi bata sakti.. Kyun na hum BlueWaters club jaate hain?
Ridzi: club main. Nikki mera mann nahi lagraha.
Nikki: pls pls pls hum party nahi karengai bas baat .plz tum meri bohot achi dost hona???
Ridzi: thik hain. Mera shift,khatam hogaya hain. Toh main tumhara vaha wait karoongee.
Nikki: thank u thank thank u. Ur the best...


End of shift...
Armaan came outside looking for Riddhima but could not fynd her anywhere
Ammy: hey muski yaar tumne riddhima ko kahi dekha.
Muski: urmmm haaan actually i think vo jaldi ghar challi gayi hogi.
Ammy: oh ok. Thx yaar.


Meanwhile at a club
Ridzi is sittin on the table waiting for Nikki when she remembers her real father. She hadnt told armaan n she didnt want to upset him. Tears ran down her face unknowingly until she wiped it away n told herself not to cry. Nikki still hadnt come so ridzi decided to ring her.she dialled the number...beep...beepp..beepp.
It went to voicemail. Ridzi spoke :hi nikki kaha ho tum yeh msg sun ke jaldi aajana tumhe abhi ki baat karni ti nah. Ill wait for a while..

She put the phone down...


Some guys on another table who had heard ridzi talk on the phone walked up to riddhima who was still so stressed..
A guy: hello.
Ridzi: urm. Hello.. Do i kno u?
Another guy: noo. We r Nikki's friends
Ridzi: oh im sorry hi. Did she call u here?
Guy: ya.. To talk about Abhi
Ridzi: but thts y she called me here?.
Other guy: mayb she wanted more opinions
Ridzi: haan ur ryt ji ...
Guy: urmm wud u lyk a drink?
Ridzi: nahi main peeti nahi hu bas soft drink urmm coke.
Guy: r u sure? Ok..
Ridzi: one minute guys. Main washroom jaake aati hu?

Ridzi goes to the washroom...
Meanwhile..
Guy: yaar kitne hot hain? Jackpot..
Other guy: i kno. Yakin nahi hua ki vo yeh sach mangayi. Par usne soft drink maanga ab?
Guy: bas is packet main jo haim usse coke main dhaldo. Phir dekhna ...


Ridzi returns
Other guy: ur soft drink
Ridzi: thank u..
She drinks it.. Not knowin anythin about it
Guy: shall i bring some more...
Ridzi: no koi baat nahi
Other: ye lo. Itni formality ki zaroorat nahi hain
Ridzi: thx. Par yeh nikki nahi aayi ab tak. Btw aap log ka naam
Guy; im ajay.
Other: im arjun.. N haan nikki bhi na.
Ridzi: oh. Nyc to meet u.
She drinks her drink again

Song playin in background.
Ridzis head starts hurtin. Alot..
Guy: lets all dance !!
Ridzi: actually no main
Other: come on.
Thy decide not to dance as ridzi's head starts spinnin. No go to the lobby n sit on the couch
Ridzi: paani mujhe paani chahye pls ... Paani
Guy: Ye lo
He hands her the soft drink...
Ridzi tries pushin it away
Ridzi: yeh nahi paani..pls..
But thy make her drink it anyway..

Ridzi starts to get weaker n feels lyk shes gna faint. Her phone rings..

Nikki: ridz hello. Im sorry main nahi aapaugi kaam aagaya.
Ridzi: nikki. Nikki... Vo.. Tumne tumhare doston ko bhi.bhulaya ta . Arjun n ajay
Nikki: no. Yeh mera dost nahi hain.
N the phone goes dead.

Ridzi feels sick n fully dead
Ridzi: pls.. Plss. Mujhe. Mujhe jaane do. mujhe ghar jaana hain
Guy: aaj nahi aaj raat hamare saath rehna hoga
Ridzi: pls. Ouchh my head.
She tries to go but cannot walk straight.
Someone sees this n ridzi too n in a state n beats them badly n calls security. ..
.,her vision goes blurred so cannot see the man who saved her she utters thx By the tym security takes the guys out ridzi leaves from the place


She is walkin on the roads half fallin nearly. Suddenly riddhima faints and falls down a small hill. Into the jungle

Meanwhile...Armaan drives the car back home...he runs towards the door and clicks the key
Armaan: basket...kaha ho tum?
He searches the whole house but cannot find her anywhere
His phone buzzes...
Nikki: armaan riddhima

Ammy: riddhima? Kaha hain?
Nikki tells him she was supposed to meet her at the club bit cudnt go. N tht wen she had rang the phone went dead..Something was wrong
Ammy: thik hain .main jaata hu. Agar riddhima jo kuch hua main tumhe chorungaa nahi.


He gets in his car n rushes down to the club.
On his way he sees a red dupatta . He stops the car.
Ammy: Yeh toh riddhima ka hain...Toh phir Riddhima
He looks around trying to find her but is unable to...
He walks further into the jungle and tries to search...
Armaan sees somebody on the floor inside he is wishing that it is not riddhima lying there...

When he comes closer he sees that it is riddhima...She is there unconscious..
Armaan kneels down and tries to wake her but she doesnt, however she is still breathing..
He picks her up and takes her back to the car...
In the car...He throws water upon Riddhima's face and she reacts to this and wakes up...
Ammy: Riddhima

Ridzi: Armaan kya hua..Main yaha.. Main toh
Ammy: riddhima kya hua ta tum...tum vaha jungle main kya kar rahee ti.


Ridzi: Main..jungle main ti..how?? main vaha kaise gayi
Ammy; vo tumhe pata hoga. bholo na kaise?
Ridzi: armaan mujhe kuch yaad nahi hain...
Ammy: What do u mean by tht?? tum unconscious ti..Are u drunk?
Ridzi still feels very wary n tyred
Ridzi: noo. im not drunk tumhe toh pata hain ke .. i .i dont drink...
Ammy: Toh phir aise halat kaise hui...Aise hi hua kya? yaad karo
Ridzi: nahi voo...vooo angel
Ammy: angel? matlab
Ridzi: club main... main
Ammy: riddhima club main kya
Ridzi: CLub mainn.. kuch larkon ne ...
Ammy: kya?

Ridzi: mere saath batameezi karni ki sochi ti
RIdzi's head starts hurting more and then tells him wht they had told her and exactly what happened
Ridzi: phir mera angel ne mujhe bacha liye
Ammy: what? what angel. mujhe kuch samajh nahii araha.
RIdzi: jab bhi main mushkil main ti tab mera angel hamesha mera help karta ta
Armaan is still confused as to what riddhima was refferring to the angel as

He spoke to himself: riddhima is not in a right state thats why shes sayin all dis about angels n doesnt know herself what shes sayin... I wont say anything to stop her ryt now until shes fyn...
So he jus pulls her into a hug
Ridzi: tumne mera angel ko dekha
Ammy: no
Ridzi: main joot nahi bhol rahe hu.. mera angel hain...
Ammy: haan riddhima angel to hain... ur ryt
He decides to agreee to her ...
Ammy: toh riddhima agar tum drunk nahi ho toh kya hua.
Ridzi: i m not drunk. main toh bas soft drink pee rahe ti. I was drinking coke
Ammy: Coke?? then how? Wait a minute.. unne larkon ne kuch mila toh nahi diya ta na tumhare drink main
Ridzi: vooo..vooo
Ammy: batu riddhima
Ridzi: haan.. She nods... kuch karna mat armaan...sab kuch ab thik hogaya hain
Ammy: what do u mean thik hogaya hain... Tumhare aise halaat hogayi hain aur tum keh rahee ho ki kuch na karo
Ridzi: angel ne sab thik kardiya

Armaan decides not to argue anymore... and drives back home...
Riddhima is half awake and so with Armaan's support walks back inside.with her head on his shoulder
Armaan is about to slid his key in the door but he realises it is already open...
Theygoo inside and find riddhima's parents and nikki on the couch...
Armaan is shocked...and so is Dr. Shashank
He walks upto RIddhima and Armaan
Shash:Thank god Riddhima mil gayi ti..Thx Armaan
Ammy: par sir aap ko kisne bataya

Shash: vo nikki ne kaha ta
Ammy: oh NIKKI ne...He gives her a glare
SHash: par riddhima...Aise...Tumne pee rakhi hain riddhima?...
RIddhima is too weak and cannot answer...
Shash: humne tumhe itna freedom diya iss ka yeh matlab nahi ki aap aisa kare...
Thats it Anjali aaj se tumhe bhi bohot freedom nahi milengaa
Anj: par dad
Ammy: sir. yeh riddhima ki fault nahi hain...Kisse nai drink main kuch miladiya ta
Shash: oh ryt... thx armaan beta...

Riddhima sees her mum and slowly with armaan walks up to her
Ridzi: mama... papa
She starts crying ...
Padm: roh kyun rahee hain
Ridzi: nahi mama papa vo bas jab aap... aap. pune main te toh aapki yaad aayi...ti..

Nikki: Im sorry Armaan
Ammy: its ok yaar...


Armaan then takes riddhima upstairs and puts her into the bed...She falls asleep instantly
Armaan slowly kisses her on her forehead...
She doesnt let go off Armaans hand all night

Next morning...
Riddhima and Armaan are still in bed...cuddled next to each other...
Suddenly someone rings the alarm on the door outside
Ridzi: armaan jau na...
Ammy: nahi jauga... mujhe yahi rehna hainn...
Ridzi: pls jau...
Ammy: thik hain babes.. vaise bhi nikki hogi ya hamare gang...GUYS MAIN AARAHA HU... SAARA ROMANCE PLANS BHIGAR DIYA TUM LOG NE..He shouts while walking to the door...
He slids the key into the door in his vest and opens it half expecting it to b their gang...
He sees a bunch of ppl

Girl: hiii...
A tom boyish girl says
Ammy: hiii.. do i kno u guys
Girl: not yet.. Riddhima in
Ammy: yeah.. but who r u guys?
Boy: ull see bro
Ridzi screams from their room: armaan who is it ?
Ammy: come out its for u...
RIdzi: im comin. U beta b sayin the truth...

She comes out and into the hallway...
Ridzi: aaahghhh mishaaa
SHe runs to the girl and gives her a big hug...
Ridzi: Mishaaa tum yaha... wow.. n Panchi..
SHe hugs Panchi
Mish: Yaar DJ wher've u been
Ammy: Who's DJ.
Mish: dude thts ur wyf the best DJ in the whole of London...
Ridzi: Kabir... ur here tooo with angad

Kabi: yes im here tooo
Angas: me tooo...
They hug too...
Ammy seperates them : ok.. thtts enough hugs.. dont u think...
Jai: ooohhh Jealousy
Ridzi: oh look who it is Jai ...
Jai: Let it be.. lets b mates now..Sab bhul jaate hai
Ridzi: good idea...
..Sorry Armaan yeh hain meri college aur uni ke best friends...
And yeh hain...
Gang: ooohh Armaan
Ammy: yup thts me..
Panchi: Tumne bataya nahi tumhare shaadi ho gayi hain aur vo bhi itne handsome hunk se...Love ta kya
Ridzi: haann...
Armaaan very cutely smiles...

And thts where i wrote to😃
So guys wht do u guys think...
I hope u enjoyed it😛
Pls pls pls comment n tell me what u think of it
n give me ur feedback na
ill ud soon with the next part 18.😊

Luv u all
Sammara
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Posted: 12 years ago

yeasss yeffiii 👏

i m the first one to like it and read it 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!!n really missin dese scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago

very nicely written

i liked it very much

every sccene was playing in front of my eyes

awesomely written

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...ridz k saath y kya hogaya.. Wo larkke b na.. Ye angel kon hai bhaii...waiting to knw.. Armaan shd confront ridz naaa... Nd new entriess..woww
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part! very nicely written!
thnx 4 pm
do cont soon

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