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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Kyuaaa ??

Shyaamwa se shaadi ??
No wonder she didnt feel the sparks !!

NK , mere bhai, pease help her run away as soon as possible !!
She shoudlnt be where she is !! But Shyam is still the same creepy person !
Always lusting !! 😡

Loved the update Liya !! It was such a shocker at the end, but Im waiitng for more

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Did i read wrng or it is Shyam jha as he husband

Hw culd u

Itna bada jhatka

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

OMG! Shyam?! shyam?!

now that was a twist that i did not see coming - crossed my mind when she said s for mehndi but i dismissed it

cant wait to see where you take this

thanks for the pm :)

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Reswaa gonna come back to read this!!

I can't believe a few days of my absence brings about this! :o

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

What just happened?!

That last line was such a sucker punch! What a blow Aliya!

Now I know why you said- Don't be shocked.

Im shocked beyond words!

all along Im like Oh so Arnav is being what he is-ruthless to the core. Khushi's gonna be tormented, and lalala. That excerpt looked like it was Arnav too.

And then you throw Shyam on me!

Im like whaaa?!

See it shows I can never expect anything predictable from you, cos you always give me something unexpected!

Oh does that also mean my thinking is limited to the obvious? I needa charge my thinking lol!

Okay, I must say I loved it. the fact that you managed to blow me off my wits with one line, and the story too haha!

Love you!