ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1]

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shelja

@shelja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

hey dats ur story and we like vt u write so b cool n write vt u think is comfortable vid u. in anyway v r gonna like it.

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: ..nisaluvrk..
ha...*sighs* finally m here to comment...😳
but u know d reason di...see here i am...🤣

i freaking luvd d two updates..u explain everything so beautifully di...i can actually see everything..not to mention d naughtiness...!!!!!😉😆(no..no m juz joking!!!)😳
luvd d last line 'wat arnav has gotten himself into'...hmm..i cud see khushi must hv turned everything upside for mr. arnav wid her breathtaking appearance...

regarding ur note di...u write d way u want den only it will come perfectly...its completely ur story n u r free to pour watever thoughts u want..😊
i am really luking forward to dis change in d story...u r making it more realistic wich shud b d way..as u told me once..😊
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ur chotti..!

yes...i know the reason for the delay in ur comment...

hope u are alright n healthy now...else i demand u to go back to bed now...

and thanx fr the lovely comment honey...one of my sis commenting means alot to me... and yes...

this story is gonna go my way now... the changes will be subtle and u'll understand it and love it hopefully...

luv ya chotti princess...😉

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

di well i dont know what to say..you are a writer i will give you opinion go for the story like you start before ..when yuo wrote pro

thats my opinion...!

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Jyothi

@sizezeroaddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Its FF! You r always welcome to write wat's on ya mind, and to b frank, i wud rilly love to know how u want the story to go on!

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Yash141

@Yash141

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

I think the story is writer's property... It totally belongs to her/him.. It's up to u to decide what u should do with your story darling... And I'm sure u'd do it wonderfully.. As I'm seeing in MM u can bring in uniqueness in a story. As I've mentioned earlier..I'm not much of a M&B fan.. And for me, it doesn't matter whether it's a happy ending or not.. As long as u keep me gripped..

So do it in your way.. That's my opinion.. but still, the final decision is yours.. Dnt try to change the story line in your mind for other factors.. Then it won't be yours... But i second Shruti's idea of putting reality and sense in to the story.. She's right.. A story is much more readable when it comes with the sense of reality..

I'm so sorry for not being able to comment regularly.. I'm sooo busy with my academic work.. Exams, research, clinical appointments and stuff... But I promise that I'm reading all your updates and will comment whenever I can, ok...

Keep it up girl... And keep rocking!!

Bear Hug 🤗

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

I recently experienced an unfortunate incident as well so a little dose of reality won't hurt!! In any case, I'll still read your story in whatever direction you see fit! I'm sure I will love it! I hope writing this FF will be your therapy and make you feel better about life! 🤗

BTW, I'm glad there will be a happy ending, Sam! 😃

Edited by Katelyn - 13 years ago

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hello,

The way story should move is the discretion of the author...when youreally do what you want with the characters,It would be good.

Good Luck😊

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

very nice
please update soon

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farha

@farha5556

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

ohhh honey i have read so many m&b stories so keep it up by ur way,as u said reality dont bite dont hesitate keep ur good work,and continue soon

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Arati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Heyy!!

All i can say is that you should write what you feel like...its your story...doesn't matter if you started it off in an M&B way...it should come naturally to you...trust me as a writer...until you are satisfied with it, you won't be able to do justice to it.

SO, just write it the way you feel like...i think its amazing when we don't have to stick to some known story...and give our story any direction we feel like...im sure I and all your other readers will love it any which way :) XX