ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1] - Page 10

Its a brilliant story and a great update. The way you described both of them and the chemistry they share was wow. Continue soon. Plz pm me when u update

Originally posted by: RTlicious

Res! Yep...i found this by fluke...will read and comment :) x

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Love love loved it!!!! The dress was so beautifully described...and m sure it made arnav go totally speechless...wow! can't wait to see how he will control himself...plus i really like the fact that this khushi is also feeling the attraction and accepting it...i can just feel the combustion when they will kiss the first time😳...great characterization hun!👏

Also i truly like the fact that you've made Aman and Khushi as good friends here...waiting to read their relationship...should be interesting!

So glad u updated!! Waiting for the next one eagerly :) xoxo

omg it was too too gud awesomeness!! beauty personified machi ! <3 it

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

aartyyy...thanx for the awesome comment...

im happieee u loved their characterization...

and yes...i wanted Aman n Khushi to be frnds...it felt right to write...

AND THIS IS THE DRESS...

there will be one more new character in the next...u'll see...

*hugs

I just discovered this awesome FF!! I'm loving it so much! I love your brilliant writing especially how you described their amazing attraction and chemistry. I can't wait for this inferno to flare out! Please please update soon and thank you for sharing your talent! Keep it up!

enjoyed the update.. can't wait to see how the evening flares for them.. khushi made a new friend :)

Brilliant writing. amazing update. Worth the waiting. dnt think I need to say more. 😉 update again soon.

Aww, honey!!!!
Every writer (Read: Harshitha Shankar) starts in a bad way!
Its the way you improvise yourself, and raise the bar, that matters!!
And may I add, that you have done it in a superb manner for yourself!!
I bet you can see the changes in your writing, yourself. . . . 😊

I am glad I could be of any help in this regard!! 😃

And so, I finally read this FF!! (I am sorry for the delay!! 😳 )

And WHAT do we have here?! Such a fiery ArHi?! I almost felt the flutters in my stomach when Arnav ran his finger on Khushi. . . . *sighs*

Amazing story, Sam, my Monkey girl!! 🤗

Fab update..I can just about imagine what a stunning couple these two would make..

Arnav drowned in her doe like almond delicacies ... wow what description for eyes !!! Good one ... carry on Sam!