ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1] - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
pliz contd soon. its vry xcitin to read👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruti21

i took forever in commenting i know... but no sorry.. because i was confused what to comment..


stop giving that weird look to me... yeah i know u must be hating me right now and even cursing..
feel free to that love...hehehe but seriously i generally pick up the para's i like and write what i feel...
but here i had neutral feeling all the way.. and definitely i'm not going to write for every single line.. or else from next time you will say melody don't comment...😆

what the..
why arnav is acting like a looser... he is THE ASR na then why he din get a date for himself and spare poor khushi... god.. why the hell arnav has be so heartless n selfish..?? arghh...

*fingers crossed* hope khushi dont get into some trouble again with MEDIA.. and even she atleast arnav protect her or else i will kill him...

or may be this whole drama leads to something good like khushi overcome her fear... hai na..??

Wow...!!!
aman n khushi are friends forever.. like us..😊 that's nice atleast she has someone beside her when she is far away from her family which do consist of two people only...

The dress was Marvelous.
not for me.. first she wont be able to eat properly and second it was looking so damn suffocating...

shruti..!! really... god from where you got this idea.. but yeah thanx atleast you din made aakash-shruti couple... i would have died with the embarrassment...😉

Shruti observed Khushi for a while and decided to make her feel atleast comfortable with the entire thing.
aawwiieee... i loved this... what made you write this i don't know but i still loved it...

There he was, the one who she found hard not to fantasize about. Though he looked the usual in his black tux with white shirt, the way he carried off his look with the top two buttons of his shirt wide open and his sexily messed up hair-do made her halted her pick up its beating with a skip in its rhythm and a renewed frenzy. She fought hard to stand up straight in her four inches high pumps. And that was the moment he chose to turn his smoldering gaze upon her.
this para cracked me up thinking how you must be drooling over barun while writing it...

That small taste of her tantalizing silk of skin made him want and crave for more with the very first touch.

What had he gotten himself into!
hahaha... PERFECT ending...

that was a beautiful update.. loved your every bit of description...





im not cursing u atall...im just happy u commented atlasttt...phewww...!!!
and u were right...i had my eyes bulged out wen u said CONFUSED abt wat to comment...now seriously melz...glad ur confusion got cleared...

and ASR is always a loser...only Arnav is the heart stealer... he'll be up in a few more updates hopefully...
and khushi wont get into any trouble coz she has the greatest trouble as her date...lolz

and her family consists of 2 n a half ppl right now...u forgot my Aadhiii...

yes her dress was a bit tight... bt dont worry...she wont be eating much...i mean she wont feel like eating atall with complete hotness dining beside her...

u always make me feel comfortable wen im stressed or happy wen i feel like crying...
thats wat my shruti did to my khushi too...

u were right...i was sooo drooling over him all looney eyed while writing his description...that man always stops my heart...

and the next update will be up tomoro...;)
luv ya melodyyy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous...I am an addicted M&B fan. Your work will be worthy for them to publish...Please PM when you update
All The Best
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updatee...
thnx4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i amm sppechless di how could you wrie like this

yar so intense i never thought you are this much great writer
spell bounded by your writting style..
great...!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
jus came across dis ff.. simply amazing.. khushi is his date.. wow cant wait for wats gonna happen.. awwsum writing.. plzz pm wen u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey loved it..great work
please Pm me when u update :)
Sending u a buddy request :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing waiting for the other part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
read the 3 chap in one go wooow must say very unique itz WONDERFUL

thanks for sharing i love it

plz update sooon wud like to read more thanks :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE

Hello my lovely readers... Hope you are having a happy day...

The reason i decided to add in a note is that Im thinking of taking this story akin to reality as much as possible... It is a fan-fic, Yes. But reality wont hurt right. It could get a bit ugly at times, cause we all know that reality has a habit of hitting us right on our faces. But I promise to take it as subtle as I could.
This was supposed to be an M&B actually. That's what i had mentioned in the Prologue. But something made me come out of my surreal world and it is kinda hard for me to get back into the dreamy state I had been in all this while trying to hide my pain regarding an unfortunate incident in my life.
My friend Shruti here, she started knocking some sense into me. And now Im gald she did. She actually pulled me out of the delusional pit I had been in all these while. Thanks alot Shruti. I owe you for this dear.

So the actual thing I wanted to know was, would you like me to go by the M&B way cause most of you started reading this for that exactly as i had read all your comments. Or do you want me to take it the way i feel this story should go now according to my mind set.
I am in a dilemma, cause I write for you guys to enjoy the words in my story.

Do drop in your views regarding this PLEASE.
And I could manage with whatever majority response I get. If you guys want it the M&B way, then I might need some time before I start writing again. Else I would gladly start writing today and updating from tomorrow if you guys want me to stay out of my surrealism.

WAITING...PLEASE GUYS...DONT HESITATE TO TELL ME YOUR VIEWS REGARDING THIS...
IT WILL MEAN ALOT TO ME

~~~ sam xoxo
Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago

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