ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1]

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

tee hee.

WHEN ARE THEY DOING THE DEED?

I'm pretty done with the nonsense I write. I NEED THIS LOVING! :D

LOVE THE UPDATES SO FAR. I just read them. ^_^

haha! Anyway, hoping to see another one sooon! :D

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sharneil92
tee hee.

WHEN ARE THEY DOING THE DEED?

I'm pretty done with the nonsense I write. I NEED THIS LOVING! :D

LOVE THE UPDATES SO FAR. I just read them. ^_^

haha! Anyway, hoping to see another one sooon! :D

ah ha... this is based on M&B ofcourse...

so all i can say is THE DEED SHALL BE DONE SOON...lolz

will update this one tomoro shaaliii... whoa... I MISSED YOU luv...mwaaahhh

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Good build up...their sparring has started... waiting for the next update

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

me waiting n waiting n waiting...lol

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

i just love spamming ur thread...

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Yash141

@Yash141

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Awww...Saaam...U lovely lovely girl...

This is for meee???

Sorryyy that I came late

And Shaaaluuu!! Where's my Shalu Balu?

Thanku soo much.. I feel so honored..

And yea.. may our friendship last forever..

See I brought in the special smiley faces for u...

About the story...

I'm not much into M&B but still I like the arrogant ASR mode..

it's so hot and inviting naa..

This is very different from your other one..and I actually like that fact..

Have to say the u are a very unique writer.. MM is just out of this world..

And this..I'm loving this..

The concept seems different.. And I like digging-out-hidden-pasts type of stories.. Human beings.. Easily get attracted to things which arouse curiosity..

I like Khushi's attitude in this..

Please don't kill that when u go on..

No pressure, by the way.. The story's all yours... Just that I'm kind of frustrated at how our original Khushi is portrayed..

So they are attracted to each other at first sight.. And is it complete physical attraction??

Yea, that's what normally happens na.. I like that practicality in this..

So Arnav wants Khushi to come as his date??

Let's see what she says.. Maybe she won't get to say anything.. But still.. Let's wait and watch..

Okiz enough ranting..

Thanks again for dedicating the lovely update for me n Shalu.. waiting to be proud of you when u move on with the story..

Continue sooon..

Oh! And, Did I tell you how much I love you??

THIS MUCH!!!!

Ok..that I have to think about.

Edited by Yash141 - 13 years ago

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blue_sapphire

@blue_sapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Awesome update...love your writing...they both are attracted to each other...wow she is going to be his date...
Update soon!!!!

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Shruti21

i'm so sorry i'm late again...
this time i mean this sorry...

did i tell you before i even loved the pic... its BEAUTIFUL... SUPERLIKE..!!

AMAN...here again...!! girl i never saw this man...😕

She would be the death of him, he decided.
omg.. i was laughing hard over it... hehehe... khushi was not as arnav expected her to be...
well in that case i will say same pinch arnav.. we are same here.. it happens with me all the time...
when i imagine someone usually that person is just opposite... poor me...

you defined arnav and khushi so so well...

'No more DREAMING. Remember what happened the last time you let your body do the thinking Khushi
now here i see the GLIMPSE of shyam... i mean who can spoil khushi's life except that pervert.. i'm already hating him to the core...

poor poor khushi...😭

'Stick to professionalism you fool'
uuhhuu.. you can't arnav babu... i wish you could...

mistress
did i read right..?? seriously..!! eewww...🤢

"Its good"
what the... i guess i read PERFECT before.. arnav n his ego.. god..!!!

"It is definitely more than just good, Sir"
bingo... go girl go...

i loved their chit chat.. the way they were giving response to eac other...hhehehe

ooppsss... khushi's family is rich.. then why they hate her..??
why she is not with them..??

The very reputation she wanted to hold on to was once at stake after her bash with the media when she was just a graduate.
DEADLY PAST... i want to know...please...
h
He made a mental note to himself that family was quite a touchy subject for her and not to breach it again.
aawww i love u my baby... u are so understanding...

"You have already done that. Do you think I have no idea about how many so far wanted to steal my prime player?" he turned to look at her.
"But I turned them down,"
i din got this,...😕

oh fish..khushi is arnav's date,,,LOL... i'm waiting for next chapter then..

it was not at all boring my darling... shruti loved it...

sorry accepted... its okay luv...

and ur the first one like the pic...eee...i made it myself...

hmmm... lets wait to see who's gonna play Aman on the show then...lol

happiieee that u loved their descriptions... it was seriously hard to describe them with the sexy words and all with a 2 yr old toddler on my lap...

hope Nora never reads these things for a while and im glad she couldnt read it... else how much offending it wud be...

yesss...unfortunately shyam is khushi's past... cant do anything abt that though...

he's the perfect creepwa...

and i want perfection too...lolz

and yeah...arnav has mistresses... instead of a one night stand or something, this seemed better for him...

khushi's family is super rich... but there lies an ugly truth as well... Aaksh is almost 10 yrs older than her... will explain it later in the story... u'll understand why she hates her family... and Aakash doesnt live with them anymore too...just looks after the business...

and i wanted my arnav to be demanding at the same time understanding...

glad u loved him and loved the update tooo melzzz...

mwaaahhh

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Yash141
Awww...Saaam...U lovely lovely girl...
This is for meee???

Sorryyy that I came late
And Shaaaluuu!! Where's my Shalu Balu?

Thanku soo much.. I feel so honored..
And yea.. may our friendship last forever..
See I brought in the special smiley faces for u...

About the story...
I'm not much into M&B but still I like the arrogant ASR mode..
it's so hot and inviting naa..

This is very different from your other one..and I actually like that fact..
Have to say the u are a very unique writer.. MM is just out of this world..

And this..I'm loving this..
The concept seems different.. And I like digging-out-hidden-pasts type of stories.. Human beings.. Easily get attracted to things which arouse curiosity..

I like Khushi's attitude in this..
Please don't kill that when u go on..

No pressure, by the way.. The story's all yours... Just that I'm kind of frustrated at how our original Khushi is portrayed..

So they are attracted to each other at first sight.. And is it complete physical attraction??
Yea, that's what normally happens na.. I like that practicality in this..

So Arnav wants Khushi to come as his date??
Let's see what she says.. Maybe she won't get to say anything.. But still.. Let's wait and watch..

Okiz enough ranting..
Thanks again for dedicating the lovely update for me n Shalu.. waiting to be proud of you when u move on with the story..

Continue sooon..

Oh! And, Did I tell you how much I love you??

THIS MUCH!!!!

Ok..that I have to think about.

W.O.W!!!!!

lovveeeddd ur comment yashooo...they are all soooper cute... awwiiieee

its okay baba... read it and comment when ur time permits...no push... im glad u read this actuallyyy...

and friendship is always tied by the bond of the very words we write hon...

hmmm...thought ASR wud be the perfect M&B hero type... thats y started this story...and it always means sooper hawt nah...

im happpiiieee that u like MM and now this tooo... it means alot to me

and my Khushi will stay like this thru this story... im not keen on character killing coz its like my own suicide coz i came up with the character actually...

and the attraction is physical as of now...and evolve later...as the story moves on...

ah ha! khushi being arnav's date... u'll see... my girl wont go down without fighting...

and i promise to make u proud yashooo...LOVE YA TOOO hon