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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



nahin please don't stop writing...

very scary but very interesting also...

continue soon...

thanx for pm...


😃 thanx i ll not stop🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Wow nice start..
plzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats 4 new ff
that too scary n different OS dear do continue and prologue is so interesting and dont worry i do love ghost stories..waiting 4 update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaili_Mg

Congrats 4 new ff
that too scary n different OS dear do continue and prologue is so interesting and dont worry i do love ghost stories..waiting 4 update..


thanx , hi5 i love it too😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
dear..😃..
4 PMing ME.😃..
4 ur ...👏👏
just dear.😳.
it is just update.😛..
the job up dear..Clap..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS..BUT ME HAV TO TELL U ALL...THIS IS LAST COMMENT AS WHOM NEVER COMMENT OR VISIT MY SITES..AFTER THAT ME NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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' Dark secret :OS part 1

  • PM after uddating SHART 😉

It was a early morning when geet got up in her husband's arm , She kissed on his forehead
and was about to go when maan Pulled her close and she collide on maan's rock solid chest

Geet : maan I know u r alredy aweken , chhodiye muje and jane dijiye

Maan : sone dona geet

Maan saw her with one eye and immdeatly closed it as he caught

Geet : no means no u r also getting late for the office

Maan : aaj me day off le leta hu

Geet gave him a angry glare

Maan (by making face ) : ha baba ja raha hoon , jab dekho tab darati rehti he

Geet smiles and man went to washroom to get ready

He came out after get ready for office (he is owner of khurana text tiles)

Maan : geet I m going

He hugged her from back by placing his head on her soulder and kissed on her neck , geet closed her eyes feeling him

Geet : maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : me aaj me shopping karne jaungi so will be lats

Maan make baby face : me bhi chalu

Geet : ji nahi mr patidev now u go office

Geet pushed him and maan collide with a bottle which was on the dest , it shattered into many pieces

Geet : dekha maan tod diya na !

Maan : geet u pushed me ,it was not my fault

Geet : achha baba it's my fault okay ! now go

Maan left and after that geet told nakul to collect tat pieces and geet also left the place in hurry maan didn't see that with which bottle he collide

A while white figure of smoke came out from that bottle and in no sec it disappered

After an hour geet went to the mall
near the lift she collide with a lady

Geet : oops I m so sorry

The lady : it's okay

Her voice was too cold , her face was blank not a singal expression was there and then tat lady went into the lift
geet amused with her behaviour bt thought to forget it and she got busy in her shopping

She was buying clothes for maan , it was dark corner of the mall and noone was there at the corner

Geet :which color shoud I take for maan ?

She was totally lost in her thought when a voice came from behind

WHITE , he will like white color

Geet turned and saw the same lady with whom she collide some time befor

Geet : jee aap ! and how do u know that my husband likes white color

That lady smiles a bit and left the place by lefting shocked geet

Geet(st.) : who was she and how did she know about maan ?

Het chain of thought brock as her phone rang , she smiles seeing caller ID , it was maan's call
she pick up the call

Geet : hmm

Maan : kya jaan , itna rukha sukha hmm

Geet (with smile) : then what do u want ??

Maan (naughtyly): you

Geet blushed at his answer

Geet (innosently) : me ??

Maan : I want u

Geet : maan I'll call u letter now I m busy bye

Maan : that's not fair geettum apne is bechare pati ko kese tadpa rahi ho !!

Geet : maan aap na din bhar din besharm hote ja rahe ho lafange ho gaye ho !

Maan : janta hoon !

Geet : I m hanging the call

Maan : kam se kam call pe to ek kiss do na !

GEET : NAHII

Maan : plz he said in babish voice !

Geet : ummha bas ( she blushed a lit)

Maan : ye to cheek wali thi ab hotho wali do na!

Geet's cheek turn into red , by luck she was standing in a corner so noone heard her

Geet : maan sham ko milte he bye

She cut the call bt still blushing hard
awere of the fact that someone is watching her with rage filled eyes

Geet left the place

The lady : not so soon ms geet oops should I say mrs geet maan singh khurana , u can't live in peace
I'll crush u with my hand nahi nahi I'll not kill u only maan ll kill u geet MAAN WILL KILL U MAAN IS ONLY MINE MAAN IS ONLY MINE SAMJI TUM ???

She laughed evilly

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Geet reached home and saw whole place is dark ' geet scared as she always scares from darkness'she called out maan bt in vain

She switch on the light and saw whole the room dacorated with candle and rose patels
before she can say anything two strong arm encirculed around her waist by pulling her more close
she scared and turn to see the person ' who can be other than maan

She hugged him tight , maan too hugged her in protactive manner

Maan : kya hua jaan ! why are u looking so scared

Maan pulled her more close in a bear hug

Geet : maan u know na I m scare from darkness

Maan : shhh jaan chup ho jao, I m sorry I just wanted to give u surprise

, maan loosen the hug gentaly and kissed on her tears
then kissed on her eyes one by one bt Geet still sobbing like 5 yr old child

Maan : chup bilkul chup varna muje tumhe chup karvana aata he

He looked at her lips hungrily, geet felt a burning gaze on her lips and blushed getting his intention

Maan : now don't blush like this otherwise I'll end up by having u right now

Geet's cheek turned into blood red and she hit maan's chest playfully

Maan : achha tell me did u like the decoration , I especially made for u

Geet : maan it's beautiful

Maan (with broad smile ) : not more than u !

She smiles back

Maan : let's have dinner 1st , it's all ur fav dishes

Maan chuckled : muchhi

Both started dinner by feeding each other , teasing each other

totally aware of that some one is watching them with burning eyes , her eyes are spitting fire

the lady : u can't see me maan , vese bhi tumne muje kabhi dekha hi kaha tha ! bt I can't saw u with someone else , u r all mine only MINE '.. kash me us vaqt bottle se bahar aa jati jis vaqt tum is ladki se mile ..jab tumhari shadi hui ..tabhi is ladki ko khatm kar deti me ..TABHI ..bt don't worry it's better late than never ..now I'll make ur life hell geet , I'll make ur life hell ' nahi nahi maan will do it .. jo insan aaj tumse itna pyar karta he jo aaj tumhare lia apni jaan de sakta he vo hi kal tumhari jaan le lega geet yaad rakhna meri baat ko

MAAR DALEGA VAHI TUMHE

She laughed evilly

Precap

Maan what are u doing !! leave me

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Phewww I done with 1st part, I hope u all like it
I m hell nervous about this story plz tell me honestly how did u find it ??

Give m e lots of likes and big big commnts ;)

What do u think who is that lady ? which connection she has with maan ?
what will she do that maan himself will kill geet ???

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Edited by Rang_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Lovely Part... Both love each other...
This lady came out from d bottle.. So she must be sum spirit.. N looking at he intensions seems like she is a evil spirit who wants maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow interesting toh aage kahaani yeh hai ki that evil girl will possess maan's mind and body and try to kill geet and after that geet comes to know that someone was there in his past as a stalker and making their life hell and prays to babaji and babaji will save them that is d conclusion right hope shaayad yahi ho story but dont know how u twist and give but awesome first part dear...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Wow lovely scary update..im imagining tat thing came from tat bottle as ur banner pic,oh god very very scary,.pls dont update in night dear..now wat wil happen?im bitting my nails dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wow lv d first part
lv maaneet momente hayeee..😍😍
bt lvd ghost part most.. 😆😆😆
interesting
cont soonnn
Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago

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