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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maar dalega vo tumha

she laugh evilly

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Maan-Geet is sleeping holding each-other.., in each other's arm

after a while geet awoken by the sound of crying of a girl

Geet : who is crying at this time..?? Ghar me to Maan mere aur servents k alawa koi nahi he..., sayad koi servent ro rahi hogi

she slowly relief herself from Maan's grip

she reaches to hall all the while she was hearing the sound .., she check-out everywhere but didn't found anyone but still she can hear the sound of crying

Geet : strange ..,None is here but ye rone ki aawaz...!!

she felt that someone was walking with her ...,she turns but found no one so she started waking further

after a while a hand touch her from shoulder she scared and turns but fortunatlly it was Maan

Geet : Maan aap

Maan : ha Geet.., Why r u so scared..??

Geet : Maan wo mene kisi k rone ki aawaz suni thi

Maan : but Geet i didn't heard ..,u must be dreaming

Geet : No maan seriously i heard ..i was not dreaming believe me

Maan : Geet okay okay bt chalo ab so jao ., u seems too tired

Geet : par Maan wo..

Maan (cutting in) : ha baba chalo ab

Maan take her to their room and made her sleep by caressing her face

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Geet get up early in the morning as per her habit she saw Maan was not beside her

Geet : ye Maan kaha chale gaye...??

Than Geet saw that shower running in the bathroom

Geet : wouu aaj Maan itne jaldi uth agye ..!! Shocking

she smiles with in and got busy in her work

After half an hour Geet : Maan abhi tak bath room me hi he ..?? so strange

she goes near wash-room nd started knocking at door

Geet : Maan what r u doing ..?? come quickly

but no response

she open the door to check it out and saw there is noone inside and more-over there is red water coming out from the shower

she got scared and scream for Maan

Geet : MAAAN

Maan came running but till that everything was perfectly fine

Maan : kya hua Geet ...why did u scream..??

Geet : Maan wo shower se red water..look

Maan saw but shower was off

Maan : Jaan .., what happened..look shower is off...!!

Geet : Maan but i saw it was...

Maan : Mishty i think it was your imagination chill I m here with u ..Don't worry okay..??

Geet nodded with yes yes and Maan took her to the bed and made her sleep

Geet : Maan , but where have u gone so early...??

Maan : Are Geet bhul gai tum.., aaj Dadima aane wali thi so me air-port gaya tha

Geet : where is she...?

Maan : wo nichhe he

Geet : Maan plz don't leave me Geet held his hand very tight

Maan : Geet i m here beside u plz so jao

After some time Geet went to sleep .., but Maan's eyes can't be sleep ..,he was too much worried for her strange behavior

After see his love for Geet someone was fuming in anger

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After some time Dadi came at Maaneet's room and saw Geet is sleeping holding Maan's hand and Maan was watching her lovingly and caressing her hair

Dadima's eyes got wet seeing her grandchildren's love

Maan : Are dadima aap..?? aayiye na...!!

Dadima : beta kya hua Geet ki tabiyat thhek to he na..!!

Maan : ha dadima .., but pata nahi aaj kal wo bahot ajeeb bartav karne lagi he .., than maan told her about yesterday's incident and just now what happened

Dadi got worried for her

Dadi(with in) : kahi wo phir se..?

Maan : Dadi ..What happened...?? What are you thinking..??

Dadi : nothing beta .,i was thinking that what if she is right..??

Maan : kya dadima aap bhi...!! it's all because Geet is stressed out now-a-days that's all

Dadi (with in) : i don't think that Maan will understand my point of view ..,so i ll try to convince Geet

Dadi to Maan : Beta i'm too tired due to travelling so i need sleep ...i m at my room jab geet jag jaye to unhe hamare pass bhej dena

Maan : jee dadima

Dadima left

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After some times Geet wake up in Maan's arm she saw him staring at her, she gave him a loving smile .., he peck her fore-head lightly

Maan : are u alright jaan..??

Geet nodded cutely with yes yes ... Geet get up and sat on bed

Maan : Wait for some time i will just come

Geet : Hmm...

After some time Maan come with break-Fast..It was delicious noodles which made by Maan himself.. Someone eyed on it

Maan : Geet Look ..! What I made for u ?

Geet saw it and Maan can notice her fearing face

Maan asked her in concern : What happened Geet ..Look your favorite dish noodles..I especially made for you!

Geet (with scary voice) : Hatao ise ...Hatao plz Maan ise hatao ...!

Geet was seeing earthworms in plate ...and it was only shown by her only

Maan : Jana ab bahane band karo and eat this !

Maan thought she doesn't want to eat this that's why she is making excuse.,

Geet : Maan hatao ise .,

He tried to come near her

Geet : Maan don't come near .,

She shouted top of her lungs ..,

Geet : Maaannn

By hearing this shout Dadima came into their room

Dadima : kya hua Maan ..!!

Hearing this Maan stepped a back., Dadi saw Geet's feared face and goes near her and hugged her dearly Geet hugged her too

Geet : Dadi *sob* wo *sob* plate me *sob*

Dadi kissed her forehead lightly

Dadi : shhh...beta chup ho jao shhh bilkul chup

Dadi to maan : Maan what are you doing ..??

Maan : Dadima ., wo I don't know what has happened to me..!!! I just don't know

He put the plate aside and came near Geet and held her hand Geet was getting normal, feeling her warmth

Maan : Geet I am sorry dear , even i don't know what has happened to me , u know na your Maan can never hurt you i am sorry Geet I am sorry

He hugged her tight and Geet felt better, he started caresses her hair , Maan made her gulp some water

After some time she felt much better

Dadi : Geet bete aapko kya ho gaya tha ..!! Aap ese kyu behave kar rahi thi...??

Geet : Dadima ., i don't know ! what is happening to me from yesterday ! Yesterday night i heard a sound of a girl's crying , i saw everywhere but there was no one

aur subah jab me uthi to washroom se shower ki aawaz aa rahi thi i thought it must be Maan

but when till half hour Maan didn't come out than i opened the door and i saw red water coming out from shower .., And now i saw red blooded earthworms in plate

Dadima i am feeling so scared, ye sab kya ho raha he mere sath ..??

She sobbed

Maan : Geet ye sab tumhara vahem he , nothing else

Dadaima : shih ... chup ho jayiye aap ..., lagta he ab hame aapko sab sach batana hoga !!!

Geet with joint brow : sach ..?? kesa sach Dadima ...??

Dadima : Geet , many time ago there was a family living in our naborhood .., We had a good relation with us they were just like our family .., And there was a girl in that family named Shana , who loved Maan very Much , hame laga sayad Maan bhi unse utna hi pyar karte he aur hamne Maan se bina puche hi engagement tai kar di but for Maan she was only her best friend , ya he loves her but like a friend only and engagement k din hi Maan ne unse sagai tod di Aur Shana ko ye baat ka bahot bura laga unka dil tut gaya aur unka Dil tut gaya aur unhone suicide kar li

Geet gasp at this

Dadima continues : Par beta unhone suicide kar li thi is lia unki soul ko peace hi hai mili is lia wo bhatakti rahi jab bhi ham Maan ki shadi ki baat chalate to wo koi na koi problem create hoti than i thought to ask this for panditji and panditji told me that a spirit is doing all this than we got to know it's none other than Shana .., Than after some Pooja we catch her spirit and put it into the bottle don't know how she came out

Geet remember when she collide with the bottle and it shattered

Geet : Dadima , kahi wo bottle blue color ki thi ??

Dadima : ha beta aapne dekhi thi use ??

Geet : Dadima , wo before 2 days i went to market and i saw a decorated blue bottle and i don't know but i liked it saw i bought it but yesterday i collide with it so it broke

Dadima : Iska matlab wo ab bahar aa chuki he and ye sab wo kar rahi

Maan's anger showing on his face

Maan : Dadima , I thought she is my best friend , but I was wrong , But...

He didn't find the words, and held Geet tightly .., Geet too reciprocate him

Geet : Maan u didn't told me before this ...!!!

Maan : I am sorry Geet ! I don't want to remember my past and moreover I don't want that my past came into our relation...!!! Par vo phir bhi aa gaya

Geet massaged his back gently

Geet : Maan Koi baat nahi ., ab ham dono mil ke uska samna karenge he na '.!

She extend her hand

Maan smiled at her and give his hand on hers

Maan : Dadi iska koi to upay hoga na !!!

Dadi : upay to hame malumlum nahi beta par ham sab kal panditji k pase jake unse upay k bare me baat karenge

Maaneet nodded positivelly

dadi left

precap : last part

who will win this fight between love couple and one sided love of a spirit..??

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Edited by Rang_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
lovely OS
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
superb
that idiot spirit cant separate my maaneet huh
lv will win
awesome
waiting 4 more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
part 2
nice...
interesting...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

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4 PMing me dear...
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keep the job up dear..👏..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting... its really different... maaneet will together overcum this obstacle..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice update..
very interesting!!!
waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan-geet ke pyaar ke alawa aur koi kaise jeet sakta hai...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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