ArHi SS:**Eternal Love**...updated part 8, pg 40

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Sad. I hope they manage to meet up

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Sunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

aww that was sweet n sad...do continue:D

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amita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

AWESOME 👏 PLZ UPDATE SOON

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Great progress in the storyline! Waiting for the next part!

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Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Haz78
I really liked it, the pre-cap seems to be okay-ish, it would have been better if it was a couple of months later rather than 1 and half year... dunno why but it makes me sad that Arnav and Khushi lived without each other for 1 and a half year(s)... but its your story and do continue... I really enjoyed it 👏

Heyy, im really glad you shared your opinion, i know it's sad to think that arnav and khushi have been apart for 1yr n hlf 😭...initially i was in two minds, whether to make this a seperation a short or a long one, but then i thought i want a khushi who is successful, independent and has learnt to live a life by herself; and that can't be done in 3months or 6months!! 😆...anyways thank you for your comment, much appreciated!!! xxx

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Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: luckyarnav
Hey I read all the parts together and they were amazing.

I hv sent u a buddy request plz accept

Plz update soon

Thank you

Thank you for your comment, I've accepted your request!! 😃 xxx

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

fantastic update
thanks for the PM

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Haz78

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Yazzy91

Heyy, im really glad you shared your opinion, i know it's sad to think that arnav and khushi have been apart for 1yr n hlf 😭...initially i was in two minds, whether to make this a seperation a short or a long one, but then i thought i want a khushi who is successful, independent and has learnt to live a life by herself; and that can't be done in 3months or 6months!! 😆...anyways thank you for your comment, much appreciated!!! xxx

It's ok, but seriously this is a really good story and I know where you are coming from now... and meeting after a longer time will be amazing too... :D

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Great OS and loved all the three parts.

👏

Glad you are turning this into an SS, it will give us more reading. Amazing concept and the way your story is shaping up.

Loved the way you showed the emotions of Khushi, Arnav, the Raizadas, especially Anjali, Nani and Buaji. Well, I wished the CVs would give us some more meaningful episodes, more depth to each charactor, especially the main ones - Arnav, Khushi, Anjali and Nani. Show us more of their feelings and how they are coping with day to day happenings. NK is doing a fab job, helping Khushi out in her problems. A Good friend, indeed.

Anyways, reading your OS which is shortly going to turn out into an SS is so much more satisfying. Great job done!!! ⭐️

Edited by lara3110 - 13 years ago