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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

really awesome concept


TANKS😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
continu soon, only one request plz don't make sad ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nirju99

continu soon, only one request plz don't make sad ending



no never but there s lots of surprs and twist vch u all vont think 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

guys actually its a small intro that vats happng in st lousin ,the present condition,next part only the actual story starts


AFTER A LONG GAP NOW SHE S BACK...

smrithy;-kriya betta chalo abb hamey collg janahey ,tumey phirsey st louis mey addmsn ley na hoga

kriya;-kya maaa phirsey vo be st louis mey,if i go back maa mujey mushkil hoga or aap ka trust mujey thodna padeyga

sm;-betta i get back the promis

kriya;-kya maa app sach bolraheyhu

sm;-ha sach ,sach ye hey tumey rey sey phir sey bath karnahoga or sab sacch ussey bolna hoga,mey tumey or vo shirtless wonder ko accpt karooga par ek sharth pey usko tumarey barey mey uska parents ko bolna padeyga or ek bath be

kriya;- kya maa

sm;-kriya par tumey dance sey doorhonapadeyga

the tears started running out from her eyes,she was not satisfd but she thnks finally maaney ek chance dhiya,or mujey vo chance chodna nahey,ye mera zindhagey hey mujey jeena hey,universjee mujey help karo na plzzz

nxt day mong

rey;-yek sal kaisey beethgaye mujey pathanahey,its our final year

sh;-ya rey ethny sal hamarey friendship kithny strong hogaye

neha;-kash hamarey kriya yeha hotha tho

taani;-tum ussey ethny miss karthihuna

vish;- vo hamarey frnd hey sirph hamarey hey par ussey kya hogaye ham sab ko chod chaly gaye

a boy who s listen and seeng all these tears r following

sw;-sharon or rey tum dhono lucky ho par mujey dekko mera best frnd mujey akkaley chod kar chaley gaye aaj mujey uskey yaadh'..

rey;-mey sab boolkkar yek nahey naye zindhagey shurukiya phir be tum sab

amar;-haaa swayam tu bee

pune;-gs,ags,cs or acs ko princi sar boolrahahey

swayam;-bayya kya huva

puney ;-mujey pathanahey par mey kriya bettakka maa ko dekka vo ethny strict hena

rey;-kriya ke maa yeha

punee;-haa rey betta,mey ney sunna kriya betta ye collg chodney ki vaja uska maa he

rey;- kya

sw;-mey ney bathayana ye sab auntykey vajasey par tum'''..

pune;-betta tum sab jaldhey javo

4 of them;-ya

The whole gang followed them,now it's the time some thng intrstng gng to happn

Rey ;- may I come in

Princi;-ya u can

Sw;- sir u back

Rey;-or vp sir

Princi;-ya I am back not only I ,rdx,nicol or''..

Sh;-or??????????

Sm;-hi

Sw;-aunty aappp

Sm;-ha mey

Sw;-kriyaaa

Rey noticed a gal who s wearing acute frock with mixed colour of pink and black ,having a braclet in left hand , and a black pers in right hand,normal hair stlye but she had a r alphbt chain in neck ,when the gal turn and face all the gang vas shockd to see her,the gal s just look lik ths below pic



Princi;-I no u all new her ,she taked a big break now she s back ,I thnk u all vants to no the reason y sure now its right time to say the truth,till these days she s in ny

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.. so guys guss who s that gal

Precap;- will every one came to no the truth ,kya hoga rey ka hal,will weakling accpt kriya again,vil shivam says the truth vat happn and how her mother came to no every thng so stay tune vith ths os

Now its ur time

Jootha,eggs r allowed but plzzz dnt 4get to clk like butten and cmmnt(revw) so dnt 4 get I new its little bit short next time I proms u a big part,there s more funn,sadand romance scene be I thnk u all vill be lik romance scene becoz it vil be so different and u all now the romance scene of 2 love birds v they meet after a long gap so stay tune to ths os 😛

Edited by karthikasekhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
omggg..
soo interesting
loved it :)
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb... want to knw rey reaction when he ll got to knw the truth...
plz update asap n thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

superb... want to knw rey reaction when he ll got to knw the truth...

plz update asap n thnx for pm...


vat u thng about reys reaction😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting intro...
Loved it...
Waiting for first chappy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
It was AWESuMMM!!!!! Just loved it!!!!!! I'm eagerly waitn for the nxt part!!!! Is waqt ( the tym without KriYaansh in D3) aap hum sab logon ke liye ek bauah bara sahara ban rahe hoo!!!!!! KEEP it Up and pl,plz,plz jaldi se nxt part post kar dijiye!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...wud be waiting for the actual story to start soo update soon n do pm me...

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