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okay Kalyani

Originally posted by: hiahmed

okay Kalyani

thats it

ure too good a writer

imagine ive been reading this since 9:00 in office

bound to get fired someday

but i'd really love to get pms on both ur works raizada and sons and this and also others u write.

pls add me to ur buddy list and i promise, i'll comment evry time i read

Good lord, this is funny...don't get me wrong I don't compel everyone to comment. It's their wish to do so. I request for one as it helps me understand if the update was good, bad or downright terrible.

Send across a buddy request and I promise to send you a PM for everything I write.

omg...this is one of the best ff i have read...i have been reading this one since i found out that this contains arhi...this is just amazing...the flow which you taken and the maturity in the characters is so good..khushi is just wow..she handles her past and she is trying blend in without any disturbance to the present life..though arnav is trying to rile her up and then being the silent spectator in meetings just to know real her but it seems recently this has started to take 180 degree turn...and he has even started to analyse the acceptance from his family regarding him and khushi...poor guy still haven't realised what hit him quiet oblivious to his love knowledge...and the kisses he gave khushi, what can I say??☺️ khushi on the other end is aware of arnav and has started fighting her feelings for him...just loving her bond with herfamily, akash,payal and chachji...

anjali, though her life is in mess, she is having the little talk to arnav to make him see through...guess its a elder sister thing looking out for younger bro...

jhanvi is super cute and so adorable...and with khushi it would be cherry on top...expecting more of these two in future😊...

and kolaveri discussion was just 👍🏼

just waiting to know what happened in rm...pls update soon

p.s:- did i mention that you rocking and such a brilliant reader...and i have already finished reading this whole ff twice😉

kalyaani, started reading this story...seems interesting...still in preliminary stage, so i can't say much but you have sketched out characters pretty well...both looking forward to their futures, but i excited to see how fate will bring them together...:)

You pulled a CV's on us, Kalyaani! Romance (potential I mean) interrupted by the family. Haha, just kidding!

hi kalyaani:) i just finished reading the pursuit of love and forgive me for commenting only once! I was too engrossed in your story and i am also a busy mom of twins so kindly excuse my pathetic excuse:) but i love your story!! I will be honest, it started off really slow for me, but it makes sense how you have fully developed and gone into details about each and every character mentioned so far. this story is like an onion with lots of layers and i like how you are peeling each and every layer...I love how you have been describing khushi's clothes as i can create a better picture in my mind:) shashi and khushi's relationship seems to be very special and i have been thinking about my abu while reading about them:) can't wait for khuhsi to meet the whole raizada clan...i have a feeling they will all love her...disappointed about arnav cancelling his dinner plans with khushi, but i am hoping you will show one pretty soon! I am in love with your arnav and khushi...:) as promised, I will be commenting on both of your stories now that i am completely updated. looking forward to both the updates! take care.

btw, i am glad your anjali is a badass woman;) you have added an element of realism through her character by showing nobody is perfect. i am eager to see what becomes of her in your story. kindly PM me whenever you post your next updates. thank you!

Originally posted by: Fuzzbucket

hi kalyaani:) i just finished reading the pursuit of love and forgive me for commenting only once! I was too engrossed in your story and i am also a busy mom of twins so kindly excuse my pathetic excuse:) but i love your story!! I will be honest, it started off really slow for me, but it makes sense how you have fully developed and gone into details about each and every character mentioned so far. this story is like an onion with lots of layers and i like how you are peeling each and every layer...I love how you have been describing khushi's clothes as i can create a better picture in my mind:) shashi and khushi's relationship seems to be very special and i have been thinking about my abu while reading about them:) can't wait for khuhsi to meet the whole raizada clan...i have a feeling they will all love her...disappointed about arnav cancelling his dinner plans with khushi, but i am hoping you will show one pretty soon! I am in love with your arnav and khushi...:) as promised, I will be commenting on both of your stories now that i am completely updated. looking forward to both the updates! take care.

*Gasps*

Ah progress...He is on his best behaviour, almost, and trying his utmost to be charmingly friendly. Khushi too is getting closer to identifying and acknowledging her feelings, at least to herself.