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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: mistyrains
Raizada not going to South Africa, very interesting.

What I love in this story is that there is a certain calmness attached to this story, makes you feel peaceful after reading it. Lovely chapter!:)

Thanks a bunch dear a 🤗 from me to you

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

I like this pace; it gives me time to let it all sink in. Thanks for the update and PM!

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Loving the slow buildup in the background...great update

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Very interesting story
Please write more

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

yay i am first

loved it

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Good pace, again! Khushi is settling in

And Arnav-Anjali are still very similar to the ones we see from the show - only this Anjali seems a little less simpering.

Waiting for the story to unfold and enjoying the journey as it does :)

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

=D res

EDITS-

I am speechless Rao, I am speechless.

I love the way you write, really and truly.

WHERE WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME???

When you write your first novel, and if you do, I want a dedication. Something along the lines of "To my parents, and a certain faceless crazy girl I know. They call her V..."

So sorry for the late edit. I promise to be more punctual.

LOVELOVELOVE,

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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nuts

@nuts

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Like how u are maintaining the suspense and at the same time moving the story forward...so Kushi should be fully settled in by the time Arnav comes back. Intersting read and Arnav seems to be true to the show as of now but Anjali obviously isn't atleast from Ajit's view.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: nuts
Like how u are maintaining the suspense and at the same time moving the story forward...so Kushi should be fully settled in by the time Arnav comes back. Intersting read and Arnav seems to be true to the show as of now but Anjali obviously isn't atleast from Ajit's view.

Thanks N,

Arnav will be...what else Arnav and you are right about Anjali...she is someone I do not like in the serial, gets on my nerves. She may just be the vamp here...you never know 😉

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

so he did go to Cape Town afta all...waitin fo more!

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