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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

jus read al d four parts.. very interesting.. khushi had to go thru soo much.. plzz pm wen u update..

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

I'm patient and am enjoying reading this phase as you slowly build your story. I appreciate that is part of storytelling-- the pace. Your work has an underlying calmness to it. Probably a reflection of you. Look forward to more Thank you for PM.

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Enjoying the story and as they say 'Patience pays' :)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I like the pace you are going ahead with! I like how you are building up Khushi's decisions and actions even though we don't know the motivations behind most. Clearly it is something worth waiting for!

So Mr. Raizada isn't going to South Africa. Interesting.

Looking forward to more!

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Inked
I'm patient and am enjoying reading this phase as you slowly build your story. I appreciate that is part of storytelling-- the pace. Your work has an underlying calmness to it. Probably a reflection of you. Look forward to more Thank you for PM.

Gee Maya, that is awfully sweet of you, I am the opposite of calm in life. Short tempered and sharp tongued, these are the words that are often used to describe me and would now tell everyone that calmness can be associated with me too. I hope to pick up the pace, as it may get boring otherwise, keep the comments coming in, it helps.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: meera30
I like the pace you are going ahead with! I like how you are building up Khushi's decisions and actions even though we don't know the motivations behind most. Clearly it is something worth waiting for!

So Mr. Raizada isn't going to South Africa. Interesting.

Looking forward to more!

Thanks Meera, I always wanted Khushi to be a well etched out character, she could be weak, insecure or whatever but certainly not vague. I sure hope the Khushi in my story has more "dum" than the one in the serial.

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

like how d story is going.can't say i'm not curious about

Khushi's past though,buh i'm sure it'll be worth d wait! thnx fo d pm.

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Raizada not going to South Africa, very interesting.

What I love in this story is that there is a certain calmness attached to this story, makes you feel peaceful after reading it. Lovely chapter!:)

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Oh my! This is so reserved, for a big comment!

For now, make do with a

"absolutely loved the update, and happy with the pace of the story"

Love,
V

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Hey there!

Sorry, I could not comment earlier...completed last 3 updates in a single

The pace for build up is absolutely perfect and it intrigues me more to know about Khushi and Ajit's private talk...Ah, Mr.ASR is not going anywhere...Looking forward to next update