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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

You write beautifully Kalyaani.

And this chapter was captivating.

I'm really hooked on to the story-line. Continue soon!:)

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

just read the two chapters.. loved them.. wonderfully written..

so, garima is no more.. shashi n ajit know each other.. arnav dooesnt remember khushi, but khushi does..wow...

update soon n could u please increase the font size...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Very interesting to see both Arnav and Khushi looking forward to their futures, albeit very differently. One carving his own fate and the other letting her fate lead her way.

PS: So much Bangalore in the story. How can I not like it :)

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: meera30
Very interesting to see both Arnav and Khushi looking forward to their futures, albeit very differently. One carving his own fate and the other letting her fate lead her way.

PS: So much Bangalore in the story. How can I not like it :)

Yes!!!! Good old Bangalore, I just had to add it to my story. Glad you like the update.

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Bangalore? I love the city!

Thankyou for the pm! I saw your index!

Love,
V

Ps- i know it is half-assed, but commeting from a phone is shitty hell! Longer comment later! Promise!!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Kalyaani
@ Onlooker ' yes, Garima is no more; the gap is roughly 15 months.

That explains why he didn't recognize her..thank you

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Amazing story line. I am captivating instantly. I read all the 3 chapters and very much anxious to red more. What was in the letter that can change khushi's life?

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nuts

@nuts

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Ah ah how did I miss this one for so long??? Loved the premise and the 3 chapters have been wonderfully written.

The part of death bringing relief to the patient is so true...the loved ones want to hang on to them and always look for measures to make them better, but the patient suffers and it takes a toll on the caregivers also.

Looking forward to knowing what was in the letter. Have bookmarked it for future updates. Going to read more of ur works now.

Edited by nuts - 13 years ago