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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Awesome update! Loved the interactions of all the characters. Thanks for the update and PM!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

awesome update.. payal and khushi's growing friendship is really cute.. khushi is a charmer..

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ruchshah

@ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Payal n Khushi make good friends...👏 n Aakash n Khushi also share a nice bond...

So, Arnav finally knows that Khushi was the girl whom he kissed in Banglore hospital all those years back!!!

I like Khushi's bua...u made a good attempt to make her likeable n modern n independent unlike in the series...👏hats off to u!!

Thanks for the PM!

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sharma_vartika

@sharma_vartika

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Aww! Poor ASR...keen to solve a puzzl!! I would love to see his reactn when he comes to knw d truth...m glued to dis just read al d ch in mrn...u r outstandin! Tc

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

lets c hw arnie solves THE puzzle wich hes gng on tinkin ab all d tym...

loved payal n arnav bondin n also kushi n payal bonding...

awsum update ...

tanx 4 d pm

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: ruchshah
Payal n Khushi make good friends...👏 n Aakash n Khushi also share a nice bond...
So, Arnav finally knows that Khushi was the girl whom he kissed in Banglore hospital all those years back!!!

I like Khushi's bua...u made a good attempt to make her likeable n modern n independent unlike in the series...👏hats off to u!!

Thanks for the PM!

Thanks...the characters are mere props in the serial and I do feel bad for them...so this my way of giving them some due 😉

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Khushi and Payal were too good... liked it..

Arnav thinks Khushi as a puzzle.. waiting to see his reactions if and when he discovers her truth

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Well written . I came across this work now only.I read the 12th chapter first. Let me read the first 11 chapters.Thanks for the PM

Thank you

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

You are really taking it slow on this one. ASR is far far away and while this chapter was a transition and established the everyone loves Khushi and she is a mystery / puzzle to solve for ASR...we the readers are still in the dark.

Tells me...Tells me Pleaze!!!!!! what iz going on?