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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

BRB

I loved the angst in the update. Poor Khushi.

That happens a lot, you know. Lot of people think hatred is the emotional opposite of love. It is not. The actual opposite is apathy, where you dont give a damn what happens to the person in front of you.

So the fact that Khushi did not feel hatred for him, did not surprise me.

I was very happy with the phone-conversation.

So Manohar doesn't know Khushi is his daughter. That is indeed interesting. I wonder how you will take it forward.

I like how the story is unfurling, Rao. Kudos to you.

PS- Me first, on BOTH the FF's. Awesome stalker I am. =P

Love,

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Loved the update. Poor Khushi 😭 😭 😭 How confused she must be feeling with all the conflicts. Waiting to read next part.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

So khushi is Arnav's bua's husband's biological daughter.. That is some news..

Awesome part.. I really like ajit's character..

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

The plot thickens. It is getting complicated and am waiting to learn her mother's story. Love the bond between Khushi and her father, Shashi.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Interesting revelation!!

Waiting to know more about her mother's past...

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

so she is Mahinder's daughter?that's interesting!plz do update soon!

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: V323
BRB

I loved the angst in the update. Poor Khushi.

That happens a lot, you know. Lot of people think hatred is the emotional opposite of love. It is not. The actual opposite is apathy, where you dont give a damn what happens to the person in front of you.

So the fact that Khushi did not feel hatred for him, did not surprise me.

I was very happy with the phone-conversation.

So Manohar doesn't know Khushi is his daughter. That is indeed interesting. I wonder how you will take it forward.

I like how the story is unfurling, Rao. Kudos to you.

PS- Me first, on BOTH the FF's. Awesome stalker I am. =P

Love,
V

Thanks V, hope everyone understands that the pursuit of love here is not between Arnav and Khushi alone...it between various relations

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Nici0306
So khushi is Arnav's bua's husband's biological daughter.. That is some news..

Awesome part.. I really like ajit's character..

I liked the complicated way you brought the connection...really cute...

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Lovely chapter, hatred and apathy, terrific counterparts:)

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Dhanya

@samrudhi.r

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Very nice FF. Reading for the first time today. You have a way with writing stories 👏

Wondering what would have happened in the past that Garima had Mahi's child and he never got to know it. Also wondering how did shashi accept garima along with the child. 🤔