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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Nice update. Thnks for the pm. Sorry abt asking for longer updates. I didn't know u were writing 3 stories parellely. Pls could u pm me the links to the other two? Would love to read them. Thanks!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Complex characters sensitively handled

good story!

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KKG_ASR

@KKG_ASR

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Am very much looking forward to your next updt soon:-):-D

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Thank god khushi reacted as a normal human being rather than being godly nice and behaving normal..

Fabulous update..

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Reading previous comments I just realised who CynicalNoob is! Commenting has suddenly become so Po-Mo 😛 !

I knew it - Khushi has her own issues and Arnav has to stop dumping his crap on her - plain and simple. No, first of all he has to realise that he cannot dump his crap on anyone. Then he has to realise his issues are his problems to deal with and that he is responsible for his own choices...AND...he has to resolve his problem(s). if Khushi wants to label him a s**tty ho bag she has every right lol. I hope she distances herself - poor dear has too much on her plate anyway!!

It really shows how good your writing is. For some reason Arnav is really, really getting on my nerves. He's like the British version of The Office - he's too realistic as a character!

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

did she become d scapegoat in d scandal ?

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

go khusi, you are a hit- is what i can say!

soo much input in just one single chapter...quite exciting:)

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

*a deep sigh* so finally her past revealed.!

scandal huh.? quite interesting..! and thank goddess she reacted

that way. really loved her bold form. way to go baby...!!

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

WOW WOW WOWW awsm concept and beautifully written..havnt read awl parts yet..vil read and comment later !!!

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seoulbeats

@seoulbeats

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

It's so easy to spill your secrets to a stranger but never did I think about the other side of the story...about how Khushi would be affected by it. I miss their random encounters and wacky conversations but I have a feeling that things are never going to be the same...

PS-Thank you for updating regularly.

Edited by seoulbeats - 12 years ago