Wheels Of Fortune Thread #1 - Page 10

Once again... A job well done!👍🏼

wow hope she gets her memory back soon!

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Great update!!... Uday's expression was bang on... hate Minakshi as he still lets her in his bed knowing how strongly she feels for him.

Can't wait for thursday now... love is in the air... HAWWW😍

P.S: Can you also describe Manya's clothing and her style now that you envision in your mind. I can't wait to see how you create moments between the two of them. Wanna see them falling head over heels in love with each other. Also I wonder what Uday felt when he touched Manya... So dreamy!<3

Will put u'r points in mind next time as for Uday's feeling when he touched Manya nice point how could i forget to elaborate that am gonna elaborate my last para by evening ... feelings are my fav subject yaar

Thanku u'r ideas are really great

Cloths-- edited the part where uv first sees Manya as now I have added her clothings .Actully I had it in my original but somehow got cut in update thanks for reminding for them next time will have UV clothing i mind too as these descriptions are real jaan of a fiction😊

Amazing Update. I really don't like this memory loss tracks in serial. But ur story is really great. I love it. I hate Minakshi. I m waiting 4 Minakshi's reaction when she will c M. But shana UV is sleeping with Minakshi. Won't it hurt M if she know her husband was sleeping with her killer.

sorry for commenting late this part was super awesome and lovely loved there first meeting i wish they would have hugged but this was awesome also loved the way you portrayed udayveer and minaxi relationship please update soon i loved this writing i love your story it is my favourite😃

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks dear😊

U really know most of the story not what i have to do is to pen it down in an entertaining way ,hope i will be able to do it😕

hey shana knowing the plot/story is nothing.. ur writing is too good that we actually imagine those things happening.. dat is why i keep waiting desperately for ur updates... d first chapter was nice... the way uday seems to lose control n then regains composure.. n also him saying 'u are mine' 😳😉 i kno he meant responsibility but she is his princess after all😊

d next chapter's heading is nice.. please add romantic scenes between them... i dunno how u hav thought of proceeding... but it wil be nice to see manya falling for uday before knowing who she actually is... and uday enjoying this knowing she is manyata...😳😳 and also manya becoming close to adya like a best friend then later knowing that she is her mother... but however u proceed i am sure i will luv ur story... (experience frm d previous book😊)

poor adya dunno how she is going to handle this... manya denying that she is her mother.. 😭

pls make uday realise that she is indeed manyata soon... after all he is a prince.. he shud be able to gather info from haridwar regarding how manya came to shashtri's care before 5 years.. n also minakshi needs to be taught a lesson... this female has been trying so hard n has achieved nothing but she is till not ready to give up... hope someday uday throws her out of his life completely... i mean i dont want her to be even an aquaintance.
this girl needs hard lessons😡😡 also wud love to see minakshi getting shocked seeing manya... n getting hurt seeing uday close with manya... this girl truly deserves this.. for all that she has done..

waiting eagerly for thurs... pls make it a long one like the first chapter😊😊

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Amazing Update. I really don't like this memory loss tracks in serial. But ur story is really great. I love it. I hate Minakshi. I m waiting 4 Minakshi's reaction when she will c M. But shana UV is sleeping with Minakshi. Won't it hurt M if she know her husband was sleeping with her killer.

Thanks dear for liking it and yes u\r point regarding UV minakshi is quit logical😕

Well dear UV is no God like Shri Ram or Lord Shiva he is a man with his own faults,u can love him for his charm , his honest love , his die hard passion and spirit but then he does have the faults u cant stop hating .Manyata was a real woman to accepted him the way he was and changed him to the good thats why he is still not able to give that place to any woman as its too high to be achieved.

Her love did change him but as he himself said he does not remember any love as the one he loved exists no more.

He does remeber Manyataas she was his passion but has forgotten the very essence of love itself and really needs her desperately to show him right path as the man in UV is really going through ethical crisis.

OMG...its awsomeee...beautifully written.the last scene was freaking awsome...cant wait for next part...aur ha yaar whay abot J is she marry jagat or still after uday????????plzzz...tell me... sana dear why didnt u PM me????????plzzz...update soon and PM me...