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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

This was such a sweet part.
I loved it soo much.
Starting from Ridz's shopping to AR's cute fights,everything was simply amazing.
I loved AR's fight so much.
It reminded me of the old days of DMG.
Armaan's basket Friday night fever-I can't tell you how much I loved this name..
The way Armaan irritated Ridz while she did the packing was fun to read.
Muski and Armaan's chat was also great...
It was nice to see how the new interns got surprised to know about AR's fight and pranks...
Everything about this part was mindblowing..
You are doing a wonderful job dear.
Plz update the next part soonest.
I hope your exam went fine/
Take care!
Asma



Thank you so much!Glad you liked the part!Updating now😊I am glad you liked the name and this FF is reminding you of Old DMG!And the interns and Sid are going to be surprised by AR's love story!Thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NURSHAD52536

How did u do this?? u always wrote beautifully and ur writing always remind of the best dmg..if dmg 3 ever happen ur story will be the best..now about the part ..it is awesome ..best..funny..romantic..inshort full package...love AR's cute nok-jhok..their romance..muskaan toh bhukkad hi rahegi..hehe..love her..plz cont. soon..



Thank you so much!Glad you liked the part!Updating now😊I am very happy that i reming you of the old DMG-the fun,romance,bickering etc...And many more things coming up soon!Thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 12 years ago
So sorry for the delay!But am getting really bored of writing the honeymoon and want to finish it soon and write the after-married life.Sorry for the crappy part.But please comment guys as i see one comment and get inspiration to write,so keep commenting...Now the part!

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WARNING:There is slightly mature content towards the end.It is highlighted in red.So don't read if you are not comfortable and are under-age.
Part 15 a- No kabab main haddis,It's just YOU and ME.

Honeymoon Bliss-I

Their flight was at 11 am .So they first went and met everyone at gupta house and then they went to the hospital to say bye to everyone and rahul drove them to the airport.They also pulled along Muskaan as she was the only one who didn't have duty and could spend time with rahul on the way back.Riddhima and Armaan were wearing jeans and black shirts.
Rahul:(hugged armaan):Bye man!Have fun and enjoy your honeymoon!Bye ridheema!(giving a side-hug to riddhima)
Armaan:If you don't tell me still I am going to have my share of fun,Rahoool!(chuckling while riddhima blushed)Ab toh naam sikh jaa Angrezi boy!It is riddhima,not ridheeemaaa!Bye Muski!
Muskaan:HAHAHAH!Haan hero!enjoy karna par humari shopping lists mat bhulna!(she hugged armaan and riddhima)
Riddhima:(smiled and hugged muskaan back)Bye Muski!Bye Rahul,aur Armaan ki baat mat sun he's mad!
They bid bye to them and turned to go as Armaan pushed the luggage and riddhima held him by the arm.
Armaan:WHAT?Basket tum apne pati ko mad kehte ho!Sharam nahi aati!(dramatically)
Riddhima:(showed him her tongue)Nahi Bilkul bhi nahi aati!Tumhare jaise besharam ke saath main bhi apni sharam bhul gayi hu'
Armaan:Tch TCh Aaj kal ki bhartiya naari apne pati ko besharam kehti hai'.
Riddhima:(frowned)Shut up Armaan!
They checked in their baggage,after their flight was on board-they entered the flight with an angry basket followed by a manaaoing Armaan.As they entered the air hostess smiled at riddhima and then smiled extra sweetly at armaan and fluttered her lashes at him while riddhima glared at her and armaan chuckled.They settled in their seats,a fuming riddhima settled in her windows seat while armaan sat beside her.He tried to pull her close but she glared at him.
Armaan:Arre Basket!I was just helping that bechari girl'Usse luggage uthane main problem ho rahi thi'.she only asked for my help!
Riddhima:Poor?!?Huhn!She was in no way bechari,ok?And why the hell was she ogling at you if she needed help with her luggage'And there were so many people there, but she only saw you!And that air hostess also,can't she see you are married??(she said in one breath and frowned)
Armaan:(smiled)Breath Basket!HAAHAHA!Kitna bolti ho basket..chapad chapad!And I am HOT,so they'll stare at me,na!And mere kya galti hai if they stare,hmm?Tum jal kyu rahi ho?Jalo mat,ok!Breath in,breath out!(he said cheekily)
Riddhima:(frown deepened)Hot?!Aur tum!Oh please!Aur main jal nahi rahi hai,ok(glaring at him)
Armaan:Tum jal rahi ho basket(loving the gussa look on her face)
Riddhima: main-jal-nahi-rahi!(she pointed a finger in his chest and said slowly glaring at him)
Armaan: (kissed her finger)Its okay basket,hota hai!Tum jal sakti ho,meri biwi ho tum!(grinning at her)
Riddhima: (pissed off)ARMAAN!Go to hell!
Armaan:Kitne baar same line bolni padti hai!Bas basket ab new lines laao,ok?(kissed her cheek)Ye puraani lines se main bore ho gaya,hu!
Riddhima: Argh!You are just impossible(crossing her arms on her chest and looking out of the window)
Armaan:I know!!(cheekily)But still you love me!(in a sing-song way)
After half an hour Riddhima was not talking to Armaan and was engrossed in her book.He tried to talk to her but she was not giving him any bhaav(attention).So he decided to do something to gain her attention as he was missing her.He pressed the bell for calling the air-hostess.It was the same air-hostess who was trying to flirt with Armaan.
Air-Hostess:(smiling seductively)What would ypu like,sir?
Armaan:(smiles)Can you get me a bottle of water??(looking at a fuming riddhima from the corner of his eyes)
Air-Hostess: Sure Sir,Anything for you!(winks at him)
Riddhima is glaring at both of them.The Air-hostess came back with the bottle and is ogling at Armaan while Armaan is laughing silently at riddhima's face.
Air-hostess: Here you go!
Armaan:Thanks Miss uhm'.
Air-hostess: Mallika!(smiling)If you don't mind you are'.You see it's a pleasure to meet such polite people like you.
Armaan: Armaan Malik!Nice to meet you too!
Air-hostess: Armaan!Nice name'..It neans desire,right?(looking him up and down)
Armaan: Yeah It means desire!And your name means princess right??(glancing at riddhima who was going to burst soon)
Air-hostess: (Blushes)Yess It does!
Ridddhhima: Ahem Ahem( fake coughs)Excuse me!
The air-hostess glares at her for interrupting their conversation and then alters her expression and Armaan looks like he is going to laugh out loud at riddhima's face.
Air-hostess:Yes maam!Would you like something?
Riddhima: (fake sugar tone)YES!I would like a blanket,pleaseee?
Air-hostess: Yeah sure maan(grumpily)Armaan would you like a blanket,too?
Riddhima: No thank you!MY HUSBAND and I will share the blanket(holding armaan's arm and glaring at her)
Air-hostess:(sad that the stud is married)Ok maam!
Armaan: Oh ho bada pyaar aa raha hai?Abhi toh baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi'.
Riddhima: (takes her hand from his arms and crosses them on her chest)Haan mujhse kyu bat karni hogi?Jaao baat karo us 'MALLIKA' se!(pouts angrily)Huhn!
Armaan:Arre basket tum bhaav nahi de rahi thi'.isliye usse baat ki taaki tum jealous ho jaaogi toh baat karogi(grinning)
Riddhima:HAWW!Main jealous nahi thi first of all aur dusri baat main baat nahi karogi toh tum dusri ladkiyo se baat karoge??Hmm?(pouts sadly)
Armaan: Arre par!Aise nahi hai'Main kabse bula raha par tum sun nahi thi!(saw her putting a more sad look)Acha baba sorry,aage se aisa nahi karunga'.Tum shaadi baad bahut emotional blackmail karne lagi ho!(smiles a little)
Riddhima: (smiles wide)Woh toh hai'Tum hi bolte ho naa ki main 'SENTI' hu,toh phir apne senti hone ke faayde toh uthana chahiye ,na?(fluttering her eye-lashes innocently)
Armaan: HAWWW basket!Tum par meri company ka bahut bura asar pad raha hai?Tum intelligent ho rahi ho?!(crossing his arms on his chest with a smug look)
Riddhima: OH please main pehle se hi intelligent hu!(she pulls the hand rest up)Apne haath hatao(trys to remove his hands)
Armaan: (wide-eyes)Huhn?!NAHIII Basket yahaan nahi,aeroplane main hi shuru ho rahi ho!Room main jaayeenge na tab yeh sab karna(smirking)
Riddhima: (smacks his arm)Ewww Armaan!Kitne disgusting ho tum!Haath hatao mujhe sona hai(takes his hands out,shifts closer,wrapping her hand around his waist,keeps her head on his chest)Mujhe planes main bahut neend aati hai'.I usually sleep during travelling!
Armaan:(smiles and then wraps one hand around her waist,the other caressing her hair and keeps his chin on her head)Aur yahaan main soch raha thi ki meri wifey kuch romantic karni ki soch rahi hai?Bhagwaan aapne meri wife ko hi kyu unromantic banaya? Riddhima:Shut up Armaan!(then smiles a little at his blabbering and closes her eyes)
Armaan: Ok ok!Acha basket Phir jab hum new York se vaapis aa rahe the tab kyu nahi soyi rahi thi??
Riddhima:Woh mujhe stress tha na,papa se milne darr lag raha tha!
The Air-hostess comes and fumes to see them wrapped around each other.Armaan takes the blanket and wraps around them while riddhima glares at her and digs deeper into armaan.
Armaan:Thanks Mallika!(he smiles while she mumbled a welcome and went away)You know basket,we are going to have so much fun!
Riddhima:Hmmm'.
Armaan:You know why??
Riddhima:(exasperatedly)No!Tell me why?
Armaan:(cheekily)We are going to do things which you have never done in your boring life'..This is Basket's adventure trip!We are going to do all adventure sports'
Riddhima:(her eyes widened and she pulled out)No way!I am not doing any of those'.(frowning)And MY life is not boring'
Armaan:Acha tell me have you ever done-bungee jumping, jet skiing, rock climbing etc'.In short have you ever done something other THAN basketball!
Riddhima:(mumbled)Nooo but basketball is also a sport!
Armaan:But basketball is not the only sport'.
Riddhima:(pouting angrily)Then I am not doing any of them'
Armaan:Yes you are!
Riddhima:No I am not'..
Armaan:Yes Yes you definitely are'..
Riddhima:No I a-
Armaan grabbed her waist and smacked his lips on hers and slowly started nibbling them and caressing them with his lips.She responded as soon as she realized that he was probing her to open her mouth and he pushed her tongue inside her while she lost all her senses and forgot that they were fighting.He had that effect on her.He pulled back as she felt her gasping for breath while she sank in his arms breathing heavily.
Armaan:Yes you are'(panting)
Riddhima:(dazed)Yes I am'
Armaan grinned'If Mrs.Malik knew to take her way out so did he.He pulled her closer and slept kissing her hair.

After 4hours they reached phuket at 4pm(Thailand time)By the time they came out,it was 5pm and the car sent by the hotel took them to Swiss Garden-name of their hotel.The bell-boy opened the door to their room and riddhima gasped a little.It was an all white room with a big king-size white bed with a LCD in front.There was also a couch in the room.They had a balcony with sliding doors overlooking the beach and the vast blue sea.Couple of arm-chairs were placed in the balcony with a coffee-table.


She went to the balcony and was awe-struck by the serene view and did not notice the bell boy leaving.And nearly jumped when she felt two hands creeping up her waist and shuddered feeling his cold lips kissing her shoulder.
Armaan:Liked it?(pecked her ear-lobe)
Riddhima:(she turned around in his hold and put her arms around his neck and smiled a watery smile)Loved it!
Armaan:(seeing her moist eyes)Kya hua baby?
Riddhima:Armaaan,Its not a dream,right?(she asked cutely)whenever we are happy,something happens(a lone tear escaped her eyes)
Armaan:(he rubbed the tear away with his thumb and kissed her forehead)Nothing will happen baby!I'll not let anything happen this time.Do you trust me?(she nodded)And it is not a dream and I can prove it to you(he grinned)

WARNING:There is slightly mature content ahead in red.So don't read if you are not comfortable and are under-age.

He picked her up in his arms while she giggled a little and lowered her eyes shyly while putting her hands around his neck.He slowly laid on her bed and towered over while she was blushing furiously.Armaan dip in her neck and started kissing her neck going till her ear-lobe.Riddhima shifted her hand in his hair ruffling them.HE opened her first few buttons of her shirt and left lingering kisses on her upper chest.Riddhima arched her back throwing her head back moaning in pleasure as her nails dig his back.Her trembling hands caressed his back and chiseled chest.Armaan's hands felt his way up from her curves to waist sensually.He bend down and kissed her navel and belly and went upto her her ribs and bit her there leaving lone-bites on her upper chest and navel. In no time he got rid them of clothes and they lay naked inside the blanket.Tears seeped out of her eyes as he entered her.He kissed her on her lips to ease the pain as he made slow love to her.They moved in rhythm till they lay exhausted in sheer pleasure in each others arms.
They got up at 9pm,ate their food and went back to sleep cuddling each other.
Sanjeevani,2 pm.
Meanwhile the interns had surrounded Atul on the caf table and were telling him to continue the AR story.Muskaan also came and sat beside them.
Muskaan:arre main bhi sunaaogi story...
Atul:Arre yaar sabar karo'..Main rahul aur nikki ka wait kar raha hu'.unhe story zyaada maalum hai'Lo aa gaye!
Rahul,Nikki and Anjali,Abhi entered together and sat with them.After the usual hey's-
Naina:Ek question why do Dr.Rahul and Dr.Nikita know more??(asked confusedly)
Anjali:Kyuki who log ne ek saal tak apni relationship secret rakhi thi'.Aur Nikki Armaan ki best friend thi!
Nikki:Aur Rahul ko ridz pe crush tha!(everybody oohs)Isliye ye dono compete kar rahe'.
Rahul:(coughs)Par mujhe sacha pyaar ho gaya aur Armaan mera best friend ban gaya''.(he looked longingly at Muski)
Muski:(coughs)Haan Atul story start kar'.
Anjali:Main karungi!Kyuki maine ridz ki diary padhi hai'.(smirking while everybody eyes widened)Aur koi usse nahi batayega(she glared at everyone)Or I'm not telling you the secret parts of the love-story!(everybody nodded)Ridz and Armaan met in the basketball court first and she was the first person to beat Armaan in basketball and hence the name-'Basket'''And then started the prank-fight!Armaan and Riddhima were enemies and would keep playing pranks on each other!And that time we were not one group-I and Armaan used to be together and Atul and Ridz were together while Sapna was the mediator'.
Atul: And Armaan and I become friends after he started helping in pataaoing Anjie(Anji blushes)Yeah they used to fight the whole day and then some girl accused Armaan and Ridz sent Armaan to jail!
Naina:Kya??(wide-eyed)Seriously itni serious fights karte the!
Anji: Haan they used to hate each other!But Armaan was proved innocent by ridz and he was out of the jail'.And then armaan saved riddhima from vivek-a patient who tried to misbehave with ridz and I think ridz started having feelings for him when he consoled her even though he was angry with her was sending her to jail'.And then Armaan had feelings for her when they got lost in the jungle during medical camp!And he knew it for sure when Minnie got unwell and ridz consoled him'.And before you ask Minnie is a 13 yr old patient in the cancer ward who armaan is very attached to'and he is paying for her treatment as well'.
Naina:That's so nice!
Anji: And they had a break-up because of me'..I and armaan had made a bet for which armaan had to make riddhima fall in love with him but he forgot the bet and instead fell in love with her but ridz got to know about the bet and they broke-up.And Armaan was still trying to convince ridz that he was in love with her and then Armaan had an accident and ridz confessed her feelings as she couldn't see Armaan in pain'.But then they broke-up again'..And we all didn't know that they were dating!
Yuvi:They had a break-up again!How many times did they broke-up?
Muskaan:Many times!They are the favourites of problems!And this break-up was because of me''Actually my mom and dad wanted me to get married and I convinced Armaan to be my fake-boyfriend and after a lot of convincing,he agreed!He told ridz that he is going to help a friend as I told him to promise to not tell anybody!And ridz got to know and she broke-up with him again!And I made things more worse as I had a crush on Armaan!(everybody looks at her and rahul glares)Arre Armaan is HOT,you can't deny that!(everybody laughs)
Nikki:I had a crush on him too!
Anji: Me three!And they got together after armaan became a dev-das(everybody giggled)and left sanjeevani'.Ridz realised her mistake and she went behind him and they got back together again! Guys you don't know this'.When riddhima was stuck in the car with the bomb,armaan had locked himself with riddhima'.(everybody gasps)
Rahul:Shit yaar! Paagal hai woh!
Sid&Shilpa:(thinking)Itna pyaar karta hai woh riddhima se!
Rahul: After some more months,they decided to tell us about their relationship but no-one gave a chance to them!So we went to resort and they decided to tell us there but some fire-works happened and they were going towards ridz and Armaan went in between and he nearly died!And then the sanjeevani concert happened to save sanjeevani and Dr.Modi here was crushing on riddhima and Nikita unki band baja rahi thi for trying to steal her best friend's girl-friend'.Kya mast ladte the nikki and Abhi!Who would have thought they would get married''.
Abhi: Ok guys I did not know Armaan and ridz were together and I agree I had a crush on ridz''And I liked Nikki but that bodyguard best-friend of her' s didn't let me come near her'.And Riddhima was the one who was trying to help me and nikki get together(he smiled)
JP: Arre aap aage ki story boliye naa'.Aur yahaan har ladke ko riddhima flowerji pasand thi except AJ aur har ladki ko armaan bhaiya pasand the,hai na?
Atul:(dreamily)Haan main toh hamesha se hi anji ka thaa'..
Anjali: Shut-up Atul!Haan so nobody knew about them except for rahul and nikki!And then the big bang-Armaan and ridz went on a date to the park and landed up in jail and papa got to know about them!That was scary cause he did not approve of Armaan,Actually I did not approve of him as well!We thought he was playing around with ridz but ridz was determinant and Atul,Muski and Nikki were also supporting him!
Atul:It was so hard for them as they were not allowed to meet and not given duties together'''.So to convince Dr.Shashank,Armaan put up a tent below their house!And Armaan became famous and came to be known as Dr.love and people used to call him and speak about their problems.
Naina:yeah I heard about this Dr.Love but I didn't understand one thing,why didn't they elope?They loved each other,right?
Nikki:Yeah they did!But Armaan didn't want Ridz to leave her father and wanted to marry her with their blessings'.
Naina:Aww that's so sweet'.
Atul:So Dr.Shashank called the police and the whole sanjeevani came to help armaan-nurses,ward-boys,some patients as well!Armaan always helps everybody so they were ready to help in a jiffy'..They danced in front of the house'..And I should tell Nani and Padma mom love Armaan!They had no problem with him''And the hunger-strike!Actually it was an accidental hunger-strike!
Yuvi:Accidental huger-strike??
Anjali:Yeah he came to the hospital and atul asked him if he ate something and he said that he didn't eat something from yesterday and the media people got berserk and spread the new that Dr.Love was on hunger-strike!And then ridz also started fasting and she became weak'.and Armaan called her to tell everything and I recorded it and gave it to the reporters(guiltily)And ridz was angry as well as he was telling lies to everyone!And after I told everyone,they started accusing Armaan!Armaan said that after everyone assumed that he was on bhook-hadtal ,he really hadn't eaten anything and now he was on official hunger-strike''And I didn't believe him and he fainted and Dr.Modi checked him and I started believing in his love.After seeing that he fainted,ridz also started getting dizzy and nani told papa told that he'll loose his daughter if he'll remain stubborn.And papa agreed'..
Naina:(who was on the edge of the seat shouted)Yaaay!Atlast mil gayeee!
Nikki:Noo guys this was not the end'.they got many troubles coming''
Pagers beeped so they decided to continue the story later on'..
Phuket,9am.
Riddhima got up in the morning but frowned not finding Armaan beside her.She squeezed her eyes shut at the sun peeping from the window.She then slowly opened her eyes to find Armaan standing with a tray in his hands and grinning.He tugged on her blanket but she put it on her face stubbornly.
Armaan:Basket wake up baby!
Riddhima:(whining)Uh nooo!I wanna sleep''
Armaan smiled at her cute puppy face and kept the tray aside and got in the blanket and snuggled closer to her and kissed her bare-shoulder as she wearing a spaghetti top.He pulled her closer by the waist and kissed her cheek a few times and then went to her ear and whispered-
Armaan:Baby wake up!(she moaned a little)
He bit her cheek and chewed it a little and then whispered-
Armaan: You are so tasty I could just eat you up!(he bit her earlobe as she hissed)
RIdddhima: uhmmm(moaning)
Armaan:But I'll eat you later in the night'First you get up and see-I brought you breakfast-in-bed.
Riddhima smiled and pecked his lips and got up resting her back on the bed-post and leaning on to Armaan.
Armaan:See these are usual pancakes,toast and your cappucino!And this is a Thai speciality called Khao yam.It was only breakfast which I didn't find weird.It is a rice-salad which is eaten in breakfast(he said all this proudly and in an adorable tone)
Riddhima kissed his cheeks which made his dimples dig deeper as she mumbled an I love you to him.She brushed and they ate their food with their daily amount of romance and fun while feeding each other.After they finished-
Armaan: Basket you freshen up while I'll go and see what we can do today.(he was just in his shorts and picked his phone and wallet and went towards the door)
Riddhima:OK!(frowning)Oye where's your shirt?Why do you have to go shirt-less?
Armaan: (grinning)Basket it's a beach!
Riddhima: So??(glaring)wear your shirt and go!
Armaan shook his head while grinning at his possessive basket.He put on his vest and then went to her and kissed her forehead. Armaan:Now happy?(riddhima nodded)(he pecked her lips)Bye!
Riddhima:Bye!
Their hotel was connected by the beach and Armaan stood on the beach waiting for his dear wifey.
As he stretched he was well aware of the eyes following him.He felt a sudden breeze and turned back to see riddhima coming in a-WHAT?His eyes literally popped while his jaws dropped.He was staring at her with mouth wide open. Riddhima blushed on seeing his constant stare and was well aware of the other eyes glancing upon her.She went upto him smiling and closed his mouth by her finger.Armaan came out of his trance embarrassed and glared at the other guys who were glancing upon her as riddhima chuckled.
Armaan: Riddhima??Yeh kya pehna hai?
Riddhima: (frowns)Kapde pehne hai!Achi nahi lag rahi hu?(pouts){Riddhima was wearing a yellow spaghetti top with white shorts}
These were AR's clothes!~
Armaan: No No!You look VERY HOT!And that is the problem-first I'll have keep my hands off you till night and second-Mujhe tumhe insab se chupa kar rakhna padega.(he pulled into his arms)
RIddhima: tumne hi bola tha( imitating him)Basket it's a beach!Aur beach par aise hi kapde pehente hai'.
Armaan: very bad imitation!Chalo we are going to do the first thing in your adventure trip!(he said proudly)
He pulled her near the shore and then slowly moved aside and said-TaDaaa!
Riddhima: Jet ski??
Armaan: Haan Jet ski!Chalo jaldi chalo!
Riddhima: (pulled back)Nahiii main nahi jaaongi!Armaan mujhe swimming nahi aati'.Main gir gayi thi toh??(looking scared)
Armaan: Basket!(she didn't listen to him so he cupped her face in his palms)Meri taraf dekho!(she looked into his eyes)Main tumhe girne nahi dunga,ok??(she pouted so he pouted more)Pleashhh mere liye?|
Riddhima: (frowned)Ok chalo!
Armaan got on the jet ski and riddhima sat behind him clutching his waist tight with her eyes tightly shut.Armaan smiled seeing her tight grip.He started the jet-ski and as it went faster so did riddhima's grip tightened.
Armaan:Basket open your eyes and look around(he said softly)
Riddhima opened her eyes and smiled a little as she felt the water in her face and the wind running in her hair.It was truly an exhilarating experience.Armaan turned a little back to see riddhima smiling and smiled himself.He was happy to see her smiling and experiencing something new.
Riddhima:Thank you Armaan!(whispering in his ear)I love you!
And that was enough to make his dimples dig deeper.
Armaan: I love you too!

Precap-Riddhima's suprise,scuba-diving,Armaan's surprise!
PS-If you want the part faster keep commenting

Next Part: Part 15 B



Edited by shikhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! what a part , I just loved it.
AR's romance is as always hot, their fight is cute.
The best part is old story, I feel like watching my DMG. thanks for revising old days.
your writing remind me DMG.
pls cont soon. I hate to wait so longgg😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow very nice update..i just loved it
AR romance,fights were jurt mindblowing nd yes the old story was d best part...missing those days
keep it up nd plez keep updating soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyy nice story!!! pls pm me too :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it !!! update soon !!!! :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...such a beautiful part
super lovely and amazing...loved it
cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part. Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was an awesome update thanx and update soon

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The Heart’s Unexpected Choice ~ DraMione OS ❤️💚#PyarkaTropefest

Graphic Credits: oh_nakhrewaali This is one of my entries for the Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest Trope: Set A: Enemies-to-Lovers Set B: High...

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Posted by: zajedno

5 months ago

When is the right time???

Everything happens at the right time, but we can't always recognize that right time. Don't wait for the perfect moment, because the perfect...

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Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

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Posted by: PeachyPisces

1 years ago

ArSh(Armaan-Shilpa/DMG) ff:

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

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