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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
AmazinG!!!
LOVE THIS OS...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏wowww
i really loved reading it dear
well written⭐️

thnx 4 the pm too😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just awesome wow...
superb ideas love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 Chitvan, brilliant, short, sweet and honest - loved it - sorry been a bit bemaar so late x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awww cute dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awww he apologized! How I wish Arnav does that in the show 😳
Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hold up!! Hold up right there sista!!! I thought I'd read it all, I mean, I read this story out loud and first Khushi's thoughts hit me like 😲, then Arnav listening to them I was like double 😲. What a way girl! What a way to get it all pouring out into the open, the truth rained over him just there, JUST THERE!!!! 👏

But he came to soak it all up and dry them together, make sense lol? 😆 I read Arnav's heart felt dialogue and the further along I went, the higher my volume got and the more dramatic and SRK-ish my dialogue delivery got! So much so that I was giggling at myself for getting so drawn into this world, such a short, short story, yet so much feeling, packed full of love, full of emotion!! Wah!! 👏

I calmed down, read the rest and then this: "mai badalte badalte badal jaunga", aur humara kya Chitu!!!? Hum bhi parte, parte, parte hi rahenge! 🤗😎

This my friend, (though I didn't actually cry) falls in the 'tear jerker' category! Yes…it does!

You summed up your dialogue writing prowess in one short, magnifique story Chitu!!! *pinches Chitu's cheek in a lovable way* (just like that old aunty who pinched Arnav's cheek! 😆) Bacha you are goood! So short, yet so, very, very satisfying! And guess what!? It really is all in your speech dude! It really, honestly is! I always look forward to your stories cos I know I'm in for a treat!

The Dame of Dramatic Dialgoue dost! See what I did there!? 😆😉 Ummm yeah what else!?

YOU ROCK!!

Uff! Feel proud of you beta, very proud! 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written. Wish he would actually say this and let her know he loves her. Maybe there is hope, right after he can finish his Happy happy birthday thing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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badal ja Arnav, bdal ja badal ja badal ja bdl jaa! Badal ja b4 i come and whack you 4 being so damned bipolar! Pagal tau Arnav hai. He rly needx to sit down and think hard. REAL hard. Iloved ds quarter shot (?) that you've written, love how he opens up his heart to her no matter how big an idiot he's been just a while ago! Poor khushi, pagl krdia usko. And poor Arnav, pagal hogya khndan k hathon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS...Arnav really needs to realize that everything is his fault..if something like this scene happened then maybe he would've realized it, but nope!!😕

<3 Barun <3

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