OS : When The Axis Stops...(On Promo)

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

khusi's heart beat stopped..omg.
Thanx 4 d pm anyways

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Poor baby..the heart is too damaged for repair..!! Excellent.. planning for a send part..?

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Kashish

@Arhi_2205

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

That was a tight slap which he deserved. U are continuing this right. I your not then you are putting me through my worst nightmare. Do pm me if you continue. Which is a must please. I beg you

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prrk86

@prrk86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

asr deserved that😡 but not kushi😭

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sharanya

@shaaranya

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

OMG that was so beautiful!!!

Please write another conclusion with a happy ending please

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Tanya

@-Sarunforever-

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

her pulse will surly begin again

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I don't know why but I really feel that something like this should happen in the show. Loved how you wrote this OS. Beautiful <3

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rachna

@cicilia9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

beautiful .. but my question is why does khushi have to die in most of the os s on this forum 😭 hasnt she been through enough .. someone kill asr once in a while 😉 as for her heart restarting i hope it does ... n i hope she gathers herself n her battered heart n gets the hell out of this toxic rm ...

very well written yaar

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Hey, you write so well !! the last line brought tears to my eyes..it was well deserved for ASR !! but also do hope that Khushi's heartbeats are revived !!