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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
That was VERY nice! I really liked it! I want Payal to react EXACTLY like this when she finds out why Arnav married Khushi and how!!!
I can see that the Raizada's will ALWAYS only think of Anjali! Even Arnav is too obsessed with Anjali and her "Shyam Pooja" to feel any guilt over what he did to Khushi and what she had to face with that Snake!
I hope Payal takes a strong stand! THAT is what I want!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: taniks

So sad but very well written


thanks taniks.

Originally posted by: msrenjini

NIce One. Please do PM me while ur next updates


thanks, willl do renjini.

Originally posted by: sweetnoori

hii dear its really nice,,,i must appericate ur work and also ur idea specially contact eye that was sooo nice dear amzing superb job one req plz contu dear i don,t know ur name rht,a wayy thz wriitten cool tweeey osssawm dear thnku,,,dear for greattt os


thanks noori. the thing almost everyone love abt the leads in IP, is the volumes they speak through their eyes, so me took advantage of it..happy that u liked it,u can call me sowme, will let u know wen i update it.


thanks Priya.

Originally posted by: DasGH

Haha this is a good lesson to Akash Clap


ya..i am still angry on that person, i agree that payal was at fault, but u have to defend her wen a third person accuses her, baad mein u can sort it out wen u are alone..i would have loved Akash beating or atleast saying enough Sjhyam, then later fighting with payal for hiding the truth.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
yess ... love it
pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sana_malik

do continue plzzz and gve me a pm wen u update :)


thanks Sana, will pm u.

Originally posted by: arushistarz

continue dear awesome!!


thanks dear.

Originally posted by: fan09

hats off to payal...
please pm me when u update...


hmm..i reaally want to see payal being more stronger on screen.

Originally posted by: zohakhan59

very well written os
amazing Embarrassed


thanks zoha..i am happy u liked it.

Originally posted by: Arshi_lovergal

Update soon main toh emotional hogayiCry bahut accha thaClap
plz pm me when you update thanksBig smile



he he he..even me went emotional while writing it. thanks

Edited by cool_tweety - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Loved it
Pm me when you update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Awsome...well written..can u pm me when update it pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
very touchy and sad !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
lol i wish this will happen!! sigh..hopefully!! n ya guess i am sadistic too!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
that was so sad but beautiful
what happens next
oh dear why is it that everywhere there is only talk of separation
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice os plz continue soon

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