Khuda Jaane ll Kriyaansh FF ll chapter 4 pg 60

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

k... iski wajah se update mat rok... pls...

dekhungi

pehle FTT karna hai

den dis one 😳

but yup aro se puchna padega aage kya

last part uska tha 😆

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

good gal... chal she'll atleast start with her writing part for this FF

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

hi my cute sis aroma & cutee lil sis konpal.

how r u both???

sorry yaar khuda jane read krne ka tym nahi mil pa raha actually i m new in dis atmosphere of clg & hostel so it will take tym 4 me to settle & plan my schedule well , when i get scheduld proprly i'll cum OL daily & read both of ur works..

Love u both & tight hugs..

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha
yayiee first one to comment ya first to comment and last to unres 😡
bt srsly last one 😆 oh finally u got it huh?
bt phir bhi 😛 ya ya. dande leke tumhaare peeche padna padta hai unres karvaane ke liye
Awesum updte guyz thanx
luvd it
krisha nd reyam in same shopping mall bt did nt see each other nt fair haha itni jaldi love story start kar den? mazaa nahi aayega phir!
bechara shopkeeper sharon ne uska dimaag hi kharaab kardiya 😆 lolz... yup!
kriyansh takraying 😆 bt o LLHH unwaah😭 nt possible har first meet mein inka LLHH hota hi hai 😒 ye humaara style hai isiliye nahi hua 😛
lyking kriyam ka relation 😃 Thanx 😃
kriya helping swayum in finding sharon's ring hmm
gosh kitna tym liya bt the best ring choose ki ya rite
the ring was awesumm guyz luvd it ❤️ thanx bahut mushkil se dhundhi thi 😆
rey played scha stupid prankk with kriya bt was funn u noe aro's plan 🤣
evn i lyk to do that 😆 oh hoo!
kriya ne rey ko dhund liya 😆 Yup 🤣
rey ki band bajing now 😆 dikha mennu 😆
kriyansh fighting nd pulling each other's hair 🤣 🤣 lolz... aro is know for comedy 🤣
swayum nd sharon ki bhi fight shuru ya rite!
swayum sharon se darta hai 😆 lolz... he always do
yeh dono bhi phirse strt huh yup!
ladai rokne gaye the yaa khud ladne haa🤣 🤣 i prefer d second one 😆
kriyansh ko bhi bahana mil gaya continue karne kaa 🤣 🤣 lolz right!
all in all hilarious updte yaar Thanx
luvd it thankuu
updte soon nope update later on. mere FA chal rahe hain 😆. next to next week only if science ka FA na hua toh 😛
luv yaa luv ya too!

Tu itni late unres karne ke baad itne lambe comment deti hai

ek kaam kiya kar tu late hi unres kiya kar

main kuch ni kahungi 😆

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

wrong post sorry 😳

Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti
hi my cute sis aroma & cutee lil sis konpal.
how r u both???
sorry yaar khuda jane read krne ka tym nahi mil pa raha actually i m new in dis atmosphere of clg & hostel so it will take tym 4 me to settle & plan my schedule well , when i get scheduld proprly i'll cum OL daily & read both of ur works..
Love u both & tight hugs..

Hey di

hows u???

Missing u a lot!

arey sorry kis liye???

ek toh lil sis bulaati ho aur phir sorry bhi

not fair

ye mere saath ni chalta yaad rakhna ye baat aap 😛

take ur time to settle down over there di

we both can wait for ur comments

Love u too

Badaa waala hug 🤗

missing u a lot!

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Kesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

u did not pm me unwaah..

but dan also g2g bye...

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Purplevalley

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Hey k kesha
me going..nw wil be bk after sumtime...

Planning sumthing special 4 my nxt update...so bye bye

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prabhjot ARMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

hello guys we r back
o god again confuse
hum k nd aroma kya guys itni jaldi bhool gye
mana ki hum devil thora late ho jatey hey lekin hame koi bhool jaye ho hi nahi sakta ...
kitni jaldi a gye
nhi

but m today really very happy nd my devils know the reason
ok bohat ho gyi meri bak bak
here is the update enjoy

chapter 2

Swaron and Kriyaansh were fighting.. Kriyaansh were busy pulling eachother hairs and abusing eachother.

Finally the parents came and saw all this.

Mr. Shekhavat - stop it...!!!!

Mrs. Shekhavat - ye sab kya ho raha hai.?

Mr. Rai Prakash - oh gosh sharon tum bhi...!!!ye sab kya ho raha hai...!!!!!

Now the parents were fuming like hell and our baccha log were standing n an attention position with their head down

All - sorry...!!

Finally after a long tym all settled down and engagement gets over WITHOUT any fuss.

== Evening ==

Krisha were sitting in their balcony

Sharon - wo ladka rey tha..!!! lolz sissy tu toh badiya phasi

Kriya - shut up

Sharon - oye badi hun. theek se baat kar

Kriya - ya rite 5 mins...!!!

Sharon - ya then even im elder than u...!!!

Kriya - leave it tere se bahes bakwaas hai

Sharon - yup

Sharon - btw do u noe..

Kriya - ...

Sharon - do u noe rey belongs to singhania family. ohthey are soo rich

Kriya - swayam ko chodne ka iraada hai kya

Sharon - what...!!!!

She sat up straight with her mouth hanging

Kriya - tu hi us kamine mein itna interest dikha rahi hai

She said taking a yawn

Sharon - u...!!!!!

And she started chasing kriya who was giggling and making sharon mad.

Sharon - ah finally caught u...!!!

Kriya - ...

Sharon - kyun ab kya hua..?

Kriya - mumma

Sharon - mumma kahan hai mumma

She left her look here and there. Kriya taking this as a gud opportunity ran away

Sharo - teri toh...!!!! you are soo dead miss kriya rai prakash

Kriya - lets see...!!!!

Both the sisters have a lot of fun specially kriya teasing sharon

== Night ==

Sharon was sitting on her bed lost in her own world. opps correction please. lost in swayam's world

suddenly her phone rang.

Sharon - hello

swayam : m sorry baby ...
sharon : please swayam mujey koi baat nahi karni ...(fake anger ...)
swayam : scha mey main kisi girl sey baat nahi karta tumharey pishey sey ...
(o teri isne to jaad dila diya ab to gya kaam sey ...)
sharon : omg main to bhool hi gyi thi is barey main thanks jaad karwane k liye mr swayam ...
swaym : ise boltey hey a bail mujey maar j mane kya kiya mane to khud kulhari per pair rakh diya ...
sharon : min tumsey baat kar rahi hoo ...
swayam : ha sahron bolo but scah mey wo to rey hi ...
sharon : j ashi baat hey ki rey bichare ka naam lga do ... tum or kriya dono us k pishey par gye hoo ...
swayam : sharon ... kriya k bare kuj mar bolna ... wo bohat ashi hey i know my bro whi use tang kart hey ...
sharon : o really nd i know my sis fight usi ne start ki hogi ...
swayam : kuj b bolna but kriya ko kuj mat bolna ...
sharon : tum b mere devar k bare main scoh samaj k bolna ...
swayam : sharon main sahi keh rha hoo tum galat tum larkiya hamesha hi ...(cut by sharon ...)
sharon : u mean ki hum girls hamesha galat bolti hey ha ...
swayam : nahi mera matlab wo nahi tha baby . main to bas ...
sharon : main to kya ha ab bolo . tumhara matlab wahi tha ...
swayam : nahi mera matlab wo nahi tha meri baat samjo ...
sharon : ab tumhara matlab hey ki main na samaj ho ...
swayam : nahi baby ...
sharon : don't call me baby ...nd don't call me ...huh...
swayam : listen ...
sharon cut the call ...
swayam sitting in his room its 10pm ...
rey to his mom : mom bhai kha hey aaj khaney par b nhi aya...
rey's mom : pta nahi beta bola ki bhookh nahi hey ...
rey : thik hey main dekh k ata hoo ...
rey enter in swayam's room
rey : hey buddy kya hua ...
swayam : ...
rey : bhai ...
swayam : ...
rey now shout : BHAI >>>>>>>>
swayam : kya hua ... kyu chila rha hey ...
rey : arey kab sey to bula rho tum sun hi nahi rahey ...kya hua btao to ...
swayam : kuj nahi ...
rey : kuj nahi matylab pakka fight hui right ...
swayam : ha wo morning wali fight ki wjha sey ...
rey : mujey pta hey j sab us kriya ... ka kiya hua hey chup nahi bath sakti thi kya ...
swayam : rey chup kriya k bare main kuj mat bolna wo bohat ashi hey or galti teri thi ...
rey : meri galti kese thi ...
swayam : teri hi thi tu hi use tang kar rha tha mane bola tha mat kar per tu sunta hi kab hey ...
rey : ok fine meri galti thi ...
swayam : chalo koi to mana ...
rey : ab ...
swayam : whi to nahi pta ...
rey : ok then i have an idea ...
swayam : what ...
rey :...
swyam : but main kesey ...
rey : easy hey main to ALWAYs apni GF's ko manae k liye esa karta hoo ...
swayam : rey meri ek hi GF hey wo hey sharon or ajj tak wo naraj hoti thi to choclate se maan jati thi ...
rey : to ab try kar lo ...
swayam : tu marwayega ...
in rayprkash mension ...
sharon in full in anger ...kriya enter in room ...
kriya : namaskar aj k moam ka hall ...
mosAM bohat hey kharab ...
dil kisi ko milney k liye hey bekrar ...
lekin is wakt manson hey ...
to abhi karn hoga intjar ...
halki halki bonde girne lagi hey ...
to please shata leke nikalna bhara ...
but ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hey ...
bohat jaldi ane wali hey phir se bhar...
to agaley samachar k liye karna hoga intjar ...
jane se pehle ek baar to muskra di g a aap ...
after lisning kriya k samachar sahron give a big smile ...
kriya : thats like my sweet sissy . vese meri wja sey hui na j fight ...
sharon : nahi j baat nahi hey ...
kriya : arey muje ...us waqt gussa bohat a gya tha to ...
sharon : stupi chup asi baat nahi hey to tension mat ley ok ...
kriya : ok then so ja . nd i know ki jijz tume jroor manaey k liye kuj na kuj special karege ...

phew ho gya ... hum dono thak gyi likhtey likhte
abhi tum log jaldi sey pree like button nd comment b
jutaas nd chapples kuj b pheko most wel come
ab tum log kis ka wait kar rhey ho let me talk to k usey pta hoga
k tumhey pta hey wo kya hey ...
K; i think precap ...
aroma : asha wo b deni paregi kya ...
k : ha ...
aroma : ok

precap .: kriya : kon hey wha ...
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kriya : bchao ... bchao . bchao ...
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person ; main tumhey marney nahi aya jo bchao bchao chila rhi ho ...
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krya : ok then chor chor chor chor chor chor ...

lo dey di precap ...