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asimov

@asimov

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

I like this story line...see after listening to nani in the episode today...i felt bad for Khushi...everyone is trying to protect di...but what about Khushi...she has suffered a lot...and well everyone seems against her for what happened..except Arnav...so when nani was like..."you remind Anjali of what happened"...I was like Really people...so I like the way you are portraying things and the whole 6months marriage situation...liked it is what I mean to say...and I apologize for my rambling:)

Edited by asimov - 13 years ago

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Fantastic OS! :D

Very well written.. Loved it loads 😃

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Amazingly written. Poor Khushi.

Edited by desisweetheart9 - 13 years ago

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Wonderful OS! 👏

The makers of the show seem to be suffering from partial amnesia right now but you have captured what Khushi is supposed to feel so perfectly, the lines matched together and the pain of losing trust and hearing the same words from the man she loved was just written beautifully. 😊

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Devilways

@Devilways

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Great os can u make it w two shot?

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

well you cant blame payal for what she said after what you did to her little sis do you really think she would let you come anywhere near her
uff what has arnav gone & down ruined his love all by himself

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

I am completely amused by your writing!

Loved it so much.

your depiction of Khushi's mental state,her turmoil is just awesome.

plz continue soon.

Thanks for the PM.

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Bajaj.rb

@Bajaj.rb

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Wow loved it... He needs to feel this..

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silki

@joa123

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

well written os...

loved the way u have compared the words from Arnav and snake...

please update next part soon :)

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

This was an unexpected twist 2 the story & title but u wrote it nicely & the way Payal protected her siscer wow she is fierce man & feel bad 4 Arnav bcoz she will b leaving him.