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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Brilliant! Brilliant!
Absolutely heart warming os!

I so,empathize with khushi. Poor soul. Always has 2 go thru the worst. : (

U r going 2 continue ths,ryt?

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

i better be getting part 2...3 or however it takes to make him realize his makes, his family realize the injustice they have done to her and how she copes with it all.

btw it was really well written

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

awesome...i liked the irony of the cruel taunts...poor khushi...

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

that was amazing. loved the way you compared arnav and shyams words and highlighted the similarity between them. it totally helped feel why khushi is so heart broken... and yet arnavs pain could also be felt.

On one side the man whom she hated the very guts. On the other, the man she loved with all her heart. Both looked at her, sardonically mouthing words now blending into a perfect symphony of misery.

loved that paragraph especially the bold underlined part.

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Hira

@hira_arnie

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

WOW WAT AN AMEZING WORK DUDE...

KEEP IT UP...

FAB JOB...

I REALLY LOVED IT...

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Awesome os. Your really can make readers get hooked to your writings. Thanks for the pm. Write more eagerly waiting to read more from you.

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blue.kindle

@blue.kindle

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

The high handedness of the man is just too much! I am glad Payal gave him a piece of his mind. Rather it was all that we wanted to say to him as we ranted about the unfairness of the whole episode. Beautifully written as always. Hope you will continue soon with this idea. Somebody needs to put ASR in his place and it is "high time" he learns how to treat his wife.

I am "high" tonight!😆
So it is a "high-time" for me tonight. 😉

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

GRR! I was like 'Teehee.. We a get some HOT stuff!' And then you're like: Nope!

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chocobubble

@chocobubble

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

awesome work👏
khushi turmoil is indeed heart-rending... u have brought emotions in a fantastic manner!
i am happy that i got to see a payal i had seen in the first two months and had liked a lot... the payal who didnt care two hoots about some freaking singh raizada who had dared to hurt her sister!! it is sad that the makers reduced her to spineless woman who sometimes looks an anjali sidekick who only thinks about herself and her petite world-or sometimes doesnt think at all the only difference here is that payal tries to seduce her already in love husband wid chameli tel and kajli surma