New SS-Angel in my life Part 2 page 8

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Ok...guys...with tension increasing in my other FF-Love or just lust.I got the idea of writing this SS.I have decided that I'll update this FF one day and will update Love or Just lust the other day.Hope that you'll love this SS as much as you loved my other work.Here's the prologue and the character sketch!!!
PROLOGUE
'Delhi' the largest city of India and also the capital of it.People here call it 'Dil Walon ki delhi'.Being the 2nd largest metropolitan city of India,life here is really fast...especially for businessmen like me.This city has taught me a lot of things..made me able to stand up for my own..made me a responsible person...taught me how to face the life...also...taught me how to fall in love.Just couldn't teach me one thing---how to stop loving that special someone.Believe me,I don't even want to stop loving her...her memories are the only things that I've got.This is Arnav Singh Raizada.And this is my story.

Character Sketch
Arnav Singh Raizada- A 26 year old successful businessmen of Delhi.Ruthless,arrogant...always working hard to achieve more and more success.Lives with his elder sister Anjali,their nani,mama,mami and his cousin Akash.This FF is a flashback story...The story of Arnav's life...and Arnav is telling this story to someone really special in his life.

Khushi Kumari Gupta--A 22 year old..cheerful,bubbly girl.Her name describes her personality perfectly.Because wherever she goes...she fills that place with happiness.She becomes the angel in Arnav's life...who teaches him how to live...how to enjoy...more importantly how to fall in love.More about her will be known with the passage of the story.

Lavanya Kashyap--Arnav's best and only friend.They used to study together in Hravard...later she joined Arnav in his Company AR.Has a secret crush on Arnav,but hesitates to express because she knows that Arnav will never return her feelings.

Anjali Singh Raizada-A 30 year old cheerful woman...have polio since childhood.Though she never shows her sorrows.Loves her brother a lot.Unmarried.
More characters will be introduced later.
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Part 1--Scroll down
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Usma55 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What happened
Is Khushi dead or something
Update soon
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  1. Hey dear grt start
pls pm me i wanna now who is the special person in arnav's life
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Don't forget to hit like and comment.New readers send me a Buddy req if you want PMS.Thank you!!!
Part 1---Seeing Her for the 1st time
It was an usual day.Di complaining on the phone how I always miss family time due to my work load...asking when am I coming back home.Mami as usual talking in her personal spoken English...irritating Mamaji. Nani passing her lonely time with her pet Laxmi and Akash working obediently in the cabin beside me,It was Just a normal day.However,it wasn't just any other day..because that day I met her.As the people say-'Delhi ki barish ki koyi ata pata nahi hoti..(Rain of Delhi has no time table) ..It started raining heavily in the evening.I was pissed off at the rain as I hate it when it rains.I was returning home from office checking my mails on my phone...when something red in colour caught my eye.

My car was near my home.Just a few steps away..there's a large open field infront of my house...which was now full of water because of the rain.Some kids of our colony were jumping in the rain.They always used to come out of their houses to enjoy the rain and I always wondered what made them do so.However,as they were kids,it was understandable.I was watching them from the car when I saw her.She came from nowhere and just joined the kids.She was jumping with them...like a kid.She was in a red churidar...with long dark hair.I couldn't see her face yet as it was dark.Suddenly a lightening occurred..and I saw her for the 1st time.She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen in my entire life.She had big dark brown eyes...milky skin and rosy lips.She had this breathtaking smile that sure made me loose my senses.However,it was short lived as my car reached the gate and the gateman opened the gate.

Di was waiting worried for me.Though there was nothing really to worry about...worrying about me seemed to have become a part of her life,i was still getting over from the sudden encounter with that girl.Seeing me lost,Di touched my shoulder asking-'Chote is everything alright? Are you feeling sick?' 'I'm fine di..'I answerde absent minded.'Ok...You go to your room...change and i'll send Haldi wali dudh to you.'She said giving a smile.I went upstairs to my room.Suddenly a thought crossed my mind.May be she's still there...playing with the kids.Thinking that,I went to the veranda from where the field was visible.Yes...she was stll there.She was carrying a kid...making him go round...playing and laughing with them.Her laughter was audiable from Veranda and trust me,it sounded like the most melodious song I've ever heard.After sometime,I saw a girl holding an umbrella. I recognised her as she got closer...It was Payal..Daughter of Sashi uncle who happened to be our neighbour.

'Khushi...'She called out her name.And she looked at Payal.Payal was shouting-;God Khushi...You're totally wet.Come inside the umbrella...or you'll catch cold.' 'Just two minutes more jij..'she pleaded.'No...Dad and mom are looking for you.Lets go Khushi...you'll fall sick if you stand this long in the rain.' 'Ok..fine.'She made a duck face and finally agreed.She have the kids hugs and kisses as she was leaving.Payal held her hand and she got inside the umbrella.She bade them goodbye and slowly walked away with Payal.'Khushi...'I muttered.

Ok...how's it? good...bad? hate or love it/plz comment and like.Thank you!!
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It was GOOD 👏
bt pls pm me i told u to pm me bt u didn't 😭
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thanks for the PM

Please continue
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intereting!! wud love to read more...
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loved the start interesting concept so he is telling maybe their child the flashback of their life thanks for the pm congrats on the new ff

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Lovely Start. Waiting to read more
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This is extremely interesting! :D

Please do continue….

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