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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi yhe up is good or rather i say a kiss filled part-- 😳😆😆 must be an overdose 😆😳

so vivaan is standing outside and recheering the moments he had with sacchi just a few minutes before
muskaan who came searching him there asked him why he iss tanding here alone
vivaan who now understood the pain and agony sacchi went through tell his di about it muskaan being his di and a good friend understand his feelings and pain she assures him that sacchi will surely accpet his love as no one can refuse him
by hearing thsi vivaan feels nice and he also determines to himself that he wil make sacchi realise his love soon
the enxt day after fighting with herself when sacchi reached the office she was nervous the very look of sonia and anjali with vivan made her angry
and for vivaan he was thoroghly enjoying this
plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Puri

Update was gud.👏👏--thanku 😊😊

Vivaan has realized now that he did wrong when he rejected Saachi's love.Though his sister is confident that no girl wud reject her brother in her right mind.-- 😛😆

Saachi is really confused.she loved him back then but he rejected her then and that made her heart broken.How can she forget that so easily.-- exactly 😆

Vivaan is trying hard to win his love back by any means.well they say all is fair in love and war.😆😆
---hope he wins soon 😛😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
awesome part dear...--thanku 😃😃
so Saachi wants time this time...--😛😛😆 but i wonder if vivaan gona give her time...the way he is making difficult for her 😆😆😆
well Vivaan is all set to make her confess...-- 😆😛
oh i love this Vivaan...-- 😳😳
cont soon dear...


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Part 7

Last Part


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Saachi sighed to herself…though she was disappointed to know that her parents wud be arriving few weeks late than scheduled as Dheeraj's exams had been extended…but she was relieved after her chat with her mom…as she told her abt Vivaan & his confession……her mother had only one thing to say…

Mom—saachi, yeh tera decision hoga, its important ki tu kya chahti hai, agar tujhe lagta hai ki tu Vivaan ko ek mauka de sakti hai…toh dekh le hume koi problem nahi hai…hume Vivaan pehle bhi pasand tha aur ab tum saath hote ho toh hume koi problem nahi hai… faisla tujhe karna hai…kya tu Vivaan se door Khush reh sakti hai …tujhe in 5 saalon mein maine dekha hai…aur tu khush nahi thi ….aur ab agar zindagi ne tum dono ko phir milaya toh kuch ache ke liye milaya hoga… just remember, tera job hi faisla hoga hum tere saath hai…

Saachi thot to herself…her mom is surely right…she had never been happy without Vivaan…& she knows it herself she cant stay away from him she has accepted this to herself…Saachi knows from beginning from the time in Kasuali….Vivaan was always sure that he doesn't want any relation any commitment …may be it was her who had rushed into it…& had been impulsive……& now after so many years if Vivaan has come back to her & confessed his love…then he must surely love her…He surely sounded sincere & truthful on dat party night…

Saachi smiled to herself how he had apologized y'day evening abt the file incident…

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Saachi was abt to leave office…when she heard Vivaan calling her name…

Vivaan—going home chalo main drop kar deta hoon…

Saachi(irritated)—thank you so much "sir" but I will manage fikr karne ki zarut nahi hai…

Vivaan—par…main ussi taraf ja raha hoon its…

Saachi—par mujhe tumhare saath nahi jana…tum(angry) tum peecha kyun nahi chod dete….subah se... just leave me alone for once… tumse waqt manga hai na Vivaan…toh kyun waqt nahi de sakte mujhe… ya tum chahte ho main koi impulsive decision le lu…aur yeh sab karne se kya sabit karna chahte ho ?… fine I agree…u still affect me...but let me think abt it… ……(turned the other way) plz..itna toh kar sakte ho? Aur I am asking for too much…

Vivaan agreed she does have a valid point

Vivaan—fine…aaj job hi hua uske liye…I am sorry…& I promise ab se tumhe pareshan nahi karunga…aur jab tak tum nahi chaogi tumhare karib bhi nahi aaunga…but atleast for old times sake hum dost toh reh sakte hai…. (seeing her giving a doubtful look he smiled) it's a gentleman's promise… sirf dost…plzz…

He sounded so sincere in his apology…that Saachi agreed…& for the coming days…they were like old times…talking with each other, working together…
They spend time with each other…occassionaly went out with each other…got to know each other better…during his chats he shared abt his parents also….
Saachi felt sympathetic towards her…& cant help but feel sorry for him…how much he suffered…

Over the weekend she had a chat with Palak & Gautam too who also had same thing to say…that its gonna be her decision…Palak was though surprised to know Vivaan actually confessed…she wasn't expecting it…but she was happy for Saachi that finally she was getting her love back…

Saachi had made up her decision long back…now its just left to convey it to Vivaan…but everytime she decided to say it….. she cudn't sometime they were interrupted by some person or some urgent work…sometime she got busy with her official work sometimes Vivaan got busy…Sometime her hesitation stopped her…she thot it was much easier to confess 5 yrs back….she just went to him & said it…now its more difficult…

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It was Singhania industries annual party….special occasion this time since Vivaan is here…every year its Aditya who attends it…

Vivaan came along Saachi as he had picked her from her house…she decided that finally today she can confess as he seems to happy & excited…also her parents wud be arriving tomorrow evening…so she can now officially introduce Vivaan to them & they can work on finalizing wedding…

Though Saachi was njoying the party but she was dying for it to end as she had decided to confess after the party…she glanced over Vivaan who was talking with some guests…at that moment she got a call from her dad informing abt details of their flight & other details…since it was too noisy inside she went outside to attend the call….as she came back she saw something which blew her fuse…

She saw Sonia lurking around Vivaan…what she cud make out from the distance she was asking for a dance…she cud see Vivaan refused initially but after few pleas he gave in…

Saachi(mumbled to herself)-- Great Mr. Vivaan, abhi thodi der pehle maine dance ke liye poocha…toh saab ne mana kar diya aur ab dekho… kaise close dance kar rahe hai…U are a limit Vivaan…arghh…

She turned the other way…she saw waiter passing by …she took a glass from him she needed a cold drink to cool her mind…

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As soon as song ended Vivaan sighed in relief…& instantly moved away from the dance floor already his patience was running low with Sonia's non stop chattering…god knows what she was blabbering abt…he wasn't paying attention when she had asked for dance he refused twice…but she pleaded too much…making him feel awful in front of so many business associates around…finally he gave in….

He glanced through the party searching for Saachi…but he cudn't place her…he thot she might be somewhere around he even asked but even they didn't had any idea…

Vivaan once again looked around when accidently his gaze fell on Saachi moving out of the door…he followed her through the doors…He called her name but she didn't replied… he saw Saachi walking out….he called for her…

Vivaan—Saachi, …Saachi ruko, where are you going? Listen to me….Saachi….

He walked towards her & caught her hand to stop her…

Saachi (turns around) - Why are you following me? … tum jao…Goo…I am also going….

Vivaan—wohi toh pooch raha hoon…kaha ja rahi ho?

Saachi (smiled)—kaha ja rahi hoon? Aapse matlab?

Vivaan—saachi tum…

Saachi(giggled)—yes, its me…& I am going…

Vivaan—theek hai abhi chalte hai…party thodi der mein khatam hone wali hai…hum saath mein challenge…

Saachi(laughed…pointing a finger to herself & Vivaan)—hehehe hum saath…means… tum aur main…saath challenge…r u sure? Par pehle tumhe dancey dancey se fursat toh mile…

Vivaan(surprised to see her talk like this)—huh!! (confused) dancey? Yeh kya hai?

Saachi—oh!! I am sorry sir…aap boss ho…sab presentation se samajh aata hai…ok…I will explain…dancey dancey matlab jo aap andar us bandariya ke saath kar rahe the…(came closer to him…took his hand kept his hand on her waist) aise…pakadkar…hil rahe the…

Vivaan(rolled his eyes..he kept wondering wats wrong with saachi)—main nahi mujhe lagta hai tumhara dimaag hil gaya hai…

Saachi(nodded in no)—Nooo… main nahi hil rahi…tum …tumhari naak (moved finger towards his nose) hil rahi hai dekho…

Vivaan (moved back in time else she wud hav scratched her cheek with her nail)—kya kar rahi ho… abhi lag jata … (almost dragging her along) Come on andar chalo party mein…

Saachi(pulled her hand back)—no…mujhe nahi jana andar…main ja rahi hoon…I am going…

Vivaan—haan abhi challenge na…hum saath aaye the…toh akele kaise jaogi…I will drop u…

Saachi—haath chodo mera… mujhe party mein nahi jana…watch ur dance with bandariya…(tried to taked her hand back) chodo…

Vivaan—Saachi… wots wrong with you….aur ye kya bole ja rahi ho… aur main tumhe koi dance nahi dikha raha…now come on…

Saachi (a bit shaky a bit giggly) – ofcourse mujhe kyun dance dikhaoge…maine poocha toh mana toh kar diya tha tumne….

Vivaan(turn back to look at her)– have you lost it Saachi… you are behaving drunk….(dats when Vivaan's tubelight goes on) Saachi….(shocked) have you been drinking? (its when his gaze fell on glass in her left hand he had not noticed it earlier) ye kya pi rahi ho tum? (tried to take the glass)

Saachi(moved back)—zehar hai …tumse matlab?

Vivaan– pagal ho gayi ho tum…(comes closer & tries to take the glass from her hand, she refuses to give with a "get away" but he manages to take it)

Saachi(keeps blabbering) --mera glass do…its mine…(seeing Vivaan taking a sip) aeee….this is mine…tum khatam kar doge…do mujhe…

Vivaan(kept the glass on the floor)—Saachi…do you know wot this is….

Saachi(nodded in yes)—yes!! Mujhe pata hai…(giggled) yeh juiiicccee hai… pata is glass pe ek chotta sa pink umbrella bhi tha…(tried to look around) kaha gaya? (smacked Vivaan) tumne gira diya…mujhe chaiye tha….ab dhundo… (going tipsy by the minute)

Vivaan(laughs) –Saachi…are u crazy or what?... kisne kaha tumse yeh juice hai…(tried to hold her…fearing she might fall) this is the most lethal drink that is there….this is sangria, the fruits are soaked in rum overnight and then mixed with wine, brandy, fruit juice and sprite, it does taste like fruit juice but is dynamite… kisne diya tumhe…

Saachi(already she was half listening to what Vivaan had said…she got a lil worried) -- Am I drunk? …par sab pi rahe the…aur glass par pink umbrella bahut cute tha… (tried searching again) ab kho gaye kahi…itne the mere pass(sadly) I lost all 😔

Vivaan(amused)–kitne the…I mean… how many have you had.

Saachi (starts giggling) – ermmm….2…nahi…3 I don't know ….(as if remembering) haan it was 5… nahi…

Vivaan– what? 5 …Saachi…kya kiya tumne😲😲 …(She now gone to a diff world…. She has gone into a giggling fit) ok listen you stay here …(made her sit on bench …since they were out in garden) I'll get some limejuice, shayed tumhara nasha kam ho….(but saachi was in her own world giggling to herself…Vivaan shook her) Saachi …suna tumne… andar mat ana main abhi aa raha hoon….

Saachi(caught his hand as he was abt to leave)—abhi na jao chodkar…ki dil abhi bhara nahi…(she goes absolutely sozzeled by now full throated) abhi na jao chodkar…

Vivaan(laughs shakes his head… turns with finger on his lips)- "Ssshhh" …chup chap baitho yaha I am just coming…

she lowers her voice n goes "chup tum raho…chup hum rahe…(pulled him towards her) khamoshi ko khamoshi se baat karne do…" swaying a bit.

Vivaan tries to calm her down…but he hard time controlling her…finally he gave up… and with one swift movement lifts her… she puts one arm around his neck

Vivaan-- I think I sud take you home…andar jakar aur tamasha karogi…chalo ghar chale

Saachi went again…"chal chale, apne ghar humsafar" almost sang in his ears…

Vivaan (tried to move his face…she was making difficult for him to walk)– Saachi…kya kar rahi ho chup raho warna maroonga….

Saachi(giggled)– tum…tum mujhe maroge… main to dar gayi…

Vivaan(laughs) – tum aur daar… koi connection nahin hai ab chup chap chalo.

Saachi–par kaha lekar ja rahe ho?... where are you taking me?...

Vivaan(whispered)—just wait & watch…

As they reach the car and Vivaan puts her in…calls muskaan informing Saachi is not feeling well he is just going to drop her home..will be back in a while…

Throughout the ride…saachi's Fm radio was on…😆😆 kept on singing one song or the other…

Vivaan(mumbled to himself)– I wonder… tum wohi Saachi ho ya koi aur ho….kon ho tum…

Saachi heard it …& she went…

Aayi main to aayi, Nazaaron ke anjaane ek jahaan se
Laayi main to laayi baharon ke afsane, Bhi wahaa se

Na na mujhe chuu na na duur hi rehna…. PARI HOON MAIN


vivaan (laughs has a loving expression on his face) – haan pari toh tum ho… & Pari ji ab thodi der chup ho jao…& sit quietly… mera sar dukh raha hai.

Still she went on – sar jo tera chakraye, ya dil dooba jaye aja pyare paas hamre kahe ghabraye………
After few minutes out of the blue

Saachi—mujhe bookh lagi hai….

Vivaan(shocked)–what? Ab yaha bich raste main what u'll have? Chalo ghar chalkar I will order something… ok

Saachi—par mujhe pizza khana hai…

Vivaan– What??? 😲


Saachi–Pizza…Mr.Vivaan…round round hota hai…with vegetables, cheese &…

Vivaan(interrupted)– I know wot pizza is…par yaha kahan se laoonga …ghar chalkar I will make it for u…Happy…

Saachi (happy like a kid) –tum banaoge…tumhe aata hai…(moved closer…pulled his cheeks) how sweet…

Vivaan(smiled) --yes that I am… tabhi to tumhare itne torture ke baad tumhe ghar chodne ja raha hoon… its first time …pehle kabhi nahi kiya maine…

Saachi (curling up & closing her eyes) – hhmmm… life mein bahut cheese pehli baar hoti hai jaise pyaar.

Vivaan looks at her as she falls asleep.

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As they reached home…Vivaan tries to wake her but she just makes some grumbling noise…shakes his hands off her with "let me sleep" ….Sighing he comes around…carries her, reaches the elevator and sees a "out of order" sign… frustrated he kicks the elevator door which wakes Saachi up, she gives him a brilliant smile and snuggles to him wrapping her arms around him….

Vivaan(realizing she is awake)– sud I put u down, can you walk?

Saachi (mischievously shakes her head in negative) – mmm No…I am comfortable here.

Vivaan (smiles) – oh really, are you?? …You r just a lazy girl…who don't want to climb stairs.

Continues walking upstairs…

Vivaan(grumbled)– why did you have to take a flat on the 6th floor?? Groundfloor pe nahi mila…

Saachi (giggles) – actually I wanted on the 14th but they dint have any…all was taken….(laughs)

Vivaan—in dat case…I wud have let you sleep in the car whole night…

Saachi(sweetly)– no you wouldn't… I am sure you wud still carry me up….(moving her finger on his face) I know…u are too sweet to do that….

Vivaan(tried to move away)– shut up Saachi…what u are doing…. I will drop u down this way…(already he was having tough time controlling himself they way she is almost seducing him)

Saachi (laughs) –No u wont… u are superrrmannn…. (continues to move her hand along his face and in his hair)

Vivaan (trying to move his face from side to side) – hey bhagwan aaj meri rkhsha karna… ab meri izzat aap ke haath mein hai.

Saachi– bhagwan ko kyon confuse karte ho… aaj tak kisi ladke ne unhe ye nahin kaha hoga…. 😆😆

Vivaan—ofcourse…….aaj tak kisi ke saath aisa hua bhi nahi hoga…a girl troubling an innocent boy…Upar chalo main tumhe batata hoon.

Saachi (oblivious to his threat) – haan haan chalo… hum baat karenge.

Vivaan(shook her head) – baat nahin… maine bola….forget it…

As they reach her flat…he asks for keys….puts her down opens it and pulls her inside… closes the door and leans on it to get his breath back…its been exhausting climbing 6 floors…

Vivaan– ab main bataoon tumhe….You've been driving me crazy all along…


Saachi (flirting) – hhhmmm bataooo…

Vivaan (scolding mockingly)– fine!! I was kidding now go & sleep….chup chap

Saachi (agreeing taking his hands)– yep yep!! lets go.

Vivaan (laughs pulls his hand back) – lets go matlab kahi picnic pe ja rahi ho… you go & sleep…I will see u tomorrow morning…

Saachi (sulked)– but I don't want to sleep

Vivaan– oh you don't want to sleep, then wat do you want to do?

Saachi—batau…(vivaan nodded waited for her to tell) mujhe tumse baat karni hai…I…I want to talk…

Vivaan—is waqt…hum subah baat karenge…abhi u go & sleep….

Saachi(childishly)—nahi mujhe abhi baat karni hai…

Vivaan(sighed)—fine…bolo…

Saachi(moved closer..& in low voice)—tumhe ek secret batana hai…infact bahut dino se batana hai…

Vivaan—what…?

Saachi –kisi ko batana nahi…shhh…….(vivaan nodded in yes.) tumhe batana hai …ki…ki..(moved to him…almost whispered in his ears) batana hai ki….I love you….(even before he cud register…she bought his head down and kissed him, he tried to move back but the door stopped him)

He tried to move back coz he knew she isn't her senses…she isn't realizing what she is doing…the drink must surely having its effect on her… Once more he tried to move back… but she didn't allowed… she held him firm, finally he kissed her back with the same fervor….

Saachi (breathless) –tumne sahi kaha tha…. Pehle bhi tumse pyaar kiya aur ab bhi…still Love u….u were right….(smiled) u are always right …

Vivaan (softly)– Saachi… you r not in your senses…(though he cudn't stop himself from smiling…but still a little doubtful) you don't know wot you are saying… that's the drink talking….

Saachi (placing her hands against his cheek…brushing it with her thumb) – no its not… I know wot I am saying….infact…main tumhe pehle batani wali thi…par tum…(with little anger) tum aur tumhara dancey dancey…

Vivaan—phir dancey dancey Saachi…😕😕 I guess… you sud sleep now, we'll talk tomorrow… Ok….

Saachi (holding his hands)—kal kyun…we can talk now… (giggled) like talking to you….I want to talk to you…. (came more closer to him)

Vivaan (exasperated moves her away )– Saachi… (almost pushed her away) ….don't do this to me, I can't take it anymore…. lets just say that I am only a man….

Saachi (giggles) – yes I know that….you are a very nice man…a superrrmann…. which is why I love you….

Vivaan (gives up) – all right I believe you… now go to your room…& sleep….

Saachi– don't leave me alone…. wot if I get scared….Come with me.

Vivaan (laughs) –Saachi…tum itne dino se yaha akeli reh rahi ho…you can't be scared….😆😆

Saachi's FM station went on again-- 😆😆

Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai,
Pyaar se phir kyoon darrta hai dil. Kehta hai dil rasta mushkil…. Maaloom nahin hai kahan manzil


Vivaan(laughed)– mujhe malum hai...right now… tumhari manzil sirf bedroom hai…….ok come on... main chalta hoon tumhare saath….

He walks her to the bedroom. Looks around…it's a nice bright room… with diff colored walls… what surprised him..seeing posters of Shahid kapoor… 😲😆

Vivaan (asks unbelievingly)–Saachi u like Shahid kapoor… (shrugged) shahid kapoor…wats their…

Saachi (threatens) – don't you dare say anything bout him…😡 I luv him….he is so cute…

Vivaan–maine kaha kuch kaha…I just meant…you are so childish…😆😆 .Abhi tak posters lagati ho…

Makes her lie on the bed and covers her with a duvet…. holds her hands…. Now go to sleep….I am here only…But she just keeps staring at him

Vivaan– Saachi pls sleep…. I am tired to… I also want to go back & sleep….sooner u sleep sooner I can leave…

Saachi (immediately) –ok.. lori suna do I will sleep…

Vivaan–what? Lori…God!! kaha phas gaya….😕😆 mughe lori wori nahin aati…chup chap so jao…

Saachi (giggled) – please…. please bas ek…(requesting) u sing so well …bas ek…plzzz…

Vivaan(laughed)– Ok…. (then we went) so ja rajkumari soja….😆

Saachi– no no not this one…. I like your husky voice….

Vivaan (laughs) –Saachi…why I feel like a radio station…koi farmaishi program chal raha hai… aur main husky voice kahan se laoon…😕😆 . I have only 1 voice…

Saachi—plzz…mere liye nahi ga sakte…plzz… sochlo warna main nahi soungi…(abt to get up).

Vivaan does not know how to deal her…still stops her from getting up – nahin nahin… tum so jao main gata hoon….(to himself) subah mein na tumko rulaya to mera naam Vivaan nahin😈 (laughed)

Saachi—kya hua…😕 gaane ko bola hasne ko nahi…

Vivaan goes– 😛😆

baat hai ye ek raat ki aap badlo pe lete the
wo yaad hai apne bulaya tha,sardi lag rahi thi apko,

Patli chandni lapete the, aur shawl mein khawab ke sulaya tha.

Ajnabi hi sahi, saans mein sil gayi, ajeeb hai ye zindagi ye zindagi ajeeb hai.

Meri nahin ye zindagi raqeeb ka naseeb hai.


Finally she dozes off….🥱 he lightly kisses her forehead… gets up looks at her one more time sleeping like a baby. 😊😊 He leaves closing the door of her flat behind him… smiling to himself …he doesn't know if Saachi will remember in morning what she had confessed…may be drink had too much effect on her… but still he felt happy with the confession….😃😃😃

As he reached home…Muskaan was still awake…asked him how saachi is…he just told how she mistakenly had a drink..she is ok & sleeping now… &rushed to his room…Muskaan was surprised why Vivaan was smiling & seemed happy abt something…she shrugged she will ask him in morning…

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Continued in next post 😊

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Whole night 'Vivaan rarely slept a wink'he was too much happy finally he wud be getting what he had wished for'.he promised himself he had troubled & hurted saachi so much in these 5 years he will make it for it surely'but first he needs to know whether Saachi remembers or not'

Finally giving up on sleep'he got up early in the morning'& reached Saachi's flat' he lets himself in her flat with the keys he had kept with himself last night'he had actually locked her inside'he feared if she wakes up in night & walks out of the house' Entering her house he goes to her bedroom finds her still sleeping.

Sitting on the couch there'.for minutes he sits there looking at her'finally he sees her stirring'he smiles to himself'& goes towards the bed & makes him comfortable there'& sits there reclining on the bed rest waiting for to wake up fully' after few minutes of stirring as Saachi gets up' first thing she sees is Vivaan'

Saachi (smiled sweetly)--good morning

Vivaan (smiled back) ' good morning' sweetheart.

Saachi (tried to get up with a force'but holded her head as it ached'mumbled to herself'stupid girl ab aankhen kholkar sapne dekhne lagi( hitting herself)'kisse goodmorning kar rahi hai'u stay alone here'u are dreaming'.

Vivaan (coming close to her) ' no darling' you are not dreaming' I am here' It's all real more real than ever. (tries to kiss her)

Saachi(shocked to see him there..almost pushes him back & instantly gets up from bed)'tum? Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho'.(furious) subah subah who bhi mere ghar mein'mere bedroom mein'how dare u Vivaan Singhania' (her head ached due to hangover) oww my head'. wot is happening to me'.(seeing him still sitting & smiling like a fool) tum has kya rahe ho'what u are doing here'tell me this is all a nightmare'

Vivaan (laughs) ' ab dream se nightmare ho gaya'dats so mean'

Saachi'mujhe kuch nahi sunna'just get out ' ya main chillau'😡😡

Vivaan(getting up & came towards her & in a very serious voice)'Saachi' don't tell me you don't remember anything?...(Saachi gave a confused look)'.tumhe yaad nahi '. Last night'(melodramatically) last night when you were in my arms you said it was the most awesome night of your life and now you don't remember anything'.

Vivaan was is dying to laugh at her expressions'😆😆😆 confused, angry, and scared all at the same time'.

Saachi (shaking her head pushing him away) ' I don't get this' why cant I remember anything, OMG my head, are you saying we'.. do you mean you & me' (she looked at him shocked)'..matlab hum' 😲😲 oh god'. (she covered her mouth) No'

Vivaan (came close teased her more almost whispered)--- what no'its all right' don't worry' I will handle it'but still

Before he cud complete Saachi furiously starts throwing her fist all over him'& almost shouting 'Vivaan, how cud you' I was drunk and you took advantage of that'. I knew you were a despicable man'. but I dint know you cud stoop so low'. Just get out of my house'.GET OUT, LEAVE 😡😡

Vivaan (calmly) 'Saachi 'just relax ' ab jo ho gaya us pe kya rona'. And yesterday I was not despicable' kal tumhi pata nahi kya kya bol rahi thi'u even kissed' And I did not take any advantage'. I dint do anything, jo kiya wo tumne kiya'.main to tumhe bata bhi nahin sakta. I wanted to go home after putting you in bed but you pulled me down with you and then'
😈 (turned the other way'if he looked at her face he may have cracked up)'' main to ghar jana chata tha, maine tumhe kitna mana kiya,(in most innocent voice) I actually pleaded with you'. I said it was all wrong but you said you dint care, you just wouldn't listen to anything I had to say and '. then I am just a man Saachi'. how much cud I take'.So if someone has to be upset it sud be me not you'

All blood drained from her face she is completely white'she sits on the bed her face in her hands crying profusely'.😭😭

Saachi'tum jao yaha se' 😡😡 please go, just leave me alone please' I don't want to see you, just leave'😡😡

Vivaan feels bad seeing her crying' he comes and sits next to her tries to take her face in his hands'.


Vivaan ' common Saachi just relax its all right'.don't cry'. Just look at me.


Saachi (crying more)' its not all right'. I feel like crap'. I feel like dieing, just leave me alone'. How did all this happen, why don't I remember anything. ..


Vivaan (laughs ) 'jab kuch hua hi nahi toh yaad kaise hoga'(but she continued crying)Saachi listen to me'. Please nothing happened I was just teasing you'.

but she was hysterical she was not listening to him she just kept crying --don't touch me, just leave me, please go.


Vivaan (hugs her to him) 'will u just listen to me once' I swear, main tum ko sula ke ghar chala gaya tha'😛😛 I just came back in the morning' but you tortured me a lot yesterday so I just thought I'll torture you a bit
😈'.now Please calm down'.tumhe yakeen nahi hai toh main tumhari di se baat karwau'I was at my home whole night'. 😊

Saachi (angry)--- so you were making all this up, Vivaan (smacked him) you are disgusting' how can you do this'. I hate you'. now I don't know wot to believe and wot not to believe'. I hate u'

Vivaan (laughs)'y'day u had something else to say'😛😛 & trust me'.I am not making up all of it, if you had had your way then all this would have been true'.😆😆 tumne party mein kuch pi liya tha'& u had been going all crazy'

She looks at him' and knows he was telling the truth' she is very embarrassed. She is remembering things bit by bit but hazy'.

Saachi (sheepishly)' I don't remember anything clearly'but it's very hazy and my head is splitting'. But all said and done I am not going to forgive you for wot you have done now' you don't know how I felt'.

Vivaan (teasing) ' aur mere saath jo kiya' you cant even start to guess how I felt... I sud have tortured you more but mughe daya aa gaya... I can't see you crying'.(in a serious tone) now just freshen up have a medicine for the hangover' you'll feel better (laughs) you might even remember everything'.aur nahi yaad aaya toh I will tell you'😛😆. I am just outside'

***


Half an hour later when she came out 'she found Vivaan in her kitchen'humming to himself' "pyaar hua ikraar hua(song saachi had sung last night) she came to ask if he needs help'but he refused'saying its almost done'

Minutes later'he came with the pizza'Saachi was surprised'

Saachi'yeh? Yeh sab kya hai'

Vivaan (sitting across)'shayad isse pizza kehte hai'aur yeh dekhne ki nahi khane ki cheez hai so shuru ho jao'& tell me how is it' di ko toh humesha bahut pasand aata hai..hope u also like it '.

Saachi'par is sab ki kya zarut thi'I mean'

Vivaan'kamaal hai kal toh zidd kar rahi thi..pizza khana hai'ab bana hai toh nakhre kar rahi ho'(Saachi was abt to say something) pehle BF khatam karo'then I will answer all ur questions'(smiled)

***

After finishing of breakfast they justsit quietly just looking at each other'both don't know wot to say'finally breaking the silence'

Vivaan' So,'where do we begin?


Saachi'ermm'(shrugged) matlab'

Vivaan (smiled) ' yesterday you said you love me' (after a pause) u said u love me still'

Saachi is zapped' she doesn't remember but then she thinks there is no point in lying to him'dats what she had planned since long that she wanted to say him after the party that she loves him'now its her bad luck that she confessed him in a drunk state' but she decides to get it off her chest completely'she doesn't want to go through the turmoil again & again'she doesn't want to wait anymore'she had already made a decision

Saachi (calmly nodded in yes) ' yes I do'. 😳😳

Its Vivaan's turn to be zapped he did not expect this'. he had thought she will deny it'. make excuses about being drunk and all that'

Vivaan'are u sure?

Saachi'ofcourse'more than sure of anything'infact '.i had wanted to say it much earlier par'mauka nahi mila'& now since the topic is up' I guess no point in denying'.(sighed)bahut socha hai is baare mein'& I guess I cant fight it anymore'. (added a little shyly)aur tum sahi the'still Love u'(smiled)

Vivaan (smiled)' I am always right'. In dat case'. I guess I can share the news with di'& unki treat bhi'

Vivaan explained how Muskaan had asked him for the treat & now she surely deserves it'

Vivaan (gets up)'ok'now I shud get going' you take off today'. sleep for some time, get over your hangover'. I'll see you later' (Saachi nodded'Vivaan was abt to leave then turned back)ermm uncle aunty aaj hi wapis aaenge'(saachi nodded in yes) ermm toh...(scratched his head) toh'is it ok agar di aur jiju ko baat karne ke liye aaj bheju'.

Saachi(blushed but still teased)'kyun? Badi jaldi hai shadi ki?

Vivaan(pulled closer)'kyun tumhe nahi hai?

Saachi (shrugged)'nahi, mujhe toh adat hai intezar karne ki'don't worry

Vivaan'oh god!! For how long u'll rub it along🥱🥱 'puri zindagi sunati rahogi iske liye'😆😆

Saachi'ofcourse, afterall yahi tumhari saza hai(pushed him back) aur jab tumhari marzi ho di-jiju ko bhej dena'

Vivaan(agreed)'ok'then will send him over dinner'

Later that day Aditya-muskaan met Saachi's parents & finalized everything'. Much to disappointment to Vivaan wedding was fixed 3 weeks later'

***

Vivaan utilized these 3 weeks in spoiling Saachi rotten he made sure she feels special in every way'..& gets the best of everything'😊😊 & ofcourse yes the poster of Shahid Kapoor poster got replaced by a new one'😉😉😆 & when Saachi got next morning her expressions were priceless'.😆😆😆 .

Saachi(as she woke up 'she was surprised)'OMG!! 😲😲 yeh sab kya hai? 😲😲 (she heard a voice near by)

Vivaan'subah subah itna kyun chilla rahi ho ghar ke sab log jag jayenge'

Saachi (shocked to seem him there)'tum ? 😲😲 tum yaha kya kar rahe ho'😲😲

Vivaan(moved closer)'nothing much'just watching my to be biwi sleeping'.😛

Saachi'whatever, par yeh sab kya hai? Koi dekhega toh kya kahega?

Vivaan(moving a strand of hair that had fallen)---kya kahenge 'yahi ki, tum apne hone wali pati se bahut pyaar karti ho 😈'aur jab gharwale ko tumhare Shahid kapoor ke poster se problem nahi hai toh I am sure isse bhi nahi hogi'😛😛

Saachi'par'

Vivaan(whispered)'now don't tell me 'tumhe mere poster se problem hai'& it stays here no matter what'😛.

Saachi(teased)'are we jealous Mr.Vivaan

Vivaan(moved closer)'ofcourse from now on, its only me who watches u sleep'😛😛 not any Shahid Kapoor' chahe who poster se hi kyu na ho'😛 (Saachi giggled'.Vivaan was abt to kiss when there was a knock on the door'Saachi panicked)

Saachi'tum 'tum jao yaha se'. lekin tum aaye kaise?😕😕

Vivaan(relaxed back)'badi jaldi pooch liya'😆😆 good u realized'but guess u 4got abt keys 😈(dangling her house keys)us din se hi mere paas hai 😉😆

Saachi (gaped at him)--yeh, yeh tumhare paas thi' maine inhe itna dhunda'finally I had to manage all these days with my duplicate keys'ab wapis do mujhe'.

Vivaan(mischeviously)'rehne do mere paas'waise bhi shadi ke baad tumhe zarut nahi padegi inki'😆😆 .kya karogi?at this moment apne bhai ko sambhalo so that I can safely walkout'or if u want I don't mind having breakfast here 😛😛 'after all sasural mein kuch alag hi importance hoti hai'nahi?😳😆

Saachi---tum 'arggh

Vivaan'soch lo'mujhse ladna'ya sabko explaination dena hai ki main yaha kaise aaya'.😈 then mujhe bhi explain karna padega chabi mere paas kaise aayi 😉😉

Saachi grumbled'& tackled Dheeraj '.& made Vivaan move out safely'. Though Vivaan had to face a series of questions from Muskaan where he went early morning' 😛😆

3 weeks later

Vivaan-Saachi had the grandest of wedding with Muskaan-aditya making sure that everything planned out lavishly' Wedding being attend by only family & close friends it was organized in their farmhouse in open air garden'..A flower decked mandap was set up in the middle of the garden'followed by a grand reception in the evening.

Muskaan got worried as suddenly rains started pouring'she was surprised to see Vivaan & Saachi smiling'

Muskaan'kamaal hai itni serious situation mein bhi tum dono ko hasi aa rahi hai'😕😆 I guess hume baki rituals thodi der baad karne chaiye lets wait for rain to stop'

Vivaan'let it be di'😊😊 hum yahi continue karenge'afterall humari lovestory aur barish ka purana connection hai'infact subah se barish nahi hui toh mujhe tension ho rahi thi'😆😆😆 jab bhi humari love story mein kuch important hota hai'barish honi zaruri hai'(to Saachi) right biwi'😛

Pandit (interrupted)'abhi biwi banne mein der hai'phere baki hai'

Vivaan'haan toh der kis baat ki hai... shuru hojaye pandit ji'

Pandit(surprised)'barish mein?😲

Vivaan'kyun? Koi problem hai, aap continue kijiye hume koi problem nahi hai' (pandit shrugged & continued...Vivaan moved closer to saachi whispered)'Dats called, barish tum aur main'

Saachi (nodded in no)'its Baarish aur hum '.(smiled)

********The End********

Hope part was OK... 🥱🥱...oops sorry this time i shud ask hope the FF was ok 🥱🥱🥱 many must be releived it ended finally 🥱🥱🥱...

Hope reading it was an Ok experience for all who have read & commented on the FF...

Once again a big thank you to every1 ...even the silent readers who have been part of this FF 😃😃 & beared the FF all this long...


keep Smiling 😊😃



Edited by -purnima- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
hi
the up is good but i am feeling sad as it got ended
anyways sachi talked to her mom about vivan confessing his love to her her mom told her that as its her life she have full right to take her decissiona dn they will support her
sachi who still love vivan decided that she will confess her love to him
but some thing always came btw them which prevent her from telling vivan about her feelings but at last she decided that after the party she will tell vivan about her decission about her feeling but by seeing sonia dancing with vivan sacchi became so jealous that she started drinking and vivaan who cared and love her very much became really worried he took her to her home but while they were going sachi who was not in her senses confessed her love to him and also tortered him by singing so many song
wow sachi u should go and meet anu kappor for next seasson antakshari host
anyways after torturing him with her songs she made him carried her all the way to her floor
oh my god poor vivaan he had to carry sacchi all the way in his arms
vivaan need any massage come to me i wil give u
but the next day incident reminds me of ddlj
wow vivaan he made her scared her
but cant cary it long as he cant see her tears ohhh so sweet
but now finally they married happily
i liked it
plzzz cont soon witr one more ff of urs as ur ffs are so good and touchy and pm me
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
A perfect ending to the fic... But it ended so soon... It was a awesome fic... I hope u start a new one soon... Loved the part where saanchi gets drunk n her song... Loved the poster thing no shahid kapoor for saanchi now... Ending was too sweet... Waiting for a new fic to start...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Hi Puri
Perfect ending for an amazing story 👏👏👏u cud have continued it but as a writer thats your decision.😃
Saachi finally accepted this truth that she is still in love with Vivaan and wanted to tell him soon.
She was reslly jealous to see Sonia dancing with Vivaan.
Saachi was actually behaving like a FM station😆😆😆 Non stop songs.
Saachi's confession was rather cute while she was drunk.Vivaan didn't knew whether he shud b glad or not.supposing she denied all in the morning.
She really tortured him alot ..Poor guy!!
Vivaan took his revenge but he cudn't continue with it as she started crying.😆😆
Vivaan and Saachi had a dream wedding and Adi and Muskaan did their best to make it perfect.😊
Rain and they have special connection.It plays an important part in their love story..😃
Waiting for the next fiction.😊
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
wonderful fic...! beautiful ending!!
waiting for a newer one now...😛

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