Mirage #3 Check note on pg 149 for next thread! - Page 98

With each and every chapter I'm just left in awe of Khushis sheer courage and determination to be with the man she loves..

brilliant - awesome - all of the secrets will now be in the open. next may be Aman's turn to reveal Shyam's plot and then Abbas's plot to be revealed and then Khalid bhai knowing Arnav singh Raizada.

damn I hope her determination does save him and she can save them both.

Wonderful update!!!!

hey not a sad ending...

WAIT! WHAT??? You're kidding right?

"And the ending was bound to happen
from the beginning of this FF"

what in the world am I supposed to make of this? no! this was the last part? but but what about aman? what does he finally do? kill arnav or tell him the truth? his little sister? what about arnav and bangkok? what about the marriage? what about arnav finding out about his father? what about khalid bhai and Abbas and their issues? what about the raizada Nani?
how can this be the end? please please don't end this! its one of the best things I've ever read, and there are still so many paths this story can take!

coming to this uupdate, khushi's determination to bring arnav out of the world of criminals one day was admirable! the stupidity of arnav to reveal important information to Abbas did bug me but i realized that arnav was nowhere near how shaatir Abbas is, the man is clever and arnav is a kid in front of him! lavanya's reaction to khushi's lie brought me to tears, I really adored the friendship the two girls shared and i have always felt that the worst breakup and the stupidest one among best friends is the one caused due to a man, and even though this story doesn't show it to be stupid concept I still feel for the best friends .

anyhow, just please don't end this!

Well i am a lot happy after reading the update.

After reading it i realised how difficult it must have been to write the fight between lavanya and khushi and khushi's way of saving her love, her life, arnav.

The last part of the chapter proved what a fabulous writer you are.

This is what is called love where one can go to any level to protect their loved ones.
The last scene fits well after arnav's declaration of his insecurities.
Only last night arnav declared about his insecurities and the next morning khushi lived up to her promise to protect arnav and always be with him.

Lovely update.

Originally posted by: loveydovey

"And the ending was bound to happen from the beginning of this FF"

What is this ^ supposed to mean lava?! Please don't tell me this is the last part of Mirage. If it is then it will be very very foolish of you bey 😡 Mirage still has much more potential to explore so many tracks. Lava please tell me this is not the ending. What about Aman and his family?! He wanted to kill Arnav right?! And will Arnav and Khushi get married or not?! Don't pull off such a stupid and act and end this here. I mean it.

And coming to the update... it was good but not one of your best parts. Maybe you could've explored more on Arnav's jealousy when he was drunk. I love to see him jealous :*

Their sexy conversation was prefect ;) Just the prefect amount of sexiness and naughtiness mixed together. And Lavanya is more intelligent than I ever gave her credit for 😆 I always thought she was a pure bimbo.

The last part was my favorite. I could understand Khushi's plight. She was torn between her friendship and her love. But I am glad she lied though. And I hope Arnav and Khushi together will be successful in tearing Arnav's strings with the criminal world.

P.S DO NOT END IT HERE. "SAMJHE?! YA SAMJHAOON?!"

LMAO HAHAHAHA

that was a fantastic update!

So much happened in just one chapter. You are going to kill all of us lava!

The biggest mistake you did with this ff was asking whether we want a sad ending or happy! That should have been a surprise for us and also, nothing would clouded your decision. But since you asked you now have our hearts in your hands. Jab dekho jab dhamki dete!

I dont think Arnav will take time to figure out whats up with Aman...at least thats what I think based on the Arnav I have understood. He is smart and sharp.

I really did not think he would fall into the path abhaas lay for him that night. But then Im assuming he wasnt on his toes because abhaas and khalid are brothers and also like abhaas says (I mean what lava makes abhaas say) he knew what arnav desperately wanted ---> ticket to Bangkok and that just totally melted him.

If he is losing his concentration because of Khushi thats not good. He will be putting himself and her in danger.


Poor Arnav he has the whole world behind him.

I know where Arnav and khushi should run away to...WATERUNDER11'S HOME!!! j/k lava wont let that happen *sniff* *sniff*

So you should send them down south to some forest/jungle in kerala. Just imagine them living in a tree house amongst the tall trees. Or a boat house! Water all around them and then forest after that...sighhh
Nobody will find them over there :-p

Anyways Arnav and khushi have abhaas, aman, shyam & unknown don and kashyap drama to deal with!

Good luck lava!


p.s you'll be needing a new thread soon!!! oh and I LOVE YOU and and and I LOVE LOVEY EVEN MORE (cant get over her comment!)